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What is wrong?
At least 25 misspellings.
Over a dozen homophones.
Inconsistent use of quotation for dialogue. and mispunctuation of such.
I could not find any underage sex or any other content based issues.
Ask an editor to help you put it into proper English and it should be acceptable.
At least 25 misspellings.
Over a dozen homophones.
Inconsistent use of quotation for dialogue. and mispunctuation of such.
I could not find any underage sex or any other content based issues.
Ask an editor to help you put it into proper English and it should be acceptable.
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Seth is specified as 18. he had sex "last summer" so it is assumed he was then underage. Make him 19.
Don't try to argue, there's no point.
Don't try to argue, there's no point.
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J-Krey said:Ah, that's a point. I didn't think of that, thanks.
I know that there are some (okay, a lot) mistakes, but I've read worse stories at literotica. If that's the reason, why can't they just tell me like you did?
Thanks anyone, I'll try to find an editor to help me
Actually under the rules, mentioning that a person had sex prior to their 18th birthday is not a sin, describing it in any detail is a wrong.
The rules do not require that characters have no sexual background, only that that background is not detailed.
Add a note in your re-submission (after editing) saying that your character is of legal age at all times in this story, and no underage sexual acts are described.
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Hmmmm, interesting. I had a story rejected ['Private Dancer'] because it alluded to the girl having sex prior to her eighteenth birthday. It was in no way detailed, and was merely a reference to possible goings on. I cut the reference and 'hey-presto', in the story went.kbate said:
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could be the rules are getting stricter...
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Hmmm, well that's good to know... !
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well well, it's roxanne. 
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geronimo_appleby said:well well, it's roxanne.
And we lurvvvvv her anyway.
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there's not many of us appleby's around.LadyCibelle said:And we lurvvvvv her anyway.
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J-Krey said:I already have after editing by myself. It was rejected anyhow. I contacted an editor now and hope she will help me
The other problems I mentioned are sufficient to prevent acceptance. If you do not receive your story back in good order, please PM and I can help fix it for you.
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J-Krey...As you can see you have so many reasons from so many 'editors?' I have found that the 'so called editors' are usually , what we refer to in psychology , as anal retentives. What this means is that the editor was fixiated
in the anal stage of development, usually during the first year. Editors are also frustrated school teachers that are too old to teach in a class and miss the control that they had over another persons life. They therefore come to sites like Literotica where their , supposed, expertise in the English language is soon put to work as an editor . This thrills them right down to their withered private parts.
They also use this power of theirs to censor and only let stories be published that are to their own liking and not what the readers want. They will try and get you to totally mess your story by making you edit, to their satisfaction, till the story no longer resembles the original you wrote. The stories on Literotica are becomming more and more mundane and the site is loosing many readers. My suggestion to you is to find a site where you can write the way you want to Believe me all this crap is not worth it.
I have read over your story and see nothing wrong with it except that you spelled Seth wrong once. You wrote Seht. Shame shame on you you horrible creature. How dare you mispell a word. The spelling analist will thrash you
good and will ,no doubt, achieve an orgasm while they do.
in the anal stage of development, usually during the first year. Editors are also frustrated school teachers that are too old to teach in a class and miss the control that they had over another persons life. They therefore come to sites like Literotica where their , supposed, expertise in the English language is soon put to work as an editor . This thrills them right down to their withered private parts.
They also use this power of theirs to censor and only let stories be published that are to their own liking and not what the readers want. They will try and get you to totally mess your story by making you edit, to their satisfaction, till the story no longer resembles the original you wrote. The stories on Literotica are becomming more and more mundane and the site is loosing many readers. My suggestion to you is to find a site where you can write the way you want to Believe me all this crap is not worth it.
I have read over your story and see nothing wrong with it except that you spelled Seth wrong once. You wrote Seht. Shame shame on you you horrible creature. How dare you mispell a word. The spelling analist will thrash you
good and will ,no doubt, achieve an orgasm while they do.
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What the fuck is this post about?prue white said:
Jog on you tosser. My (considerable) experiences on Lit would suggest that an editor, or any other advice medium is positive.
Ah, but I see that this post is your first, which would indicate a trolly attempt.
Jog on and let the original poster follow the advice he seeks.
Oh, and if you want a physical confrontation with me, rather than on the ether, let me know and I'll gladly slap you senseless.
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There's no idiot worse than an idiot who doesn't know he's one.
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apologies for the vehement outburst LC, but jeez, I could smack these arseholes.LadyCibelle said:
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geronimo_appleby said:apologies for the vehement outburst LC, but jeez, I could smack these arseholes.
Oooh Gero, the 'idiot' comment wasn't intented to you.
God, I would NEVER call you an idiot in a million year. It's just that I let that troll get to me and I had written something nasty in reply, then I thought about it and realized he didn't deserve for me to get all worked up like that.
As for smacking arseholes...I'm willing to offer mine.
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yeah, well trolly wound me up too. ...now, about that offerLadyCibelle said:Oooh Gero, the 'idiot' comment wasn't intented to you.
God, I would NEVER call you an idiot in a million year. It's just that I let that troll get to me and I had written something nasty in reply, then I thought about it and realized he didn't deserve for me to get all worked up like that.
As for smacking arseholes...I'm willing to offer mine.
