What's shakin'?
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SEVERUSMAX
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I'm bringing an alien sci-fi story to Lit soon. 
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The jugs on the girl three dors down. They could have their own blog. Maybe that's a plot bunny for someone?CharleyH said:Hopefully, some booty or pendulum action from jogging males? Seen any eye candy or visuals, lately? If so, how will you work it in a story?
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Lots of eye candy. Oh yes.
The other women at beladi class.
The fighters at practice.
The fighters at practice after getting all nice and sweaty, then removing their armor.
And the persistant image of a certain hand holding a certain crop....
The other women at beladi class.
The fighters at practice.
The fighters at practice after getting all nice and sweaty, then removing their armor.
And the persistant image of a certain hand holding a certain crop....
CharleyH
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entitled said:Lots of eye candy. Oh yes.
The other women at beladi class.
The fighters at practice.
The fighters at practice after getting all nice and sweaty, then removing their armor.
And the persistant image of a certain hand holding a certain crop....
Everone SEES it, but how are you writing the fantasy? Is that not what we authors and poets do?
WRITE? 
CharleyH
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Are authors so protective as to not discuss what and how they see? Afraid someone might steel the tale of the femme having her virginal gang bang break with an I/you tale of BDSM, cuz she's a whore who listens to anyone who gives a dick?? LOL As an aside: What is up with Lit psuedo-authors lately?
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CharleyH said:Thats the girl or guy you saw? Blooming or dead?
The people in my life? How do I work them in? Not to many people there at the present but one is all it took to bring out about 60k words in 9 days of writing... one old picture will end up being 100k worth of words....
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I was stuck on a scene in my second Camp Fist story. Colleen Thomas's, and Logophihles replies brought up a memory of my own- and the missing details of my scene fell into place. Oddly, they don't seem to include cunnilingus!
I think I know what you're asking, Charley, for a change And I don't quite know how to answer it. But the work I'm speaking of draws from several places- a side character in a movie I just saw, for example, Some of us were talking about that character, how he would push people untill he got a reaction, and he didn't seem to care if it was bad or good- and I liked that for Griffin. She's mouthy, more reckless, and a little intractible. I also gave her the dark olive skin, and the liar's eyes.
So, that's one example.
The action has to move from one physical place to another, and I couldn't figure out where it should go- Camp Fist is a camping site, with a communal lodge that is well-stocked with slings, crosses and other paraphanilia, but I wanted this to be less carefully set up. The action is almost vanilla- a tormented butch anxious to prove her skills- and they want to get horizontal. So- where? the muddy field just outside the showers? but we just got clean!
Colleen's comment in the "Wet Enough" thread made me think of Gloria, who would say something exactly like that. Voila, Deus ex machina; she can show up and tell the pair to get the hell out of the showers and thier asses back to the tents...
And that's how it goes for me.
I think I know what you're asking, Charley, for a change
And I don't quite know how to answer it. But the work I'm speaking of draws from several places- a side character in a movie I just saw, for example, Some of us were talking about that character, how he would push people untill he got a reaction, and he didn't seem to care if it was bad or good- and I liked that for Griffin. She's mouthy, more reckless, and a little intractible. I also gave her the dark olive skin, and the liar's eyes.So, that's one example.
The action has to move from one physical place to another, and I couldn't figure out where it should go- Camp Fist is a camping site, with a communal lodge that is well-stocked with slings, crosses and other paraphanilia, but I wanted this to be less carefully set up. The action is almost vanilla- a tormented butch anxious to prove her skills- and they want to get horizontal. So- where? the muddy field just outside the showers? but we just got clean!
Colleen's comment in the "Wet Enough" thread made me think of Gloria, who would say something exactly like that. Voila, Deus ex machina; she can show up and tell the pair to get the hell out of the showers and thier asses back to the tents...
And that's how it goes for me.
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Stella_Omega said:I was stuck on a scene in my second Camp Fist story. Colleen Thomas's, and Logophihles replies brought up a memory of my own- and the missing details of my scene fell into place. Oddly, they don't seem to include cunnilingus!
I think I know what you're asking, Charley, for a change
So, that's one example.
The action has to move from one physical place to another, and I couldn't figure out where it should go- Camp Fist is a camping site, with a communal lodge that is well-stocked with slings, crosses and other paraphanilia, but I wanted this to be less carefully set up. The action is almost vanilla- a tormented butch anxious to prove her skills- and they want to get horizontal. So- where? the muddy field just outside the showers? but we just got clean!
Colleen's comment in the "Wet Enough" thread made me think of Gloria, who would say something exactly like that. Voila, Deus ex machina; she can show up and tell the pair to get the hell out of the showers and thier asses back to the tents...
And that's how it goes for me.
I am merely happy you kept the talk up, and to answer? Yes you get me. (you always have)
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CharleyH said:
Well, I have two stories written, both with the same basic subject matter. (Just written differently.) I'm just waiting for a friend to look them over and decide which one is best.
As for what's swinging? Well my wife just walked past with no shirt in a chilly house. (She did bring up two points about the lack of heat.
) I have the feeling I will be warming her up a bit later.Cat
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It's a good thing you already got the writing done, then!SeaCat said:Well, I have two stories written, both with the same basic subject matter. (Just written differently.) I'm just waiting for a friend to look them over and decide which one is best.
As for what's swinging? Well my wife just walked past with no shirt in a chilly house. (She did bring up two points about the lack of heat.
Cat
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CharleyH said:I am merely happy you kept the talk up, and to answer? Yes you get me. (you always have)
I'm still trying to decide if Charley is brilliant beyond my ability to comprehend or completly insane.
Most likely some combination of the two.
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I haven't done it very well, but I like the rise and fall of butt-cheeks with each step crossing the other.
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CharleyH said:
It's a story with plenty of alien-human sex, whatever you want to make of that.
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