Wife taken over and abused, whored ect

[slovak82]

So, I was thinking about quite HARD story with things going really far.

General ideas are as follow:
- no cuckold stuff
- wife is a mid age woman, very attractive but not really a bombshell, she works as a teacher in high school, totally classy in attire
- she is captured by a school gang member, who breaks her really hard and totally takes over
- she is being used hard by him and his mates, many photos and other stuff collected for blackmail purpose
- she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader; she is also constantly used for sex - quick blowjobs, anal, pussy sex, sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning - in school by gang
- while time passes gang leader takes more of her: she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
- she is living two lives: pretending to be a prim and proper, but whenever called she has to become a whore and toy.

There seems to be a lot for a single story. Im not sure if I can manage with such a big topic, but I guess it is worth a try. Another question, however, if something like this already exists? Anyone knows similar story? Id love to read it and see how it works, maybe also learn a bit.

 

[Rob_Royale]

There area few points that make this idea less plausible. Because the secret must be kept.

-she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader
-sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning
-she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
These things would be impossible to keep the affair secret.

I would do the following.
She's a college professor, married. As sexually repressed/neglected as they come until a handsome young man in her class smiles at her. She begins to fantasize about him and one day finds herself watching porn for the first time and masturbates wildly.

I'd make them college age, because it makes the young man more sexualy mature and he picks up on the signs that she's into him. He requests a conference with her in her office. The meeting is almost more than she can handle and at the end of the meeting, he smiles at her. "It's too bad you're my instructor, I'd like to take you out somewhere romantic and then back to my place."

The following days are pure hell for her, until she requests to see him again in her office. They have sex for the first time that day. The affair continues with him in her office or showing up late at her place. The first night they are at his place, they are making out on the couch when another man walks in. At first she's surprised but when her man explains it's just his roommate, she relaxes a bit, but the roommate is also very attractive and her mind immediately imagines the three of them together.

That very night it happens and it's the most thrilling night of her life. Two gorgeous men fucking her like she belongs to them she realizes she's totally fine with that idea. The first time he asks her, "Are you my little whore?" she nearly comes unglued, admitting that she is and will do whatever he wants as long as they keep fucking her like they have been.

It's not long before more men are involved and her first gangbang is nothing short of epic.

It's a simple cheating story now, without including cruelty or abuse which tends to turn readers off. She still has agency and a measure of control and you can really drive home, the 'two lives' thing. Have her hiding a bag in her car with lingerie and restraints and all the toys she needs for her dark rendezvous.

In a lot of ways she sees this as her in control with a harem of young men eager to please her. The young men see it the other way around, but they make sure she always cums her brains out so she never feels used and loses her taste for the situation.

 

[lovecraft68]

This idea should be reported as the story itself will be if it's ever written.

 

[Rob_Royale]

This idea should be reported as the story itself will be if it's ever written.

True, but it was written by someone who knew it likely would be as it's a nine year old account with two posts. The post screams alt account. I tried to steer it in a less rapey direction.

 

[slovak82]

There area few points that make this idea less plausible. Because the secret must be kept.

-she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader
-sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning
-she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
These things would be impossible to keep the affair secret.

I would do the following.
She's a college professor, married. As sexually repressed/neglected as they come until a handsome young man in her class smiles at her. She begins to fantasize about him and one day finds herself watching porn for the first time and masturbates wildly.

I'd make them college age, because it makes the young man more sexualy mature and he picks up on the signs that she's into him. He requests a conference with her in her office. The meeting is almost more than she can handle and at the end of the meeting, he smiles at her. "It's too bad you're my instructor, I'd like to take you out somewhere romantic and then back to my place."

The following days are pure hell for her, until she requests to see him again in her office. They have sex for the first time that day. The affair continues with him in her office or showing up late at her place. The first night they are at his place, they are making out on the couch when another man walks in. At first she's surprised but when her man explains it's just his roommate, she relaxes a bit, but the roommate is also very attractive and her mind immediately imagines the three of them together.

