Wife, mind control, grant wish, slut story

[mulliganplummer]

Ok first time posting here, but I would love to see a story about a husband that either through a wish or mind control can turn his wife into a true slut. I have to admit I love stories that have body modifications in them (implants, piercing, tattoos, etc).

I would like to see a nice long story about a husband really going to the extreme, maybe getting her family to fight the changes, but he does them anyway. The story would really be about the wife going through the changes, maybe kind of reluctantly. The people around the husband/wife not liking the changes. Maybe the husband can create a wish list of changes and the story end when he finally has the perfect extreme slut.

Just and idea.

 

[Hypoxia]

OK, so write the damn thing. That way, it'll be just what you want.

If you aren't comfy writing fiction, try this: Have you ever kept a diary or journal or blog, where you record events and ideas? Write your story the same way. Visualize the events and write them down. Pretty soon, you're an author!

 

[jeninflorida]

what if a wife needs more sex, and uses mind control to remove the 'stick' from her conservative husbands ass?

she's been working out and has never felt better...sure she still has some issues with her body image but she wants to have some fun

 

[CapnCuddly]

I'm down to help cowrite something along these lines if you get a thread started.

 

[DarkPleasures]

I'm down to help cowrite something along these lines if you get a thread started.

Hse did get a thread started. A Story Idea thread.

 

[lovecraft68]

I think a petition should be created to change the name of this thread from story ideas to

Stories about women being modified, degraded, raped, tortured, enslaved, humiliated, raped, gang raped, raped, did I say rape?

Every idea in this forum either starts that way or somehow-no matter how light and fun the plot idea is-turns into rape.

Now have an idea about some piece of shit having his cock cut off and then we get in trouble with the mod who has declared the rape rule "unarguable" on a freedom of speech site.

Guess the hypocrisy of having a "rape rule" and a non consent section gets tiresome when it keeps getting pointed out.

 

[Sean Renaud]

As my esteemed colleague has pointed out this is a rape story, not even really a particularly creative one.

It seems like a bit of wasted effort with the mind control.

 

[thekeenreader]

The mind control theme could be used to liberate someone who is sexually repressed rather be utterly non-consenting and dark

 

[CapnCuddly]

Honest question, as it has been years for me: When did Lit get so touchy about rape fantasy stories?

 

[Hypoxia]

Shall I say it? I dislike stereotypical MC stories because they're too easy to write. Anything goes -- reality need not infringe -- the author can just pull magic out their ass and publish it. Feh. (And I don't bother with rape fantasies -- too sloppy, story-wise.)

IMHO a worthwhile story needs to bump-up against limits. A quid pro quo makes a tale more dramatic. Try this: MC has a cost. Every time a controller forces their puppet to act, the controller loses some brain power, or sports a cerebral hemorrhage, or loses some of their mind inside their puppet's. Magic must COST, else it's just sloppy shit. Sloppy shit is OK for strokers. I just won't bother reading.

So let's take this scenario: A would-be puppet master invents a mental amplifier, looking very like a Bluetooth headset. With it, they can consciously direct the immediate actions of a puppet -- but at the cost of a bad headache, so they save that tactic for specific occasions. Or they can choose to subtly change a target's attitudes and general behaviors, such as boosting a lover's libido and dropping inhibitions, thus creating a slut of either gender -- but those same changes occur in the puppet master's own psyche, maybe the same direction, or maybe just the opposite. Create a slut, and become either sluttier themselves, or lose their libido to their puppet.

NOW we have a story! How much pain or frigidity / impotence will the puppeteer be willing to undergo, to gain a compliant puppet? Results can be comedic, tragic, hot-hot-hot, or whatever, depending on the storytelling.

Twist: The puppet discovers the mental amplifier and uses it on the inventor. Hilarity ensues.

Another twist: Mental amp shorts-out, or feedbacks, or otherwise malfunctions with unpredictable results. Yet more hilarity ensues -- like, politically conservative targets turn socialist. Or racists turn into minority-lovers. Or PETA activists develop a taste for BBQ kitten-burgers. Groovy.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That sounds like a typical mind control story.