What was YOUR most amusing feedback?

[Feotakahari]

Bumping. A guy on TV Tropes agreed to proofread my Mass Effect fanfic (for a contest) if I'd proofread his My Little Pony fanfic. His fic turned out to be a lot longer than mine, so I linked him to the first chapter of Eternal, with the intention of asking him to proofread the later chapters if he liked it. So far, he's given me two sentences of feedback:

"implications of necrophilia. already hooked"

(For the record, the protagonist's wife comes back from the dead.)

 

[Artina Heartflash]

Bumping. A guy on TV Tropes agreed to proofread my Mass Effect fanfic (for a contest) if I'd proofread his My Little Pony fanfic. His fic turned out to be a lot longer than mine, so I linked him to the first chapter of Eternal, with the intention of asking him to proofread the later chapters if he liked it. So far, he's given me two sentences of feedback:

"implications of necrophilia. already hooked"

(For the record, the protagonist's wife comes back from the dead.)

At least it was positive.

I've come to the point where if I get feedback, great. If not, then *shrug*. I know the amount of fiction in the world is overwhelming, so I'm feeling like a minnow in a whale's mouth. But I haven't come to the point of reading any fiction on pink ponies, in exchange for a mule bray on my own work. lol. thank goodness.

 

[Feotakahari]

I haven't come to the point of reading any fiction on pink ponies, in exchange for a mule bray on my own work. lol. thank goodness.

For what it's worth, there's a nonzero chance that the fic will inspire me to watch the show. (It's already inspired me to look at what's on Youtube. Ever wanted to see a pony fight a bear?)

 

[Artina Heartflash]

For what it's worth, there's a nonzero chance that the fic will inspire me to watch the show. (It's already inspired me to look at what's on Youtube. Ever wanted to see a pony fight a bear?)

That scene probably gets more views than a lot of stories here at Lit. Now, tell me: "How can this be happening?"
Wait...when the bear looks back between his legs, did he have a tail?? LOL... I couldn't see the tail for the hips... (kind of like a lot of readers at Lit, speed reading for erotic description and ignoring the tale. mmm? )

Now I have to go back and review.

Thanks for the laugh.

 

[Artina Heartflash]

Yeh, the bear has a tail.

I found this pervy version of cartoon ponies far more hilarious. I WISH I HAD THOUGHT OF IT FIRST!!! LOL!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=xxAJqvslV7M

 

[DG Hear]

I would say the leteralness which some readers take the stories. I think that they believe most of my stories are real (true). I've be blessed, prayed for, while others wanting to beat me up and even kill me.

I've been wished the best of luck in my new life with my new family's, called Gay, a bigot and even asked to commit suicide.

I take these all as compliments to my stories. If I can raise that kind of ire and or emotions from people from just reading my stories, I've done my job. I have well overr a couple of hudred stories on this site and just write for fun.
DG Hear

 

[Artina Heartflash]

I would say the leteralness which some readers take the stories. I think that they believe most of my stories are real (true). I've be blessed, prayed for, while others wanting to beat me up and even kill me.

I've been wished the best of luck in my new life with my new family's, called Gay, a bigot and even asked to commit suicide.

I take these all as compliments to my stories. If I can raise that kind of ire and or emotions from people from just reading my stories, I've done my job. I have well overr a couple of hudred stories on this site and just write for fun.
DG Hear

I think that's a big hope/ dream of everyone who writes here: to make people think and feel.

 

[Artina Heartflash]

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[PayDay]

Nice thread

I obtained this one on this from an Anon:

Liked the story but.....

The writing screamed "Sexually callenged teen with a penthouse and a thesaurus." So you will delete this and call me an asshole. You can't erase the 2 I gave you for crappy style douche boy.

Well written, thought out abuse, good times, I'm still laughing.

 

[Artina Heartflash]

I obtained this one on this from an Anon:



Well written, thought out abuse, good times, I'm still laughing.

I read the story. It made me smile. Man, that comment below your story that someone left today is another winner: the one bitching, "he can have his wife"....something about the two losing their jobs and living in a shelter, in line at the soup kitchen, blah blah blah... Makes me want to throw a "feel better" bowl of chicken soup at the bitchy one.

Now I am inspired to go write a story about shelter--- beneath the nut tree.

 

[PayDay]

Indeed.

I read the story. It made me smile.

Thanks, that's what I was going for.

The one that is even better is towards the bottom making fun of the intentional 'callenged' of another comment.

Loving wives = ftw

 

[Artina Heartflash]

The one that is even better is towards the bottom making fun of the intentional 'callenged' of another comment.

You mean the comment:

I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet.

Now I want to know what a "whinger" is....lol...

I'm going to post a comment now.

 

[PayDay]

Indeed I do

You mean the comment:

I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet.

Now I want to know what a "whinger" is....lol...

I'm going to post a comment now.

It would be of epic and priceless proportions if the Anon had meant to type 'winger' instead.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

It went something like:

Your stories are so easy to ignore...

from Anonymous

---

My thought:


Well obviously not, you found one.

 

[Artina Heartflash]

It went something like:

Your stories are so easy to ignore...

from Anonymous

---

My thought:


Well obviously not, you found one.

THAT is someone who has very large mule blinders. They flap completely over his eyes.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

THAT is someone who has very large mule blinders. They flap completely over his eyes.

I thought it was a little excessive on their part.

 

[TE999]

Interesting thread.