That very night it happens and it's the most thrilling night of her life. Two gorgeous men fucking her like she belongs to them she realizes she's totally fine with that idea. The first time he asks her, "Are you my little whore?" she nearly comes unglued, admitting that she is and will do whatever he wants as long as they keep fucking her like they have been.

It's not long before more men are involved and her first gangbang is nothing short of epic.

It's a simple cheating story now, without including cruelty or abuse which tends to turn readers off. She still has agency and a measure of control and you can really drive home, the 'two lives' thing. Have her hiding a bag in her car with lingerie and restraints and all the toys she needs for her dark rendezvous.

In a lot of ways she sees this as her in control with a harem of young men eager to please her. The young men see it the other way around, but they make sure she always cums her brains out so she never feels used and loses her taste for the situation.

So I agree that this story is less nonconsent and has less abuse. While I admit that I like it, currently Im looking for something more hardcore. Thanks for responding and spending time to give some hints, but I guess it is less of what Im looking for. But maybe the overall sum of abuse / cruelty is to be readjusted. I will think of it. Maybe I resing from something but still keep it extra spicey.

Besides, there are plenty of nonconsent stories on literotica with lots of abuse ect. Im not sure if they are really that non popular if so many people write them. Is there any general idea on this forum that we pretend that only nice and prim stories are accepted? I have never used this forum before. If this is the point, I get it.

 

[wouldloveto]

True, but it was written by someone who knew it likely would be as it's a nine year old account with two posts. The post screams alt account. I tried to steer it in a less rapey direction.

And I, for one, thank you for that...
I like your alternative quite a bit. I was trying to come up with something similar...

 

[Rob_Royale]

Is there any general idea on this forum that we pretend that only nice and prim stories are accepted? I have never used this forum before. If this is the point, I get it.

Not at all. But the OP contains the following: kidnapping, forced prostitution, blackmail, physical abuse, theft and gang rape. Which are all felonies if I'm not mistaken. You can't compare that to the average non-con story and say they are the same. The story you suggested would never get posted here. There's no way a woman would go through that and say she enjoyed it.

To that end, we DO NOT publish works of any type featuring the following content:

• Ravishment/non-consent fantasies in which the “victim” receives no thrill or enjoyment from the acts, or is seriously and/or permanently physically harmed/abused/maimed/killed.

 

[wouldloveto]

Not at all. But the OP contains the following: kidnapping, forced prostitution, blackmail, physical abuse, theft and gang rape. Which are all felonies if I'm not mistaken. You can't compare that to the average non-con story and say they are the same. The story you suggested would never get posted here. There's no way a woman would go through that and say she enjoyed it.

Perfect, informative, and gets the point across without being judgmental. Leave that to me:
Any story, or floating of an idea, that includes kidnapping, forced prostitution, blackmail, physical abuse, theft and gang rape repulses me and I immediately think badly of the one presenting such hurtful garbage.
That is my stance!

 

[wildp]

So, I was thinking about quite HARD story with things going really far.

General ideas are as follow:
- no cuckold stuff
- wife is a mid age woman, very attractive but not really a bombshell, she works as a teacher in high school, totally classy in attire
- she is captured by a school gang member, who breaks her really hard and totally takes over
- she is being used hard by him and his mates, many photos and other stuff collected for blackmail purpose
- she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader; she is also constantly used for sex - quick blowjobs, anal, pussy sex, sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning - in school by gang
- while time passes gang leader takes more of her: she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
- she is living two lives: pretending to be a prim and proper, but whenever called she has to become a whore and toy.

There seems to be a lot for a single story. Im not sure if I can manage with such a big topic, but I guess it is worth a try. Another question, however, if something like this already exists? Anyone knows similar story? Id love to read it and see how it works, maybe also learn a bit.

