Where is the next great writer of Oedipal incest stories?

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

I have noticed that no really great writer of mother/son incest stories has arisen in quite some time and the old time grand masters are getting increasingly scarce in their postings. I am wondering if this us just a lull before the next motherfucking narrative storm or whether the topic is declining in appeal?
I hope it is just a lull. There is nothing finer than reading a charming tale of a June Cleaver middle class mom in the suburbs having a double life as a lusting bitch of a matron who loves having sex with her son(s) and even daughter(s). Mom seduces her son. Sonny seduces mom. Neighbor lady walks into the house to catch mom sucking sonny off. Daughter comes home and finds her brother and mother boinking away. Daughter goes down in mom.... Well, you get the picture!
Will the next Shakespeare of mother-centered sex please show yourself!

 

[lovecraft68]

I don't know who you consider the "grandmasters" or who you've read, but of course alwayswantedtoo is the standard by which mother/son incest is judged here and is still going strong.

Heyall has many to choose from and I've penned several here in the last year as well.

 

[BonnevilleFlats]

As much as I'd like to convince myself that I am the next great writer of Oedipal stories, my scores indicate that this is an illusion. But last fall CPBaudelaire had a hall of fame story with his first posting. It was a novel length work that probably took him a long time to write. I don't know if he has any shorter works in the pipeline so it may be a while before he posts another. Here is the link to his page. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1254225&page=submissions

There was one writer here who posted her first and only story last April named LanaBanana. The plot was the typical mother catches son masturbating with her panties and they have sex, one of the major cliches of the Oedipal genre. Usually I stop reading a story like that after a few paragraphs. However, the narrative voice was so strong that I read the entire story and favorited it. I think she has potential but she hasn't posted anything else. She might be somebody who posts in another genre and created a separate account so she wouldn't sully her reputation with an incest story. Here is the link to her page.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1380418&page=submissions

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

As much as I'd like to convince myself that I am the next great writer of Oedipal stories, my scores indicate that this is an illusion. But last fall CPBaudelaire had a hall of fame story with his first posting. It was a novel length work that probably took him a long time to write. I don't know if he has any shorter works in the pipeline so it may be a while before he posts another. Here is the link to his page. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1254225&page=submissions

There was one writer here who posted her first and only story last April named LanaBanana. The plot was the typical mother catches son masturbating with her panties and they have sex, one of the major cliches of the Oedipal genre. Usually I stop reading a story like that after a few paragraphs. However, the narrative voice was so strong that I read the entire story and favorited it. I think she has potential but she hasn't posted anything else. She might be somebody who posts in another genre and created a separate account so she wouldn't sully her reputation with an incest story. Here is the link to her page.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1380418&page=submissions

Dont pay attention to reader scores. if readers had lives they wouldnt be at LIT.

 

[BonnevilleFlats]

As far as scores go, they do tell the writer something if he or she can decipher them so I don't write them off entirely. As a new and relatively infrequent poster here my immediate goals shouldn't be to get a red H right off the bat but to find my voice and cultivate a small following who like my work. But most readers here won't bother with a story if it drops below a 4.00 because they assume a score that low means incompetent writing. I suspect my low score is because in the oedipal genre any references to male on male sex -- unless the mother is trying to cure her son of homosexuality -- is considered a boner killer. But with only three comments and all of them positive I have no real way of knowing if that was the case.

 

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

Thanks for the tips!

Thanks for the tips! I am following them up. There is nothing like a lusty mother/son fantasy!
Yes, alwayswantedto is one of the grandmasters by any measure. However, that author has slowed up considerably in output. Not that I am blaming here. People do after all have a life other than writing smutty stories for strangers!) I think Ahabscribe has done amazing work. It doesn't hurt my opinion that his moms are usually buxom babes. (I wonder if all tit men are oedipalists even if they refuse to admit they lust for mom!) Klrxo's moms are always so wonderfully game for fucking their sons. ChiefX39 produced the most astounding series and then disappeared. I list other favorites on my literotica page.
My favorite fantasy is mom being what is now called a "helicopter parent" and cumming to visit me at my college a weekend every month to drain off excessive horniness so I can concentrate on my studies and avoid getting a young coed knocked up. The picture attached feature the Golden Age porn actress Colleen Brennan as my mom and imagine the picture taking place in my dorm room. Of course, if I can work out a threesome between myself, mom and a sweet young thing on campus, yum!