I received some anonymous feedback on a Lesbian Sex story once that read to the effect "Have you been following me? That's what my grrls (sic) and I do on weekends and we snort coke."

I took it as a compliment.

 

[PayDay]

Anons...

I thought it was a little excessive on their part.

Indeed, baseless too

I received some anonymous feedback on a Lesbian Sex story once that read to the effect "Have you been following me? That's what my grrls (sic) and I do on weekends and we snort coke."

I took it as a compliment.

I would as well. Now I want feedback like that. I might just have to learn to write more betterer.

 

[Cruel2BKind]

I hate the comments where I get accused of plagiarism.

I'm writing a longer, plot-heavy story called Alone at the End of the World, I have two of three chapters out right now, and it's basically about a zombie apocalypse. NO, THERE IS NOT ANY ZOMBIE OR ZOMBIE-HUMAN SEX, THAT IS DISGUSTING.

It's actually about a group of survivors, and about how a young gay boy is at first abused by someone in the group, and then he finds a lover. However, I got several comments saying that it sounded like I was copying other movies or books. I didn't mind it so much when they pointed out a movie that was kind of similar, but one dick said that the story reminded him of 'The Crazies' a very shitty sci-fi movie that was nothing like my story.

Grr. Just had to get that out. Here's the link if your interested.

http://www.literotica.com/s/alone-at-the-end-of-the-world

 

[Artina Heartflash]

I hate the comments where I get accused of plagiarism.

I'm writing a longer, plot-heavy story called Alone at the End of the World, I have two of three chapters out right now, and it's basically about a zombie apocalypse. NO, THERE IS NOT ANY ZOMBIE OR ZOMBIE-HUMAN SEX, THAT IS DISGUSTING.

It's actually about a group of survivors, and about how a young gay boy is at first abused by someone in the group, and then he finds a lover. However, I got several comments saying that it sounded like I was copying other movies or books. I didn't mind it so much when they pointed out a movie that was kind of similar, but one dick said that the story reminded him of 'The Crazies' a very shitty sci-fi movie that was nothing like my story.

Grr. Just had to get that out. Here's the link if your interested.

http://www.literotica.com/s/alone-at-the-end-of-the-world

Have you ever seen a Canadian named Rick Genest aka Zombie Boy? He looks like a tattooed skeleton. I would do him in a heartbeat...even if it were my last heartbeat. lol.

But really, I know your pain. I have been writing a series called KinkSSparK for about a month. Last week, as I was in middle of writing the story climax, (which covers 3 chapters), I discovered a Lady Gaga video that has very similar ideas/characters as in my story. My jaw hit the floor. I can't print my story here because now I fear folks are gonna look at the core and say "Uh huh....another ripoff from a popular artist." Gaaaawd....

 

[amofiga]

Most want to know if a story is true. It always surprises me. It's like soap opera actors that would have people throw glasses of water at them in restaurants or yell at them on the street because they were mistreating some other actor on their show. Amazing.

 

[Artina Heartflash]

Most want to know if a story is true. It always surprises me. It's like soap opera actors that would have people throw glasses of water at them in restaurants or yell at them on the street because they were mistreating some other actor on their show. Amazing.

wow. I wonder how much National Enquirer is earning these days. Any positions open for some kind of freelance?

 

[PayDay]

Fuck them.

I hate the comments where I get accused of plagiarism.

It's actually about a group of survivors, and about how a young gay boy is at first abused by someone in the group, and then he finds a lover. However, I got several comments saying that it sounded like I was copying other movies or books. I didn't mind it so much when they pointed out a movie that was kind of similar, but one dick said that the story reminded him of 'The Crazies' a very shitty sci-fi movie that was nothing like my story.

I just wrote a first time story, and a whole bunch of the ideas cross over with a whole bunch of movies, books, and other stories. That's the problem with cliche'd topics.

So I cheated, and gave the story a second title after the author's note:

A Misanthrope and Artichokes
or
A Variation on a Story

It should shut up the "you stole this idea" crowd, even if I did steal the 'or' from R&B.

As an addition I got this on that same story:

This message contains feedback for: PayDay
About the submission: A Misanthrope and Artichokes
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Title:

Check out Narcolepsy

Comments:

Wilbert probably has narcolepsy. It is a brain problem that is hard to diagnose. Many people have it for ten years before the Docs figure out what it is. It is treatable.

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*

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I think they think I personally have some disorder, and not just a character in a fiction. I do some great work if I do say so myself.

 

[PayDay]

This is why I Hate, and Love, feedback.

So I obtained both of these on the same story, never know who to believe, one from an Anon, one from an Anon with a name.

Graduation . . .

Well, pornographic literature has graduated into a full, artistic, talented, professional genre in 2011.

or

Now your a man...

is perfectly written? Pardon me while I roll my eyes.

This was ill-thought-out and not all that well-written. I could have overlooked much of what was wrong, had the author not come out swinging, proclaim him/herself such a genius.

Oh, and that shit about, "if you don't like it, don't read it"? How the fuck am I gonna know I liked it if I don't read it? I wish I hadn't, now, but you need to use a little critical thinking.

Yeah, take your lumps, write something else, and get an editor. Just don't be such a pompous ass.

Best hate I've gotten so far (even though I baited it). At least they read it, right?

 

[sr71plt]

"Oh, and that shit about, "if you don't like it, don't read it"? How the fuck am I gonna know I liked it if I don't read it?"

That seems like a good point.