When Critics Attack!

MaxSebastian

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Generally, I give fairly brief feedbacks if I just go and read a story from the new list and head for the anonymous (not that I don't put my email in) feedback jobby. Every now and then, though, I feel like giving longer feedback to someone, and I usually come here to the feedback board to find someone to give that feedback to. I figure the people round here are more needy for it.

But when I decide to do it, it's a real commitment - I'm going to read the story a lot more carefully and spend the time thinking about its merits and pitfalls - but all I have to go on is usually the title, the genre and the tagline - since usually people here don't give any kind of explanitory paragraph in their request for feedback (annoying!). So it's a hit-and-miss affair for a critic who wants to commit, it's a gamble, and nobody likes to lose.

I used to generally be very positive in my approach, but recently I find that my comments seem to have become really mostly negative. Is this because the quality of stories are worse than a little while ago? I hardly think so. Maybe I look at things with a more detailed eye. Maybe I've seen so many stories displaying similar problems that I can now pinpoint them at a thousand paces.

People come on here and ask for criticism, and to some degree they have to expect that if they ask for it, they're going to get some bracing responses. But I feel sometimes that nowadays my critiques are balanced a little too much on the dark side, and it's not necessarily them, it's me.

I'm becoming like Jaws... I lurk offshore and every now and then when a swimmer takes a fluorescent inflatable ring out into the surf, that double bass music starts up (duh-duh... duh-duh...) and my fin emerges from the water as I quietly close in for the kill.

Long-time critics of Lit: have you edged into nasty territory over the time you've been doing it, or is it just me?
 
I don't think I've turned into a shark, particularly since I've always been one, critiquely speaking. I have always had claws and no real concern for authorly feelings in the matter.

I have noticed that I've gotten less, oh, apologetic I guess. Instead of saying things like, "I think that you're using too many adverbs. I've always through that adverbs were a serious crutch for a good writer. I like using adverbial phrases in my writings." I say things like this: "You're using too many adverbs, they're a serious crutch. Try using adverbial phrases."

I've gone from "I'm just a lowly reader giving my opinion" to "I'm an expert" in the course of 9 webpages. Huhm.
 
New to the writing profession, I'm looking for honest feedback, without I wouldn't be able to improve.

I requested feedback to my first story and expected to get both good and bad reviews. If writers expect just the good, then they shouldn't request the opinion of others.

TrinaT

:rose:
 
My reviews

Im fairly new to literotica but I can honestly say that my reviews of people's stories here are the same as I give to anyone asking my opinion in "the real world." In my writing classes, I have been accused of being some what stringent in my reviews yet nearly every author has admitted that I was deadon with my critique. On the other hand, I am just as tough on other people's work as I am my own. "If they didn't want me reading it then they shouldn't have asked", is pretty much my motto. Might make me out to be a class-A bitch but *shrugs*
 
A small fish in the sea.

I can only think of myself as a small fish in the sea, not worthy to become a meal for a shark. I have received my share of good and bad feedbacks and reviews, which I've enjoyed tremendously. I am not foolish enough to believe that my writing is "state of art" erotica when it comes to fiddling with the English language. Instead I hope they awaken people to some extent to new ideas.

That is why I exclude to comment on grammar, placing my concentration on the way the story deals with the topic the author has chosen. Perhaps it's a form of shallow feedback I give, but I do not think so. I hope others with better knowledge about writing techniques comment on those sides of the author's work.
 
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