lovecraft68
Bad Doggie
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What? She invaded his privacy? That bitch. How dare she. Toss her ass in the Loving Wives category. She needs to be punished. Any “real” story, he’d have a lock on his door. Come on, really. What were you thinking? I can’t believe this. I’m never reading another story you write ever again. Nor will I read another story from a writer with a name starting with the letter ‘L.’ And what kind of guy has a journal? Wouldn’t he prefer Dad? Come on, Realism. I want realism in my fantasy.
Okay. Sorry. For those of you who are uncertain, I’m a smartass.
Well, at least she banged him. Did she get pregnant?
Ummm, I keep a journal. Have since I was a kid. My foster mother did indeed read it one day and I got sent to talk to someone, but it had nothing to do with incest.
Every author has their own squicks and even though I enjoy the incest category pregnancy is not a boundary I cross. I get a ton of comments however saying that I should always do a second chapter and have her get pregnant.
If you care to check out the story in question here it is
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-mothers-sacrifice-2
Warning, if so-so grammar will stop you from reading then.....
Back to topic at hand what will get me to stop reading a series is if I realize every chapter is simply the same two people doing it in a different position/place.
Chapter three "This time mom takes it in the ass!"
It becomes a game of X-rated Clue
It was mom, in the library, with the Hitachi wand.