 

[sdineen]

dg

lovely idea

 

[LordMore]

Ahabscribe and alwayswantedto are a good example for good current incest stories on literotica. They're writing constantely new stories about incest.Also I have found DarkSammael, a quite new author, who wrote a very interesting story with new and fresh ideas.
Ok, I must admit, there are a lot of incest stories, with almost identical and somewhat boring plots and bad writing, but there are also very good ones, if yout search for a little bit

 

[LordMore]

Ahabscribe and alwayswantedto are a good example for good current incest stories on literotica. They're writing constantely new stories about incest.

Also I have found DarkSammael, a quite new author, who wrote a very interesting story with new and fresh ideas.

Ok, I must admit, there are a lot of incest stories, with almost identical and somewhat boring plots and bad writing, but there are also very good ones, if yout search for a little bit

 

[BonnevilleFlats]

Alwayswantedto is the kind of writer most of us strive to emulate. Number 1, nobody ratchets up the sexual tension better than he does. He is the master of the slow build and never gets redundant. Number 2, he is one of the few writers of oedipal stories who don't have to make the father disappear in order for the story to be believable. In many of his stories the father is subtley enabling the coupling. Most of us use an absent or dead father or, if he is present, he is always some kind of abusive drunk or neglectful husband. In many of Alwayswantedto's stories the purpose of the incest is the keep the family intact and that makes them unique in the genre.

I look specifically for stories that are different. I also think the sex between a mother and son is something the writer has to earn. By "earn", I mean he or she has to write a story where both the characterization and the plotting make the sex a logical conclusion. A 36 year old Mom with big tits who catches her son masturbating with her panties on his eighteenth birthday and decides to give him a present he'll remember ain't gonna get it done for me, not even if they have anal sex. I've never read any studies that indicate that a woman with big tits who has a son when she is a teenager is more likely to engage in incest than a woman with an average bust who has a child when she is 25.

Chefgiovanni wrote two series her a couple years back that I liked. He hasn't posted anything recently. He built the tension slowly. In his mother and son story the couple were older. The son was in his forties, the mother in her sixties. Here is a link to his page. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=371009&page=submissions

 

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

Cliches and ideals

The most annoying cliche to my sensibilities is. "My mom is 45 years old, but she could pass for a 25 year old." Oh, gag! I like my Oedipal story moms to look good, but also to look their age. I really do want them to have a certain June Cleaver/Donna Rees/Shirley Partridge all-American mom maternal demeanor. A good looking middle aged woman who would fit right in with the PTA or bridge club. That is who she is with one slight addition. She moves effortlessly from being the undisputed ruler of the kitchen to her son's nymphomaniac sex queen in bed!
I also find romance between a son and his mother to be prone to cliche. This is about lust driven fucking. There is something about mom that gets a son stiff. There is something about her son that get's mom's nipples hard and pussy wet.
For me, a good mother/son sex story has to deliver the goods in the description of the fucking. What does it feel like to have your son's cock in you? What does it feel line to feel your mom's pussy squeezing your cock? For the oedipalist, the fantasy is that it is the best sex in the universe. Well, there is the literary challenge! What does the best sex in the world feel like?
A big reason I like alwayswantedto is that the author likes networks of mother/son couples. It is fun to imagine that there is a mother/son sex underground in otherwise respectable middle class America. The Mom Memories series is an original way of handling this idea..
Ahabscribe has been known to play with threesomes with mom, son and son's wife or girlfriend. His Mistletoe Trigger story is a great example of this.
I don't know if tit guys are really closet oedipalists. Calling Dr. Freud! All I know that a buxom mom is my ideal.

