Where to go next?

[chloedeboncourt]

Dear all,

I have just recently released my first ever story: "The making of Chloé". In short: it is about a mad scientist who merges three women into one in order to create the perfect woman: a super smart, sexy fulfillment of every man's dreams. You can have a look here http://www.literotica.com/s/the-making-of-chloe

I would be grateful for your feedback and also for your concrete suggestions on where to take the story next.

Firstly, it would be great to get some idea about what parts of the story until now are appealing and which ones aren't - so that I can work on expanding the interesting, sexy stuff for you.

Secondly, I can take this one into many different directions now: I could go about training her in the laboratory, or sending her into the world (think of Species but replace horror with sex). The world outside could be a sci-fi future or close to the world as we know it. Also, I would be interested in figuring out how to further develop her character: are negative parts of the previous three women's character still shining through and does she have a memory? Should her drive be a search for identity or a fulfillment of her sexual desires? And/or should she be controlled by the mad scientist in some way?

thanks for your suggestions!
big kiss!
chloé.

 

[Dream_Operator]

Okay here's a few random ideas I had:

- Their bodies have been molded into perfection, but their minds have not. Sage still seems to be the narrator at this point. At first she is delighted with her new body and the attention she is now getting from men. But Chloe soon starts to feel the influence of Joy's & Bellle's personalities as she ventures out into the real world

- Joy makes Chloe want to do things that the old Sage would never do -- wild things like: Exhibitionism, Anal, Public Sex, Group Sex etc.

- Belle also has an influence on Chloe, but in an unexpected way. Turns out that Belle was a submissive who liked to be dominated and/or is bisexual, or something else????

- The Scientist has set up hidden cameras in Chloe's apartment, which is inside the laboratory, to record and document her sexual encounters.

- Chloe begins to have schizophrenic episodes where one of the other personalities takes over. She wakes up the next morning not knowing what had happened the night before.

- During her daily morning briefing with the Scientist, he shows her the video of her encounter the previous night with a woman. Chloe is at first shocked by what she is seeing, but even more shocked at seeing how much she enjoyed it.

- Over time she watches the video tapes and begins to want to experience these things in her normal real-life persona.

Side Plot & Ending

At first, Chloe suspects that Scientist has created her to be his personal sex toy. She confronts him and he explains

1. He's too old for that.
2. She can have any man in the world now, why would she want to have sex with him.
3. Viagra isn't covered under his health plan.
4. The reason he created her was because he had spent his entire life in search of the perfect woman. Realizing he would never find her, he decided to create one before he died.

Over time a friendship develops, as Chloe begins to trust him and see that he is looking out for her best interests.

Meanwhile, the police have launched an investigation into the disappearance of the three missing women. Eventually enough circumstantial evidence is gathered to charge the Scientist with murder.

Facing a likely conviction, the Scientist and Chloe come up with a plan. She lures two of her previous male partners to the lab for what they believe will be some kinky sex. Instead the Scientist walks in and Chloe starts the machine to mold the three of them into one -- creating her ultimate soul mate.

They live happily ever after.

*****

Hope some of that was useful, or at least sparked other ideas.

Good luck with your story.

 

[chloedeboncourt]

thank you!

dream operator, thank you, these are some really nice ideas! I might pick up on some of them, like the consciousness blanks, the schizophrenia and the side plots.

 

[Dream_Operator]

dream operator, thank you, these are some really nice ideas! I might pick up on some of them, like the consciousness blanks, the schizophrenia and the side plots.

You're welcome. I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

 

[Belongs2Beth]

I can't imagine a mad scientist couldn't formulate his own Viagra. I think a more believeable twist might be that he created Chloé as the perfect cuckoldress based on his own fetishes. I think making voyuerism the scientist's motive has possibilities.

 

[Dream_Operator]

I can't imagine a mad scientist couldn't formulate his own Viagra.

I threw that in as a joke.