Who Wrote This? (male version)

[annaswirls]

How well do you know your literotica poets??

I did this a while back, and was re-inspired by wildsweetone's question thread---

So it is basic, just for FUN!

Try to guess who wrote this one: no google cheating. No peeking. This one should be easy.

Free bottle of tums to the person who get it right first. I have a case in the closet.

How can I close my eye to this,
how can I put the cap back on?

To-morrow I will number the dead.

 

[WickedEve]

Sounds like 1201.

 

[Guest]

Sounds like 1201.

Agreed.

 

[normal jean]

agreedx2

 

[LeBroz]

Agree3 — but then I just read the poem in the past few days.

 

[Tzara]

I wrote it. 1201 stole it from me.

At least, I think I wrote it. I should have, anyway.

Whatever. I think it's me.

 

[anonamouse]

I wrote it. 1201 stole it from me.

At least, I think I wrote it. I should have, anyway.

Whatever. I think it's me.

Tzara is the only person smart enough to put a time stamp in a poem i.e. "To-morrow" which was accepted useage until the 1920's, unless of course 1201 stole it.

 

[normal jean]

Tzara is the only person smart enough to put a time stamp in a poem i.e. "To-morrow" which was accepted useage until the 1920's, unless of course 1201 stole it.

well, dang, we'z all wrong, except T then, and he isn't sure. Eve calls that a poetry trance. I get them too, sometimes. Maybe we all do.

 

[Angeline]

I guess it's 1201 given Leon's comment, but that third line sure sounds like a Tzara one to me.

 

[WickedEve]

I remember the lines but can't remember the poet. I still think it's the brilliant and flawed 1201 or the brilliant and less flawed Tazara.

 

[annaswirls]

Sorry TZed, 1201 got this one published first

Desert Sunset

Please go re-read the whole poem, it is a keeper for sure!

Thanks for voting!

 

[Angeline]

Sorry TZed, 1201 got this one published first

Desert Sunset

Please go re-read the whole poem, it is a keeper for sure!

Thanks for voting!

I just reread it. The first line is wonderful, too:

Whoa, wobbly clouds in flames,

 

[anonamouse]

I remember the lines but can't remember the poet. I still think it's the brilliant and flawed 1201 or the brilliant and less flawed Tazara.

that's brilliant and
immaculate deception 1201
There is no middle, no story, protagonist is focusing on the scenery, averting his eyes to some horror.
Part of that 50/50 Senna Jawa thing, let the reader decide what he is not looking at.
Who said poetry is sometimes not what is said? Was that jtserra?