 

[cbono1969]

My mom and me...

How about my Mom who is 70 and me who is 43...Very hot...Older is only way...Ps..My Mom is all natural down there...

 

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

What kind of Oedipal story never gets old?

"Beverly" is your typical upper middle class middle age suburban mom. She looks and acts her age of 40 years old. But it is a good looking 40. She is the PTA Vice President. Her politics and social mores are conservative. She exhibits a prudish side and doesn't approve of the younger generation's loose attitude toward sex. She works in a bank. She is a competent homemaker. And she loves to fuck the daylights out of her son with lust bunny abandon! Her respectable demeanor goes away when she is the buxom nympho bitch of a sex queen that keeps her 19 year old son drained.
And now she wants to include her son's 18 year old girl friend in a threesome. But is that pushing the envelope too far and risking discretion?
For his part, sonny loves it when mom just rides him cowgirl style with her boobs bouncing in his face. He loves the feel of mom's pussy around his cock. In the after languor of orgadm, he loves the idea of his cum dripping out of mom's pussy, through the thick mat of her bush.
And dad is just clueless about the Oedipal sex going on behind his back, being as he is, a corporate drone.
Now this is the kind of Oedipal story that never gets old for me.
Just saying

 

[BonnevilleFlats]

"Beverly" is your typical upper middle class middle age suburban mom. She looks and acts her age of 40 years old. But it is a good looking 40. She is the PTA Vice President. Her politics and social mores are conservative. She exhibits a prudish side and doesn't approve of the younger generation's loose attitude toward sex. She works in a bank. She is a competent homemaker. And she loves to fuck the daylights out of her son with lust bunny abandon! Her respectable demeanor goes away when she is the buxom nympho bitch of a sex queen that keeps her 19 year old son drained.
And now she wants to include her son's 18 year old girl friend in a threesome. But is that pushing the envelope too far and risking discretion?
For his part, sonny loves it when mom just rides him cowgirl style with her boobs bouncing in his face. He loves the feel of mom's pussy around his cock. In the after languor of orgadm, he loves the idea of his cum dripping out of mom's pussy, through the thick mat of her bush.
And dad is just clueless about the Oedipal sex going on behind his back, being as he is, a corporate drone.
Now this is the kind of Oedipal story that never gets old for me.
Just saying

Plenty of stories like that on here.

 

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

And some are....

And some are good and some are not.
rgjohn has done some really good stuff and, IMHO, ranks as a grandmaster. I particularly enjoyed his Morning Light series. I think the mom, in addition to her son, also having a letch for teenage girls does it.

 

[PaulScottBarbarasSon]

Kitchen sink lust!

Some oedipal story scenes never get old for me. Like a horny son walking behind his buxom mother while she is at the kitchen sink, cups her boobs with his palms and presses his hard cock into her ass. Love it, love it, love it!
But it is not the originality of the scene. It is the quality of the writing that sets it up, describes it and goes on from there. That is where the differences between a grandmaster, a competent writer and a hack comes into play!
The greatest cliche can be high eroticism when written well.
And if per chance, a good writer does come up with an original scene, so much the better. Consistently matching good writing with original scenes is what gets a writer to the highest grandmaster ranks. But it all begins with knowing how to write the basic lust-driven scene well, gaining the reader's trust that the goods will be delivered.

 

[MiriamL]

The only stories which interest me are where the mother figure doesnt leap effortlessly from mousewife to momshell in one hour....or in some cases, one minute!

Intensely explicit scenes are good...but only when they come as an outrage to her own image of herself as the picture perfect wife and mother.

In other words, she must be just as shocked by her own impulsive behaviour as the ladies of her local church bake sale committee. -Miriam.

 

[BonnevilleFlats]

The only stories which interest me are where the mother figure doesnt leap effortlessly from mousewife to momshell in one hour....or in some cases, one minute!

Intensely explicit scenes are good...but only when they come as an outrage to her own image of herself as the picture perfect wife and mother.

