Who wants to edit a book?

Max ODrive

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You think I'm kidding... the story is at 72.5k words at the moment and I'm not finished yet. I can easily see another 30k+ words being added at this point but I do plan to finish it this time as I've finally sorted out the last sections in my mind. Even though it isn't complete yet, I'd love to find an editor to get started on it so I can post it before the end of time... lol

Involves wife sharing, mild fetishes, coercion, reluctance and a lot of psychology.

You'll need to pay special attention to continuity (I've been writing it for a while and have made some changes. I may have missed a few things like does she still have the shirt or do I or is it in the hamper?) and my own lack of knowledge about handling grammar and dialogue.

Anyone interested?
 
How about a sample?

I could tell Susie wasn’t happy as we were coming home from church in the car. Usually, she’s a chatterbox, forever talking about the goings-on at church. Something one of the kids said to her, talking about the sermon or even some kind of salacious gossip about a church member. You know that kind. Who’s fucking who and how they got caught or who’s getting a divorce or even who may be messing around.

But today? Almost dead silence. I hated to poke a sleeping bear with a stick, but as long as we’d been married, if I didn’t say something soon, whatever was going on would just fester until it exploded all over me. So… here goes a poke.

“What did you think of Lizelle’s dress?” I said. Lizelle is a light skinned black gal with all kinds of attitude and always wearing something so colorful your eyes hurt just looking at it. And as often as not, it was barely conservative enough to wear to church. Even a church as liberal as the one we go to. A lot of churches in the area ‘kept themselves to themselves’ but ours encouraged participation from anyone, regardless of race. It was even liberal enough to have a few gay members.

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