Will this pass submission?

[DryLips]

Got the answer. Thank you.

Thank you.

 

[DryLips]

Crap. I guess I screwed up.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

I think it’s OK. As noted, you can always revise.

 

[NotWise]

As I read it, the passage seemed likely to pass. To be even more careful, you might remove the character's numerical age.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Thank you.

Well, to aid others in a similar situation, what was the answer?

 

[DryLips]

It should be okay but if it’s kicked back, remove the age and time passage references.