In other words, she must be just as shocked by her own impulsive behaviour as the ladies of her local church bake sale committee. -Miriam.

That's the writer's challenge in a nutshell.

 

[duckandbunny79]

Ended

 

[MiriamL]

Personally I get very turned off, when the story feels the need to see off the father figure and uses the son as a replacement for that. It's just not sexy for me.

What a lovely post you have written! In the incest genre its far more intriguing when the father figure is included in a triangle of deception, revelation and arousal!

 

[SexIsTheSpice]

For me the best stories involve at least 3 characters. Whether that be the Mom, Dad and Adult son.

Husband and wife, mother watching them.

I know others prefer to keep others out of the story, but for me it's far kinkier to have the a spouce involved. Whether that be through accident, through corruption, or using the spouce as their play thing.

A one on one between Mom and Son has to work hard to keep me interested.

A plot should have some complexity to be interesting and appealing.

One example is a family of three consisting of two parents and a son. Both parents were raised in an incestual family and left that in their past. When the became of age the mother struggles with feelings from her upbringing clashing with desires to know her son intimately. The father feels something missing, a daughter so he strays and enters an affair with a young lady of his son's age. At first all this happened behind each other's backs till the mother discovered the affair and confronted her husband. Rather than ending the marriage they realized they can't run from their distant past. With sore voices from screaming and after tears were shed the mother accepts her husband's affair and supports it but at a price. She gets their son. Both parents reach a state of peace with sexual tensions subdued.

Both embark in a bold lifestyle not experienced since their youth. Back then they were seduced and driven. Now they are in charge. The father resumes the affair with his make believe daughter and she is more than willing to have him as her make believe father.

The son is totally unaware even as the mother gradually changes her demeanor and clothes. The cougar is lurking patiently waiting for the opportunity to capture her prey.

 

[GenuineGuy]

A plot should have some complexity to be interesting and appealing.

One example is a family of three consisting of two parents and a son. Both parents were raised in an incestual family and left that in their past. When the became of age the mother struggles with feelings from her upbringing clashing with desires to know her son intimately. The father feels something missing, a daughter so he strays and enters an affair with a young lady of his son's age. At first all this happened behind each other's backs till the mother discovered the affair and confronted her husband. Rather than ending the marriage they realized they can't run from their distant past. With sore voices from screaming and after tears were shed the mother accepts her husband's affair and supports it but at a price. She gets their son. Both parents reach a state of peace with sexual tensions subdued.

Both embark in a bold lifestyle not experienced since their youth. Back then they were seduced and driven. Now they are in charge. The father resumes the affair with his make believe daughter and she is more than willing to have him as her make believe father.

The son is totally unaware even as the mother gradually changes her demeanor and clothes. The cougar is lurking patiently waiting for the opportunity to capture her prey.

This is some deep shit right here. Really interesting plot. I'm hard. PM me about this.

 

[MiriamL]

The son is totally unaware even as the mother gradually changes her demeanour and clothes.

Better than changing her clothes would be a change in the way she attracts attention to herself as she is. The most obvious way of testing the waters would be asking the boy to comment on her clothes...to model for him and gauge the reaction.

Entering his room at night and intentionally neglecting to turn on the light...just sitting on the edge of his bed and speaking in quiet tones about increasingly risque subjects that most moms would never dare discuss with her son.

 

[SexIsTheSpice]

Better than changing her clothes would be a change in the way she attracts attention to herself as she is. The most obvious way of testing the waters would be asking the boy to comment on her clothes...to model for him and gauge the reaction.

Entering his room at night and intentionally neglecting to turn on the light...just sitting on the edge of his bed and speaking in quiet tones about increasingly risque subjects that most moms would never dare discuss with her son.

You are correct and that's what I meant by demeanor. I like your suggestions. A mother asking about her son's dating is a door opener. Cooking his favorite meals is another. So is teaching him how to cook.

 

[Stryke_Infinite]

I have to agree. Alwayswantedto has a knack for telling those kinds of stories. He's talented.