When mommy's away dad and daughter will play

[mintchocolate]

...I know. I know it's cliché as hell, but I've been trying to look up those dad/daughter series whereas:
- Mom's alive, well and married to dad
- Dad and daughter trying to have fun and sneaking around behind her back
- More of a series or lengthy oneshot instead of some quickie 1k words.
with practically no luck in Lit's Incest category. Most of the stories involve the absence of the mother, which is not what I'm looking for.

Basically one of those "your mom's too old/uninterested/bad at sex" stories. No mom/daughter and no F/F please. Bonus if there's some D/s element.

Would anyone be interested in writing a story like that, or rather, point me to such stories? I know they must exist out there on Lit but I spent hours looking through the daddy tag and couldn't find a handful of well-written stories with the same premise.

Thanks a lot

 

[lovecraft68]

I have two that feature mom in the picture and off working while Daddy and daughter have some fun.

Fair warning though both involve bondage. One is more of the erotic teasing kind, one is pretty damn rough the titles will tell you which is which.

http://www.literotica.com/s/bound-for-my-daddy

http://www.literotica.com/s/daddy-likes-it-rough-and-so-do-i

 

[BurningMonkey]

Did you try the 'daughter' tag?

Admittedly, the quality of the writing here varies all over the lot--after all, they're self-submitted amateur scribblings, but that's what you get...sux, but be strong--you can do it.

Actually, that's a good idea for a story line. I might try my hand at it...

 

[Carnevil9]

I like the idea of the dad and the daughter having to sneak around to do it behind mom's back. It's like naughty times two!

 

[Hypoxia]

Let's double the bunny. Dad and daughter play around secretly, but so do Mom and son. Each couple runs into Keystone-Kop-like absurdities to avoid the others (whom they don't suspect).

Let's triple and quadruple the bunny. Each couple *IS* suspected, by another family member, say the kids' un-partnered aunt and/or uncle. Threesomes are demanded. Hilarity ensues. Ha.

 

[Carnevil9]

I'll see you and raise you. Dad and daughter play around secretly, Mom and son play around secretly. But Dad and son also play around secretly, and Mom and daughter also play around secretly. Nobody knows about any of the secret playing other than what they are involved in themselves.

Preston Sturges would love it!

 

[Hypoxia]

I'll see you and raise you. Dad and daughter play around secretly, Mom and son play around secretly. But Dad and son also play around secretly, and Mom and daughter also play around secretly. Nobody knows about any of the secret playing other than what they are involved in themselves.

Preston Sturges would love it!

I have been reading about plotting. The basic 5-stage meta-plot is based on Freytag's Pyramid: 1- Anticipation; 2- Dream; 3- Frustration; 4- Nightmare; 5- Resolution. But the basic Comedy meta-plot is simpler:

. 1 Under the Shadow - A little world in which people are under the shadow of confusion, uncertainty and frustration and are shut up from one another.

. 2 Tightening the Knot - The confusion gets worse until the pressure of darkness is at its most acute and everyone is in a nightmarish tangle.

. 3 Resolution - With the coming to light of things not previously recognised, perceptions are dramatically changed. Shadows are dispelled, the situation is miraculously transformed and the little world is brought together in a state of joyful union.

(from Chris Bateman's analysis of Christopher Booker’s The Seven Basic Plots)

Does anyone here recognize the "screwball comedy" formula? Yes, this would make a good XXX Preston Sturges film. Be sure to throw in some befuddled bystanders, smart-ass commentators, lascivious look-alikes, etc.

For instance: Mom & Dad & Son & Daughter are all unknowingly playing around with each other, and at least one each Uncle and Aunt get into the action, but other uncles and aunts (maybe near-twins of the players) are NOT involved except by mistaken identity. Neighbor kids observe the action and setup practical jokes. Stuff like that. Animals can be involved too, just not sexually. Maybe the family dog howls whenever certain couplings occur. Run with it!

 

[Carnevil9]

And you need at least one scene of a hallway with multiple doors, and people running in and out of them at various times but never quite meeting each other.

 

[BurningMonkey]

Does anyone here recognize the "screwball comedy" formula?

Or any one of Shakespeare's interchangeable comedies.

There is nothing new under the sun...

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Why do I feel like I just read a script for a porno based on the old TV show Three's Company. All we need now is Don Knotts staring bug eyed through w window while Jack feels up Chrissy and Larry has Janet bent over the couch...

 

[sassysasha89]

Why do I feel like I just read a script for a porno based on the old TV show Three's Company. All we need now is Don Knotts staring bug eyed through w window while Jack feels up Chrissy and Larry has Janet bent over the couch...

Actually that reminds me of Friends where one by one they discover Chandler and Monica. Like Phoebe sees through the window of the apartment across the street.

Try the series "A Craving for Cock" chapter 8. Perhaps even "Courting My Sister" chapter 3. Can't think of others right now but try those.

Perhaps a daughter is something of a slut and had been into trouble because of it. The mother is so glad that her father finally steps in and help with her daughter's behavior. What she doesn't know is the unedited version.

Her husband has been hanging with a philandering co-worker whose been influencing him. Now's he's cheating on her. They went to an orgy masquerade where he fucked with many women. But there was this particular fuel whom he fucked for hours with and it was only after giving her multiple orgasms and having a few himself did he discover that he had fuck his daughter. They were both horrified and left the way they came. When he heard from his wife that she was in trouble in school because of indecent behavior which unlike her and had ask him to talk to her because she wasn't getting through, he took the opportunity to fix things. He finds out that her best friend has been a slut for a while and she wanted to join her world after witnessing her fuck an older boy in the house while the parents were out. She lost her virginity at a party and the rest was history. The phone call from the school was because she got caught getting DP'd and sucking cock behind the bleachers with three of her cheerleading teammates' boyfriends during Gym.
Later that evening after he suggested the mother goes to the movies or something to relax, that's when it begins and the pent up sexual tension between them exploded.