MrPixel
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Or nearly so.
I just finished a story (currently editing) with an exhibitionism scene where the 2 FMCs and a guest FC flash a high-speed passenger train. Since this story series is intentionally based in real life locales, a little research was done about a specific train and a location meeting particular requirements such as little to no traffic, crossing gates, a rural road, and at a certain time of day.
We came pretty close to living that scene today. We were traveling to our summer cabin and passing through the town near to the imagined (but possibly real) location. I looked at the time and realized that it was indeed close to when I said it was going to happen in the story. I told my wife (model for one of the FMCs) that we were going off-route for a few minutes. I turned down one farm road, and it didn't have everything described in the story. Got out a map - a real paper map, specifically, a topographic map - and discovered I had turned one road too early.
So we turned back, and there it was. "Oh God, this is the scene in your story!" she said as we drove up. I pulled off onto the gravel drive I had detailed, I checked the Amtrak status on the phone, and it had left the closest station on time. "Any minute now," I mumble, and no sooner were the words out of my mouth, there go the gates.
"Want me to get naked?" she chuckles. "No. Not this time," I laugh back.
We both get out of the car to watch it go by just in time, and "Whoosh!", there it goes.
My gosh, talk about giddy and goose bumps. Just like I wrote it last week. Minus three naked cuties, unfortunately.
I just finished a story (currently editing) with an exhibitionism scene where the 2 FMCs and a guest FC flash a high-speed passenger train. Since this story series is intentionally based in real life locales, a little research was done about a specific train and a location meeting particular requirements such as little to no traffic, crossing gates, a rural road, and at a certain time of day.
We came pretty close to living that scene today. We were traveling to our summer cabin and passing through the town near to the imagined (but possibly real) location. I looked at the time and realized that it was indeed close to when I said it was going to happen in the story. I told my wife (model for one of the FMCs) that we were going off-route for a few minutes. I turned down one farm road, and it didn't have everything described in the story. Got out a map - a real paper map, specifically, a topographic map - and discovered I had turned one road too early.
So we turned back, and there it was. "Oh God, this is the scene in your story!" she said as we drove up. I pulled off onto the gravel drive I had detailed, I checked the Amtrak status on the phone, and it had left the closest station on time. "Any minute now," I mumble, and no sooner were the words out of my mouth, there go the gates.
"Want me to get naked?" she chuckles. "No. Not this time," I laugh back.
We both get out of the car to watch it go by just in time, and "Whoosh!", there it goes.
My gosh, talk about giddy and goose bumps. Just like I wrote it last week. Minus three naked cuties, unfortunately.