RocketLauncher
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I published a story in Non Erotic for the first time on Literotica (Erotica is not my forte) and although the ratings aren't bad they were 'okay'. I've had other Non Erotic stories published on line and in print and the reception has always been well received. Would love some insight as to why this particular story received a lukewarm response. Writing style? Subject matter? Would love an opinion or two so I can decide whether to let it rest or go forward and send it out to other sources. I understand that the subject matter is not to everyone's taste, but is there some glaring mistakes I have overlooked? If anyone bothers to peruse it thank you in advance.
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-pink-gorilla-prostitute
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-pink-gorilla-prostitute
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