Wildest, craziest, naughty sex scenes..

[Guest]

Thought this might be an interesting topic to bring up, discuss...and enjoy with one another.

I receive a fair amount of Feedback emails, especially when a new story of mine has posted. Of course I'm thrilled and delighted to receive them, and enjoy reading and responding to each and everyone, (unless they are anonymously written of course). And hopefully try and learn from those which are constructive critisisms of my work too. But...I digress here. The point I wanted to bring up was that after posting Ya Ya Dildohood - Chapter three, I received a substantial amount of feedback emails dealing specifically with my character's cumming through the screen-door scene.

What was interesting...to me at least, was the number of feedback emails this actually generated. A great number of people wrote to tell me how erotic this particular scene was, or how it was just dirty enough to be vulgarly exciting to them. And yes...I also got a few feedbacks from people telling me that I had a warped and depraved mind. LOL. Which is ok too...because I'm sure in some ways I do. But the point of writing, or the purpose behind trying to make a story entertaining, or at least note-worthy, is to create a situation, scene, or something memoriable that will stick in their mind. So maybe....my sex through a screen-door scene managed to do that for some people.

Anyway...the purpose of this thread is to perhaps explore, not just this particular scene, though I would love to hear what anyone else thought about it. But would also enjoy hearing from others of you who have either written or enjoyed reading a particular sex scene that really stood out and touched you emotionally, wheter in a good or bad way....either one.

Who knows....it might be rather exciting to read and share the best...and the worst sex scenes posted here.

I remain,

 

[TheWriter]

Probably the two favourites of my own are 1. from "Harem Ch.4", sucking beer from a girl's vagina, then leaving the bottle in her pussy before having drunken anal sex. 2. outdoor sex in "Two Days In The Sun", the idea of doing it under burning heat has some interest to me.

But I didn't receive an awful lot of useful feedback. In fact I don't think I received any useful feedback on anything I've posted here, if I have there hasn't been a lot of it.

One scene that I really liked when I read it was in a story called "Trapped!" by Rhianon. Two people trapped under a table covered by rubble from a house that has just succumbed to a hurricane. I read it and found it to be one of the best scenes I'd ever read, even gave it a five, sent the author a raving review and recommended it on the Story Feedback forum.

I've thought up some weird things and even read some weird things, but sometimes it's relatively ordinary, "straight" stuff that works best.

 

[Guest]

Interesting.......

Never tried beer, but I have enjoyed a Jell-O shooter that way. (Think she enjoyed it as much as I did).

I tend to think the most enjoyable sex-scenes are those that capture not only the essence of the moment, but that draw you in so that you can see, and almost feel what is happening. There are some really excellent writers on here that can do that. Which for me...(like you said) can make the "ordinary"...."extra-ordinary".


I remain,

 

[VeraGem]

I'm working on one now and actually wondering if it's too over the edge. What do you think about a wife confronting her cheating husband and his little plaything - then making the plaything into her slave while the husband is forced to watch?

 

[TheWriter]

VeraGem, I think I saw this movie. Seriously, it doesn't sound over the edge at all, but that depends on where the edge is of course. If for instance the wife gets really violent, then you might be jumping of the cliff altogether.

 

[Guest]

Jumping off into the unknown.......

To quote TheWriter:

".....then you might be jumping of the cliff altogether."

Didn't Butch and Sundance do that?

But seriously VeraGem, I agree with Thewriter here. The whole point of writing and posting on Literotica is to give each and everyone of us a chance to explore our imagination. Not every story I've written has been received well, and a lot of the times it's been based on content, story line, and what I 'personally' wanted to do with it. In those instances, I even got a few 'E''s from Lit, saying someone there liked it, but interestingly, those stories usually didn't do as well in the polls. Go figure.......

But the best writing by far, is when you have an idea in your head that just naws at you to put it down on paper. Whether you're on your way home from work, or sitting on the john when an idea comes to you. If you think it through, and want to work with it, then do it. Nine times out of ten, these become some of the best lines, scenes, or stories a person could write. At least they have been for me.

So whatever the idea....go for it!

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To sleep.........perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I remain,

 

[VeraGem]

This story's been sitting ten pages long on my hard drive for about six months now, and I can't decide if it's drivel or gold - depends on my mood. Now that you mention a movie, Writer, I'm starting to think 'Red Shoe Diaries'. This is not a good thing. Red shoe stories tend to center too much on killing; that's not where I intended to go.

Sandman, I know what you mean about getting an 'E.' It seems to be the kiss of death when it comes to voting results. Funny thing is I never went for the E, I just wrote what I wrote. The E's make the low votes easier to take though.

Overall I think it's a coin toss - maybe I'll just grab a bottle of Bordeaux and let it write itself.

 

[TheWriter]

Wow, someone QUOTED ME!!! That's never happened to me before.

I don't think I ever got E's (Editor's pick, isn't it?), but some stories I submitted had H's for a while, but then their ratings dropped below 4.30.

You're right VeraGem, it is a coin toss. Some stories are really great and they're just neglected by the public. Don't write it for them, do it for YOU.