While drunk, he mistook his roommate for his ex-girlfriend. 5kw story for edit?

[Edey]

I have a short (5kw) story in a dire need of some grammatical help.
The story involves drunk sex and a "bromance" theme. There is a happy ending. No violence.
I don't own Word, so If you would agree for Google Doc, it would be wonderful, as I learn a lot in the "suggesting" mode.
Would anyone help me?

It's my fourth time to ask for editor's help on this forum, maybe fourth time the charm?

So to be open about everything - that can potentially discourage you from helping me:
- It's a gay story
- I'm not a native English speaker.
If you can work with that, that would be a blast !

Also, if somebody is afraid that "he/she isn't very knowledgeable about male erotica", I want to assure that person - the sex in the story is practically like straight sex, as the main hero is under the drunken impression he is with his ex-girlfriend. So not worries in that regard.

 

[alohadave]

I have a short (5kw) story in a dire need of some grammatical help.
The story involves drunk sex and a "bromance" theme. There is a happy ending. No violence.
I don't own Word, so If you would agree for Google Doc, it would be wonderful, as I learn a lot in the "suggesting" mode.
Would anyone help me?

It's my fourth time to ask for editor's help on this forum, maybe fourth time the charm?

So to be open about everything - that can potentially discourage you from helping me:
- It's a gay story
- I'm not a native English speaker.
If you can work with that, that would be a blast !

Also, if somebody is afraid that "he/she isn't very knowledgeable about male erotica", I want to assure that person - the sex in the story is practically like straight sex, as the main hero is under the drunken impression he is with his ex-girlfriend. So not worries in that regard.

I'd be happy to help. I'll send you a PM.

 

[Edey]

Thank you so much, I already responded.