Why no action/adventure or thrillers?

BlackSnake

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Why isn't there a fast paced action/adventure/thriller erotica category?

When the girl thanks her hero, she rocks his world. Sex & Violence
 
BlackSnake said:
Why isn't there a fast paced action/adventure/thriller erotica category?

When the girl thanks her hero, she rocks his world. Sex & Violence


well for one thing, the story would take too long to develope, and most male readers would lose interest
 
jeninflorida said:
well for one thing, the story would take too long to develope, and most male readers would lose interest


things blowing up on paper isn't as fun as things blowing up on screen? ;)
 
jeninflorida said:
well for one thing, the story would take too long to develope, and most male readers would lose interest

Are you implying we have no attention span, or that we pop too quickly? :D

I think such a category would work if a high enough percentage of the story had an overriding erotic element to it. I imagine a "James Bond" type scenario is what you would be talking about? To work here it would probably have to have a much more suggestive sexual plot. Perhaps instead of 007 being sent to destroy the typical evil genuis with a death ray bent on world destruction, Bond kissing one or two scantily clad women during the course of the story, instead he is ordered to rescue 1000 virgins from a raving maniac, and to ensure they were alright and intact he's given explicit instructions to examine each one and every one of them... hmmm where do I sign up for the lead role?
 
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I too would be interested in such a category, if it's done right. I've used action elements in my stories a few times and they're always fun. Look in The Rendezvous for a fight scene; Fear, Lust, and Vanity for a car chase; X-Men Additional Aftermath for superheroic feats... Did I mention all these stories also feature hot sex? :D
 
SelenaKittyn said:
things blowing up on paper isn't as fun as things blowing up on screen? ;)

That's sexist bullshit!

Things blowing up are fun no matter where it happens!

Never underestimate the power of blowing things up when it comes to the masculine psyche!
 
Sex&Death said:
That's sexist bullshit!

Things blowing up are fun no matter where it happens!

Never underestimate the power of blowing things up when it comes to the masculine psyche!


Well then, where are all the action/adventure erotic stories?!? :D

I always wanted to see the actual sex scene from Raiders between Indiana and Marion... :devil:

but if he had wanted to blow up Willie (Kate Capshaw) from Temple of Doom that would have been just fine with me... blech, that woman... :rolleyes:
 
given the ideas people are throwing out, is it possible that the celebrity category includes action/adventure stories? :>

ed
 
Yes, the celeb category includes erotic adventure stories. I have seen a few. I also want to note that I agree completely on Indy's women.
 
well we can hardly talk about indy's women w/out mentioning the lovely alison doody from indiana jones and the last crusade. i mean, dang...consider the BDSM possibilities! :D

ed
 
I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one that finds this idea interesting.

I think that if the story begin like good short stories right in the middle of the action, then there's no worries about a slow build up.

sex go hand-in-hand with action, in my opinion. Get the fighters fighting and the prize is a hot babe waiting to show her gratitude.

I'm working on a piece where the hero breaks in killing the bad guys to rescue a captive who had been sexed and tortured. They barely escape with their lives. This is just the prologue.

In the first chapter, the hero is recovering at a friend's place from gun shots to his shoulder and leg. The friend's wife plays nurse, and gives the hero a blowjob to help speed his recovery, while her husband is out.

Through in lots of twists and end at the beginning. I think it'll be fun to read this type of erotic story.
 
Hi, I'm Brock Landers and this is Chest Rockwell. Now where the fuck is Ringo?

[/Boogie Nights]
 
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Splinters burst from the door frame as the door crashed open from the force of Nick Rogers' kick. Blood poured from his throbbing head like sweat. He had been hit twice; once in the leg and again in the shoulder. He was running on pure adrenaline.

He scanned the dimly lit room with his nine millimeter semi-automatic. He trained his sharp eye to a figure moving in the shadows in the corner of the room. “Step out, or I’ll drop you right where you stand!” he ordered.

“Please don’t shoot.” A trembling teenager stepped into the light. Her wrists were bound, her short dress was ripped, and she was covered in dirt and sweat down to her feet. “Please don’t hurt me anymore,” she pleaded holding her hands in front of her tear drenched face.

“Krista, my name is Rogers, I’ve come to get you out,” he flipping the switch blade open from his pocket cutting her binds.

Krista screamed seeing a man in the doorway wilding a rifle. Rogers flung his blade piercing the man’s throat before the man could chamber a round.

“Stay close.” Rogers grabbed the girl by the wrist. He scanned the hallway with his handgun and then backed her to the open window at the end of the hall.

Krista held onto the back of Rogers’ shirt as they climbed out onto the roof. The rough shingles scratched the bottoms of her bruised feet as the crept around to the back of the old house.

Rogers grimaced as he lowered his trimmed frame down to the shed. He saw the welts and cuts on Krista’s bottom as he helped her down. He could only imagine the torture she must have suffered. He grunted trying to mask the pain from the bullet in his leg when he landed on the ground. He was careful not to cause Krista any more pain than she must have been suffering as he helped her down.

Rogers and Krista crouched down in the shadows. More men rushed into the house. They then darted into the dense brush of the heavy woods. Krista moaned in pain as she stepped on twigs and broken branches.

“I’m going to have to carry you.” Rogers bent down allowing the girl to climb on his back. The grimace appeared on his face again as he adjusted to the extra weight. “Keep your head down and hold on.”

