Wife on stage- anyone help?

[thepeb69]

hi,
I have have a fantasy (a few actually) about my wife. I have tried to write a story about it but the story doesn't have an affect on me. I feel it should be written by someone else. I don't know if that is strange but that is how i feel. If i give you all a brief synopsis of the fantasy i wonder if anyone would feel it worth a go?

Scenerio

Me and my wife go to amsterdam for weekend
married for ten years good sex life no straying

we visit a show as a bit of a giggle
she is drunk
she gets ushered onto stage
an actor shows her his cock
much bigger than mine
other men are invited on stage all bigger than me
she has to play with them and measure them
she the has to masturbate for them
Then (maybe weird) I am asked to show everyone my cock 5" thin each then mark a ring on their cocks with a pen 5" up thir cocks from the tip. ie whatever is left on thier dick is the extra inches that she hasnt felt.
they each put their cocks in. An announcer is there asking her questions all the way through the performane that the audiance can hear.
there is also a big screen that shows close ups to the audiance.
She cums loads during the performance

Must be slow reluctance to becoming seduced then begging for it.
her face is glazed with lust looking and feeling the large cocks.

she looks at me during performance for my permission.
she tells everyone that the mens cocks are all bigger than mine and all feel amazing
sorry that this is a bit disorganised but it comes into my head that way and is why i find it difficult to write it.

please can anyone turn this into a great story?

Cheers
peb

ps i have other ideas !!

 

[emap]

Hmmmm, that actually would be interesting, but of course your forgetting something. The husband wouldn't be left sitting there watching, he'd be up there laying next to his wife with women hopping on him and answering questions to.

Perhaps not what you want, but if they are going to do something like that, they get both partners involved. that way, the wife and husband both have an easier time saying yes, I also beleive they ask permission first. Amsterdam is really open sexually, but they don't allow rape still.

 

[thepeb69]

thats not my fantasy though

emap thanks for your reply but the husband being involved wouldn't do it for me. it is all about an innocent wife being seduced on stage while her husband looks on not being able to do anything but watch and getting very turned on and will cum later on that is what does it for me. if the husband is partaking on stage then it wouldnt be the same for me. This is a fantasy afterall

 

[emap]

Honestly it's an odd one, not that often I hear about a guy wanting his wife to get fucked by guys with bigger dicks. Heck I'd say i wish mine had that one, but lord I so couldn't handle a bigger than him.

Though I have to admit it's interesting, and sorta leads into one of my favorites, mulitple partners.

However sad to say you will have to find another person to write it, I got way to much as it is, darn me and my big writing mouth.

 

[Texguy84]

Honestly it's an odd one, not that often I hear about a guy wanting his wife to get fucked by guys with bigger dicks.

Actually, a recurring theme when I'm masturbating to my own imagination is various girls I like being taken by very well endowed men, two or three at a time. I'd never want that to happen in real life, but it's a hell of a powerful image for fantasy

 

[emap]

Huh I guess I'm spoiled rotten, my guy being the first actual long term relationship he's the only one I've talked to about fantasies and he doesn't have that one. Though suppose his size is the reason.

Anyway come on somebody has gotta see the good side of this one besides me, the last time I did an idea out of the forums I worked on it for a year.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Maybe it's an "online fantasy" only, but I have heard of many men who enjoy the idea, at least, of his woman fucking other men, especially men with larger cocks. I have a feeling it may be something that the man would not want within his real life, though.

It is an interesting story idea. Having never been to Amsterdam before (and for those who know me know I like to add as much realism and accuracy to anything I write), I'm not sure if you're talking about the couple going to a "common" sex show or not.

Have you ever been, or is this all strictly fantasy from your mind?

 

[Fantasies_only]

hi,
I have have a fantasy (a few actually) about my wife. I have tried to write a story about it but the story doesn't have an affect on me. I feel it should be written by someone else. I don't know if that is strange but that is how i feel. If i give you all a brief synopsis of the fantasy i wonder if anyone would feel it worth a go?

Scenerio

Me and my wife go to amsterdam for weekend
married for ten years good sex life no straying

we visit a show as a bit of a giggle
she is drunk
she gets ushered onto stage
an actor shows her his cock
much bigger than mine
other men are invited on stage all bigger than me
she has to play with them and measure them
she the has to masturbate for them
Then (maybe weird) I am asked to show everyone my cock 5" thin each then mark a ring on their cocks with a pen 5" up thir cocks from the tip. ie whatever is left on thier dick is the extra inches that she hasnt felt.
they each put their cocks in. An announcer is there asking her questions all the way through the performane that the audiance can hear.
there is also a big screen that shows close ups to the audiance.
She cums loads during the performance

Must be slow reluctance to becoming seduced then begging for it.
her face is glazed with lust looking and feeling the large cocks.

she looks at me during performance for my permission.
she tells everyone that the mens cocks are all bigger than mine and all feel amazing
sorry that this is a bit disorganised but it comes into my head that way and is why i find it difficult to write it.

please can anyone turn this into a great story?

Cheers
peb

ps i have other ideas !!

That's a good start.
With a bit spicing up, I bet it would be really good.
The first problem I see is the mention of "cock" in too many places all in a row.
When measuring the penis, one must consider the foreskin "sock" on an uncircumsized penis (foreskin doesn't count).
I think a circumsized one would look better to the characters as well.

Maybe we could have a little inscest in this, such as a daughter sucking on her father's dick (term nice change from "cock").

 

[Fantasies_only]

A good theme would be somewhat of a twist on this.
Have some voyeurs go from house to house watching entire families (not at the sime time) fuck each other (and/or use sex toys on each other).

Monday - Son to mom
Tuesday - Daughter to mom
Wednesday - Son and twin girls to mom
Thursday - Father and mother to son and twin girls
Friday - Father to all daughters (18+)
Saturday - Mother to all sons (18+)
Sunday - Sex in church (good for naughty catholic schoolgirl theme)

 

[thepeb69]

Thanks for all the replies.
No I definately wouldnt want it to happen in real life. And in truth I am bigger than my fantasy portrays. It is just a fantasy.
Actually we are going to amsterdam for a weekend soon and i will try to get us into a sex show just to see what happens not that i want my wife to go on stage!
The reason for my original post though was to see if anybody was willing to take up the idea and make a story on it. I understand that it is time consuming but just maybe there is someone out there who is on the same wavelength as me and is able to put togeter a great story?

 

[jeninflorida]

interesting, never been there or a place as wild. for me, one has to go with moment and before she realizes it she is holding some man. i'm not sure how this would work, or how it would work for me. also, if you do publish a story like this, get ready for some negative feedback. i would keep away from a cuckold theme, as you can stay on your topic and have a positive relationship between husband and wife, even with her on stage

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Thanks for all the replies.
No I definately wouldnt want it to happen in real life. And in truth I am bigger than my fantasy portrays. It is just a fantasy.
Actually we are going to amsterdam for a weekend soon and i will try to get us into a sex show just to see what happens not that i want my wife to go on stage!
The reason for my original post though was to see if anybody was willing to take up the idea and make a story on it. I understand that it is time consuming but just maybe there is someone out there who is on the same wavelength as me and is able to put togeter a great story?

Like I said, I prefer to add realism in stories I write. It's why I asked some questions. It is a nice theme. Could make for some juicy tales.