Wife meets Master type at party

Ster001

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I hope this works this time. I have a story I would like someone to consider writing for me. This is my first time making such a request, so I am not sure of the detail I need to submit. I will give as much detail as possible though.

Not to be picky, but I don't want a story that just jumps right into the "sex", but rather one that deals with the "mind foreplay" first. One that builds up so to speak. Then gets into the heat of things.

My wife has a fantasy about being dominated by a "master/controller" type. She is not into pain per say, like leather, whips, nipple clamps etc. More into being handled roughly and spanked. We have talked openly about this fantasy, but have left it as just that, fantasy. There is some fear with the situation for her, and she resits this man at first. Also, there is a part of her that doesn't want anyone to know about her submissiveness to him, but the danger of some one finding out drives her crazy with lust.

By the way, we are in our late thirties, she is 5'7" 140#'s or so, dark brown hair, stunning blue eyes, a 36c-27-40, very suckable nipples, and one heck of a nice ass.

The master type is a normal older man, not someone you assume is a DOM. He is white, smooth, well dressed, well educated, rich, aggressive and very "cocky" in every sence of the word. (hint, hint) There is a sense of "perversion" and "power" to this man, but not something you notice right away. He takes what he wants from you and you willing submit without really knowing. (not mind control)

The story would take place at a party in an older home. There would be about 20 to 25 people attending. Most of them we would not know, but there are a few "friends" there also.

During the evening we would be talking to different people. At some point she would be talking to this couple in which the man is our master type. The conversation would turn to sex. The "master/contoller" would pick up on a vibe that my wife wants to be dominated/taken. He tells before walking away from her that "before the night is over, she will be on her knees sucking his cock!" And says it loud enough for a couple standing close by to hear. My wife is truly shocked by this statement, but say nothing to deny this man. Unknown to her or the master I over hear the conversation.

I watch both of them for a while as they move their seperate ways into the party. Unknown to both my wife and I, this master type does this kind of thing all the time. He actually has "followers' that attend the same events or parties with him. Just in case he is able to find someone like my wife. As I watch him he makes his way to talk with a couple of the "followers" and tells them he might have something "lineup" for the night. My wife meanwhile does her best to hide her excitement/fear.

After some time has passed, the "master" seeks out my wife. He tells her he is going up to a room on the 3rd floor, right down the hall from where the guests coats are being kept. She is to wait 5 minutes and them follow him, because it is time for her to suck on his cock. If she is late she will be punished.

Myself and the "one in the know" watch this brief encounter and notice my wife struggling with her decsion. After just a few moments, she makes her way up the stairs. At this point maybe the story can be told by her or the master.

With each stair her fear and excitement build. She actually talks out loud to herself, saying things like, "I can't believe I am doing this!" Am I really going to suck this strangers cock, right here while the party is going on down stairs??" Did anyone see me come up here? Did my husband see me follow this man?

A few minutes later I follow..as I reach the second floor landing I hear her being spanked and the moans of her desires. (by the way, she was late in meeting her "master."

OK..here are the items I would like to see from this point.

a. She is told to strip
b. She is spanked before the "main event" and during.

c. She is made to suck a few of the "followers." Which she is VERY good at) Lots of cock sucking! And they all don't need to have massive cocks, save that for the master and our black stud, see below.

d. One of the followers is older...maybe in his 50's. An old dirty man if you will.

e. She is talked dirty to by the master and the followers. (i.e, suck that cock, bitch!) ( they follower tell the master that he found the best yet!)

f. She has her face, pussy and ass spanked with wet cocks and hands.

g. One of the followers is a 20ish year old black man with a large package.( who some of the followers are there to see in action) He is the only one that actually takes her anally, except for the next follower.

h.one follower is a woman, a butch type. She is the roughest of the group with her, even though our black stud gives her a fucking of a lifetime. She takes her with a strap-on. As a side note, I imgine this woman knowing my wife for sometime, and actually put the "moves" on her early in the party, maybe just before she is told to go upstairs, but is rejected and now has the chance to make my wife pay for blowing her off. The butch is somewhat pretty, just not overly manly.

i. Each "follower comes to the room one at a time, until there are 3 or 4 followers, plus the butch type.

j. At some point others come upstairs and find the "show" going on, which can be someone we both know. Maybe during our black studs turn? Not the whole party mind you, just a few.

OK...LOL...I should just write the story myself, but cannot seem to bring it all together.

:p
 
Now this idea has a good chance of being taken up by an author.

It has all the plus items to encourage that:

1 You registered before posting the idea.
2 It is not just a one line concept.
3 The ideas are formulated in a basic scenario layout.
4 The author is offered choices.
5 You admit to having difficulties writing it yourself.
6 It is expressed clearly and grammatically.

I suspect that it will be taken up soon; if you are lucky you will be credited with the idea.

If you would like to work on it yourself, there are a number of authors here who will help you to develop it.

Ignore anyone who says it is too long, or too detailed; they are merely jealous.
 
Thank you for taking the time to write me. I do hope someone comes forward and agrees to write it. Would love to share the story with my wife.
 
You have some well thought out ideas here. I enjoy these kinds of stories when the mental aspect is explored as well.

My question would be is this the exact story you wish to see? - maybe just need help getting it all together or are you looking for someone to write it. I may be able to write along these lines (though I'm not sure I would include all the above mentioned ideas - or in that context) - but possibly close.

kristy
 
First, let me thank you for reading my request and getting back to me. I am not opposed to the story line being a little different as long as the core is still there. But beggers can't be....

I am looking for someone else to write it. I have made a couple of attempts myself and tend to get "lost." I just want the core of the story to remain, due to it is the fantasy my wife and I have shared.

I have quickly read some of your stories. I found them exciting. There is a just below the surface "dark" side to them. I like that! "Tell me about your wife" was very well done. I still need to read the 2nd part.

You mentioned leaving part of the ideas out. Which ones? Either way, I would love to hear more of your thoughts or even read your version of this idea. I agree whole 100% about the mental aspect, it is a must for this story. ( This is where I have the most trouble getting my thoughts from mind to paper)

I am not sure how we can chat...do we just respond back and forth on here. Which seems to the logical choice to me. Please let me know where we go from here.

Again, thank you for your time.
 
I can work on an outline of what I could write as far as this story and pm it to you. Then we could try to make the changes and see if it all fits together.

I will work on it soon.

kristy

ps...and thanks for your comments *smiles*
 
Just wanted to write a note that I completed this story and it is now posted - You Are Invited

I do also thank Ster001 for being so specific in what details he wished to see written.

And as a final note - Much kudos go to the writers in this section who take on requests. I found this to be interesting and challenging to write - especially when trying to capture someone else's ideas instead of following one's own.

kristy
 
I must say that say that KristyDoll did an outstanding job with my idea. All my expection were met beyond belief.
 
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