“They must be in the woods!” A voice called out from the house.

Rogers held onto Krista’s legs as he began running through the heavy woods. He could hear the water of the river in the darkness and headed straight for it. He could also hear the sound of the men behind them and see flashes from their night lights.

He ran out into the river and was swept up by the strong current unable to stop. Rogers grabbed hold of Krista holding her head above the water. The rapids were moving too fast for him to control which direction they were heading. The strong flow of the river dunked them under several times before they crashed into a fallen branch.

“Hold on to me.” Rogers mustered all the strength he could to pull them to the edge. He gasped for breath at the bank momentarily resting on his hands and knees. “Get on.”

“But you’re hurt,” Krista said.

“Get on,” Rogers demanded.

Rogers staggered until he caught his balance. He could see the lights from the service station where he had ditched his car. Limbs and branches brushed his face as he pressed on through the woods. He let Krista down from his back when they got to the fence separating the property line of the service station. They crept along the fence eyeing the two men standing guard over the car. Rogers felt along the ground finding a branch. He had lost his gun when they first hit the water.

One of the guards went into the station. Rogers ensured his grip on the piece of wood as they snuck up behind the other guard. The guard’s head bounced on the pavement after being hit with Rogers’ make-shift club.

“Get in and keep her head down,” Rogers ordered as he disarmed the guard. He ran into the station and fired a single shot hitting the guard in the head splattering gray matter on the attendant who held both his hands in plane sight. Rogers backed out and ran for his car.

The tires on the 2006 Dodge Charger squealed all the way out onto the highway as Rogers made their getaway.
 
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Black Snake: I like it. :) Give it a little editing, some more length, add sex, post it, and I'll give it a good vote.
 
AchtungNight said:
Black Snake: I like it. :) Give it a little editing, some more length, add sex, post it, and I'll give it a good vote.

That was the Prologue. I'm still working on the first Chapter. The hero is recovering at his best friend's home. The best friend's wife is playing nurse. She has sex with him to help speed his recovery.

I'm thinking sex slaves for the plot.
 
I think the idea has a very great deal of merit, but it would have to be exceedingly well written. If Clive Cussler wrote a Dirk Pitt adventure with an erotica element, I for one, would be the first person in line to buy it.
 
frozen_north said:
I think the idea has a very great deal of merit, but it would have to be exceedingly well written. If Clive Cussler wrote a Dirk Pitt adventure with an erotica element, I for one, would be the first person in line to buy it.

Thanks, I hope that I'll be able to write this one with more style...
 
There's a booming market for action porn. Check out the John Ringo books published by Baen. Ghost, Kildar, Choosers of the Slain, Into the Breach. Much better than the old Mens Adventure stories. I've got two adventure stories submitted and the first has been nicely received, we'll see about the second (it just got approved about an hour ago).

I think that adventure stories fit nicely into the Novel/Novella category because they tend to be lengthier.
 
Otto26 said:
There's a booming market for action porn. Check out the John Ringo books published by Baen. Ghost, Kildar, Choosers of the Slain, Into the Breach. Much better than the old Mens Adventure stories. I've got two adventure stories submitted and the first has been nicely received, we'll see about the second (it just got approved about an hour ago).

I think that adventure stories fit nicely into the Novel/Novella category because they tend to be lengthier.

Is there explicit sexual content in these books?
 
BlackSnake said:
Is there explicit sexual content in these books?

Yes. But judge for yourself. There are free sample chapters online at the Baen Books website.
 
Otto26 said:
Yes. But judge for yourself. There are free sample chapters online at the Baen Books website.

just went to the web site, and my heart goes out to his family as Mr. Baen has passed.
 
Otto26 said:
There's a booming market for action porn. Check out the John Ringo books published by Baen. Ghost, Kildar, Choosers of the Slain, Into the Breach. Much better than the old Mens Adventure stories. I've got two adventure stories submitted and the first has been nicely received, we'll see about the second (it just got approved about an hour ago).

I think that adventure stories fit nicely into the Novel/Novella category because they tend to be lengthier.


what is the web site?

Novella would be great as a story like this takes time. Personally i think most of the readers on literotica wants fast stories that get to the sex quickly.
 
jeninflorida said:
what is the web site?

Novella would be great as a story like this takes time. Personally i think most of the readers on literotica wants fast stories that get to the sex quickly.

I'm trying to make so that there is sex and violence in every chapter, along with keeping the story moving.
 
Just for you, BlackSnake... The beginnings of a great action/Adventure tale -

"Sir Harold Hardwood sloshed slowly and quietly through the steamy swamp, listening to evey sound that might lead him to his quary. Sir Harold had been on the trail of the drug dealers for months and only by accident had he discovered a clue that lead him here to this place.

"Suddenly, Sir Harold caught a movement out of the corner of his eye. Quickly he turned and as he did so a 14 foot python lurched from the muddy water to entwine him in its deadly embrace, pinning his arms to his sides. The harder Sir Harold fought, the tighter the snake increased its grip on his body. Then the snake's head began to lower and press against his abdomine. Then as it moved downwards dropped inside our hero's pants until finaly it's mouth engulfed Sir Harold's cock and began sucking furiously.

"Oh God!," scream Sir Harold, "I sure as hell hope this is a female snake. Otherwise this could turn out to be a fucking Gay Boy Story!"

Hope ya like it, Blacksnake :)

MMMMMaaaaauhhhhhhhhhhh
 
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