lovecraft68
Bad Doggie
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No, not that thing, get your minds out of the gutter.
I am almost finished with a fairly long tale (about 110k) that I am going to release in chapters here starting early March.
Problem is, this is not a story that I find easily categorized and have no clue what to do with it.
Erotic horror may work because one of the 2 female leads is a witch. There are no demons and monsters or vamps or weres, but she pulls off a few "tricks" during the story and has a showdown with another witch near the end.
But I do not feel there is enough to satisfy the "true" horror crowd
The two women are a couple, so yes Lesbian could work, but there is also some straight sex as well and honestly I write pretty much "lipstick lesbian porn" so know it will get killed there anyway.
There is a non consent scene in one chapter where one lays into the other a little too hard and can be seen as borderline rape. (the character does have several outs and does not take them though, so not true NC)
another issue is violence. There are a couple of pretty rough fight scenes as the second woman is a former government operative and currently the witch's private body guard and "muscle" for her coven.
another factor is some "psuedo incest" the witch was seduced at a young age(18 of course! silly you!) by her foster mother. There is no "mommy" dialog, but it flirts with the subject. It is also discovered the foster mother was sleeping with her sister, but it is only mentioned never described in any detail.
Last issue is overall darkness. For anyone that has read my dark incest series Siblings with benefits this is just as dark and that could be the biggest issue.
The witch ran away from home ended up with a pimp was whored out and then gang raped and beaten and left for dead at one point.
The ex operative was beaten as a child and was also captured and tortured by a terrorist cell. nothing is described full out, but there are a lot of pretty gruesome flashbacks and some pretty gory examples of the lovely ladies inherent violence.
So...... any suggestions as to where this could fit? Or do I try to jump category per chapter? Even doing that there are some sexless chapters(worth noting I guess) and it is fairly story driven.
also some of the sex scenes are "not enjoyable" for instance at one point one of the women forces herself to have sex with a man to throw people off she is in love with the other woman and even though he's fine with her, her mind is not exactly in a "happy place"
long story short since there is not a "train wreck" category I'm stumped:
I am almost finished with a fairly long tale (about 110k) that I am going to release in chapters here starting early March.
Problem is, this is not a story that I find easily categorized and have no clue what to do with it.
Erotic horror may work because one of the 2 female leads is a witch. There are no demons and monsters or vamps or weres, but she pulls off a few "tricks" during the story and has a showdown with another witch near the end.
But I do not feel there is enough to satisfy the "true" horror crowd
The two women are a couple, so yes Lesbian could work, but there is also some straight sex as well and honestly I write pretty much "lipstick lesbian porn" so know it will get killed there anyway.
There is a non consent scene in one chapter where one lays into the other a little too hard and can be seen as borderline rape. (the character does have several outs and does not take them though, so not true NC)
another issue is violence. There are a couple of pretty rough fight scenes as the second woman is a former government operative and currently the witch's private body guard and "muscle" for her coven.
another factor is some "psuedo incest" the witch was seduced at a young age(18 of course! silly you!) by her foster mother. There is no "mommy" dialog, but it flirts with the subject. It is also discovered the foster mother was sleeping with her sister, but it is only mentioned never described in any detail.
Last issue is overall darkness. For anyone that has read my dark incest series Siblings with benefits this is just as dark and that could be the biggest issue.
The witch ran away from home ended up with a pimp was whored out and then gang raped and beaten and left for dead at one point.
The ex operative was beaten as a child and was also captured and tortured by a terrorist cell. nothing is described full out, but there are a lot of pretty gruesome flashbacks and some pretty gory examples of the lovely ladies inherent violence.
So...... any suggestions as to where this could fit? Or do I try to jump category per chapter? Even doing that there are some sexless chapters(worth noting I guess) and it is fairly story driven.
also some of the sex scenes are "not enjoyable" for instance at one point one of the women forces herself to have sex with a man to throw people off she is in love with the other woman and even though he's fine with her, her mind is not exactly in a "happy place"
long story short since there is not a "train wreck" category I'm stumped: