what should I write.
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niceguy2002tim
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hummm...
Lilguy,
hi. How are you? I see there are no responses to this post so I thought I'd be the first. I am not sure I understand what you are asking. Are you saying you want to re-write one of your old stories? or re-write/steal somebody else's story?
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
Lilguy,
hi. How are you? I see there are no responses to this post so I thought I'd be the first. I am not sure I understand what you are asking. Are you saying you want to re-write one of your old stories? or re-write/steal somebody else's story?
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
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ummm
Well,
if I had to pick, I'd say 4 Women of Gordor. It had a decent start, but some of the inner threads were too bland. By that, I mean they need some spice and beef. But, that's my thoughts. You can pick for yourself. What is your highest rated story? Which has the most views? Most positive comments? Which was your favourite to write? Don't go with one that somebody else tells you to. Pick one you enjoy and have fun with it.
-Tim
Well,
if I had to pick, I'd say 4 Women of Gordor. It had a decent start, but some of the inner threads were too bland. By that, I mean they need some spice and beef. But, that's my thoughts. You can pick for yourself. What is your highest rated story? Which has the most views? Most positive comments? Which was your favourite to write? Don't go with one that somebody else tells you to. Pick one you enjoy and have fun with it.
-Tim
amativissimus
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lilguy, you've got to work on your spelling and grammar. At your best, you come across to the readers as if you're an ill-educated 12-year-old with a great imagination, but no discipline.
Just one grumpy editor's opinion.
Just one grumpy editor's opinion.
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amativissimus said:
Lilguy is like a force of nature, he is never going to change, you just got to deal with it and be glad he brings a sharp imagination to the story.
Lilguy, I agree with Tim the four women of Gordor is the story that is the most enjoyable, and you should work on fixing it up.
daciasdesire
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Why pick one and start it again? It would be better in my opinion to take the ones you already have and put your effort into correcting them. You may find you get more threads if the stories you have are more legible.
Dacia
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Lilguy,
why do you even bother asking? I suppose it's that force of nature mentality. I thought you were originally asking which story you should fix up, like Dacia said. But you mean to tell us that you're going to start a new story all over again? That's silly. Best thing you could do is edit and re-write an existing one. You already have about 45 stories between you different Chyoo IDs.
-Tim
why do you even bother asking? I suppose it's that force of nature mentality. I thought you were originally asking which story you should fix up, like Dacia said. But you mean to tell us that you're going to start a new story all over again? That's silly. Best thing you could do is edit and re-write an existing one. You already have about 45 stories between you different Chyoo IDs.
-Tim
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iespell
Here is the program that I use to check spelling on the fly if I am not in word, or some other office program. It is free and all you need to do is go to iespell.com and download it.
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Here is the program that I use to check spelling on the fly if I am not in word, or some other office program. It is free and all you need to do is go to iespell.com and download it.
It is a great program that has made my life much easier when writing e-mails etc. Download it and use it and you will make many fewer mistakes. It has help me as I am crappy at spelling. Now if I could just find something to fix grammer, POV, and tense I would be all set.
