When a married couple moves in with us

[jeninflorida]

Okay, this hasn't happened but I like the idea of a couple moving in with another couple. Guess the idea came to me while driving through a ghost town, okay not a ghost town but a foreclosure city (guess 30% of the homes are empty and some streets its like 80%.

So, what if one couple loses their home and moves in with friends. Now we have 4 sexy adults living together in one house. Is this a taboo?

Maybe a summer thunderstorm knocks the power out, so no Air Conditioning its 100 in the house...clothes come off but will they skinny dip in the pool? is this a cliche?

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Hot, humid thunderstormy weather, skinny-dipping in the pool in the dark? Damn! Now all you need is the women (who are friends from 'way back) to start conniving, moving on to teasing and then to 'entertaining' on the lawn in the rain. But be careful, you monitor will probably start to smoke before you get to the end of the story!

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Count on one of them having a yeast infection, and one infected with scabies.

 

[jeninflorida]

Hot, humid thunderstormy weather, skinny-dipping in the pool in the dark? Damn! Now all you need is the women (who are friends from 'way back) to start conniving, moving on to teasing and then to 'entertaining' on the lawn in the rain. But be careful, you monitor will probably start to smoke before you get to the end of the story!

yeah! I'm thinking its a great erotic story but does there need to be a plot and drama?

 

[TheeGoatPig]

yeah! I'm thinking its a great erotic story but does there need to be a plot and drama?

There are plenty of gonzo sex scenes out there, but I think for this particular story some background, plot, and drama would work perfectly for setting up the mood and getting the reader hot as hell before any of the actual sex even starts. It will have the reader finishing multiple times, and coming back over and again to see what happens next.

Just don't make it all buildup and then end it with, "They all had sex in every position with both women doing DP and the men even had a go at each other." Put as much effort into the sex as you do the buildup

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

What if the women are identical twins? They end up seducing each others husband and the men are none the wiser until the wives tell them.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

A cliche', it's true, but a hot one and one that's always good for one more run through.

 

[jeninflorida]

What if the women are identical twins? They end up seducing each others husband and the men are none the wiser until the wives tell them.

Well, you are welcome to take that idea and run with it. Family fun doesn't work for me.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Well, you are welcome to take that idea and run with it. Family fun doesn't work for me.

How about this one: YOU GAVE ME THE CLAP AND NOW MY HUSBAND'S GOT IT! Uh, I dont have the clap.

 

[jeninflorida]

How about this one: YOU GAVE ME THE CLAP AND NOW MY HUSBAND'S GOT IT! Uh, I dont have the clap.

Well, I'm sorry but STD's are not my thing in fiction or real life sorry

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Well, you are welcome to take that idea and run with it. Family fun doesn't work for me.

I had an earlier tale about French-Canadian twins and needed a catalyst to get their husbands into compromising positions. There is a girl-girl incest angle, sure, but the emphasis is much more on the swap and the use of mistaken identity to seduce the brother-in-law.

But, yeah, it's not for everyone. Expecting others to share one's kinks and fantasies is just another push for conformity.

Incest is a very common squick, anyway, I'm sure.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Jen, it's best to ignore JBJ. He's one of the worst trolls out there.

Anyway, I agree. STDs are a serious mood-killer.

 

[scorallover]

Okay, this hasn't happened but I like the idea of a couple moving in with another couple. Guess the idea came to me while driving through a ghost town, okay not a ghost town but a foreclosure city (guess 30% of the homes are empty and some streets its like 80%.

So, what if one couple loses their home and moves in with friends. Now we have 4 sexy adults living together in one house. Is this a taboo?

Maybe a summer thunderstorm knocks the power out, so no Air Conditioning its 100 in the house...clothes come off but will they skinny dip in the pool? is this a cliche?

I don't see it as taboo, but everyone has their own ideas on that.

I think most settings have ben done, but the trick is how you attack the story. I like stories that have little twists in the plot rather than the standard.