DM me and will tell you a similar topic story I had but never got it published

 

[slovak82]

Not at all. But the OP contains the following: kidnapping, forced prostitution, blackmail, physical abuse, theft and gang rape. Which are all felonies if I'm not mistaken. You can't compare that to the average non-con story and say they are the same. The story you suggested would never get posted here. There's no way a woman would go through that and say she enjoyed it.

the general idea about the story says nothing about how the story is driven. So, from my perspective, as long as "victim" actually feels okay with the stuff it is okay. Stories posted on literotica have very little to do with reality. These are just stories. And while I mostly read "loving wives" stuff, I also like to read "nonconsent" from time to time and Im pretty sure I read very harsh, and very abusive stories... so I guess they do get posted here.

Only point I agree with you is that woman would not enjoy such abuse in real life. That is it.

 

[Kinkyhelenspencer]

So, I was thinking about quite HARD story with things going really far.

General ideas are as follow:
- no cuckold stuff
- wife is a mid age woman, very attractive but not really a bombshell, she works as a teacher in high school, totally classy in attire
- she is captured by a school gang member, who breaks her really hard and totally takes over
- she is being used hard by him and his mates, many photos and other stuff collected for blackmail purpose
- she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader; she is also constantly used for sex - quick blowjobs, anal, pussy sex, sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning - in school by gang
- while time passes gang leader takes more of her: she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
- she is living two lives: pretending to be a prim and proper, but whenever called she has to become a whore and toy.

There seems to be a lot for a single story. Im not sure if I can manage with such a big topic, but I guess it is worth a try. Another question, however, if something like this already exists? Anyone knows similar story? Id love to read it and see how it works, maybe also learn a bit.

Yeah like where you going with the story

 

[Kinkyhelenspencer]

There area few points that make this idea less plausible. Because the secret must be kept.

-she becomes a whore to the gang, has to work on streets or take customers wherever needed - all money earned she gives to a gang leader
-sometimes more hardcore stuff like whipping, canning
-she has to give him access to her bank account and even has sex with him or his friends in own martial bed
These things would be impossible to keep the affair secret.

I would do the following.
She's a college professor, married. As sexually repressed/neglected as they come until a handsome young man in her class smiles at her. She begins to fantasize about him and one day finds herself watching porn for the first time and masturbates wildly.

I'd make them college age, because it makes the young man more sexualy mature and he picks up on the signs that she's into him. He requests a conference with her in her office. The meeting is almost more than she can handle and at the end of the meeting, he smiles at her. "It's too bad you're my instructor, I'd like to take you out somewhere romantic and then back to my place."

The following days are pure hell for her, until she requests to see him again in her office. They have sex for the first time that day. The affair continues with him in her office or showing up late at her place. The first night they are at his place, they are making out on the couch when another man walks in. At first she's surprised but when her man explains it's just his roommate, she relaxes a bit, but the roommate is also very attractive and her mind immediately imagines the three of them together.

That very night it happens and it's the most thrilling night of her life. Two gorgeous men fucking her like she belongs to them she realizes she's totally fine with that idea. The first time he asks her, "Are you my little whore?" she nearly comes unglued, admitting that she is and will do whatever he wants as long as they keep fucking her like they have been.

It's not long before more men are involved and her first gangbang is nothing short of epic.

It's a simple cheating story now, without including cruelty or abuse which tends to turn readers off. She still has agency and a measure of control and you can really drive home, the 'two lives' thing. Have her hiding a bag in her car with lingerie and restraints and all the toys she needs for her dark rendezvous.

In a lot of ways she sees this as her in control with a harem of young men eager to please her. The young men see it the other way around, but they make sure she always cums her brains out so she never feels used and loses her taste for the situation.

Wow brilliant idea for a story

 

[Rob_Royale]

Wow brilliant idea for a story

Thank you. MILF stories are my thing and I enjoy writing them.

 

[Kinkyhelenspencer]

Well would you class me as milf 46