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In a work in progress, I say this: "She shyly looked at the pretty face across the counter."
The next paragraph contains, "Ro hadn't realized until that moment that there wasn't a counter between them this time."
Yeah ... no.
The next paragraph contains, "Ro hadn't realized until that moment that there wasn't a counter between them this time."
Yeah ... no.
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