 

[jeninflorida]

I had an earlier tale about French-Canadian twins and needed a catalyst to get their husbands into compromising positions. There is a girl-girl incest angle, sure, but the emphasis is much more on the swap and the use of mistaken identity to seduce the brother-in-law.

But, yeah, it's not for everyone. Expecting others to share one's kinks and fantasies is just another push for conformity.

Incest is a very common squick, anyway, I'm sure.

Well, I'm not here to judge or condom anyone. Selena said that a lot of people have made money with incest books and with bestiality which I find funny with the censorship issues on bestiality as werewolf books are so hot right now and isn't that kind of like bestiality?

as long as the characters are over 18 that my biggest pet peeve (underage crap)


(okay bad play on words but I wonder how many people will pick it up).

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Well, I'm not here to judge or condom anyone. Selena said that a lot of people have made money with incest books and with bestiality which I find funny with the censorship issues on bestiality as werewolf books are so hot right now and isn't that kind of like bestiality?

as long as the characters are over 18 that my biggest pet peeve (underage crap)


(okay bad play on words but I wonder how many people will pick it up).

For my part, I don't wish to label someone for not sharing my kinks. Lovecraft, for example, doesn't like his incest mixed with orgies. That's his right. I don't share his foot fetish. I'm sure that he respects that, too.

Can't speak much to werewolves, as I don't really write those kinds of NonHuman stories. The only NonHuman stories I write involve angels, demons, gods, that sort of thing.

Underage is a rather widespread squick, thus the rule here at Lit.

 

[glynndah]

Well, I'm not here to judge or condom anyone. Selena said that a lot of people have made money with incest books and with bestiality which I find funny with the censorship issues on bestiality as werewolf books are so hot right now and isn't that kind of like bestiality?

as long as the characters are over 18 that my biggest pet peeve (underage crap)


(okay bad play on words but I wonder how many people will pick it up).

Do I win?

 

[jeninflorida]

Do I win?

yes! and the prize is a fictional one million dollars!

 

[glynndah]

yes! and the prize is a fictional one million dollars!

Whee!

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Okay, this hasn't happened but I like the idea of a couple moving in with another couple. Guess the idea came to me while driving through a ghost town, okay not a ghost town but a foreclosure city (guess 30% of the homes are empty and some streets its like 80%.

So, what if one couple loses their home and moves in with friends. Now we have 4 sexy adults living together in one house. Is this a taboo?

Maybe a summer thunderstorm knocks the power out, so no Air Conditioning its 100 in the house...clothes come off but will they skinny dip in the pool? is this a cliche?

Hey Jen? Tell the AH gang how popular you are over at GB. I'm still laughing at SEVERUS warning YOU that I'm a troll. Too funny.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Jen, it's best to ignore JBJ. He's one of the worst trolls out there.

Anyway, I agree. STDs are a serious mood-killer.

Youre a naif my friend.

 

[jeninflorida]

Jen, it's best to ignore JBJ. He's one of the worst trolls out there.

Anyway, I agree. STDs are a serious mood-killer.

its hard enough to create something that will pull in most readers, to add something like that, well readers would drop off in masses. people, in my opinion, want a mental vacation and that's why most of us read fiction.

a escape if you will

thanks for the heads up, people are funny

 

[jeninflorida]

Whee!

now, don't spend it all in one place

 

[RjThoughts]

Well, I'm not here to judge or condom anyone. Selena said that a lot of people have made money with incest books and with bestiality which I find funny with the censorship issues on bestiality as werewolf books are so hot right now and isn't that kind of like bestiality?

as long as the characters are over 18 that my biggest pet peeve (underage crap)


(okay bad play on words but I wonder how many people will pick it up).

Werewolf sex = bestiality
Vampire sex = necrophilia

 

[jeninflorida]

Werewolf sex = bestiality
Vampire sex = necrophilia

I just find this latest round of censorship stuff kind of funny. People be crazy.

Guess this is what makes life interesting?

 

[RjThoughts]

I just find this latest round of censorship stuff kind of funny. People be crazy.

Guess this is what makes life interesting?

Keeps us on our toes!