what haunts me

[addieQ]

I'm sort of haunted by my own stories. I write them for myself.

I have written a bunch of stories here on the literotica site. Trying to articulate my own fetishes and longing can be so overwhelming. I use this site and my writing to try and make sense of a relationship I had with a girl a few years ago. I really loved her, and I miss her. And the lesbian stories I've written are all me trying to remember and re-live my time with her.

Here's an example:
http://www.literotica.com/s/alone-with-my-friend-tess

I don't have that many lesbian stories in my listing her on literotica. Mostly I've written incest stories where sisters play the main role in the narrative. I do this because, well, there is just more LOVE if they are sisters together.

Here's a sister story:
http://www.literotica.com/s/magical-tea-1

I've had some beautiful relationships with some men, but that isn't what haunts me. It was sex with that one girl that makes me crazy.

I like getting feedback on my stories. It really helps me.

peace to everyone
addie q

 

[addieQ]

"moved" (?)

This got "moved" on the list of threads.

What does that mean?

addie

 

[sr71plt]

Moved from where? You specifically ask for feedback. This is the "want feedback" subforum.

 

[lovecraft68]

Just read your sister story.

I'm not one to go on and on and dissect a story or pick things apart, all I'll say is this,

The hottest damn sister incest story I've read here! Loved the part with the knife.

Keep writing.

 

[addieQ]

The metaphor of liberating something

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The part about the knife - where I wrote about the two mormon sisters, and the oder sister cuts her younger sisters panties! That part?

Just so you know - I loved writing that section! The metaphor of liberating something, the older sister making the point that she needs to liberate hersef from her past. I'm glad you picked that tiny scene!

Huge thanks!

 

[lovecraft68]

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The part about the knife - where I wrote about the two mormon sisters, and the oder sister cuts her younger sisters panties! That part?

Just so you know - I loved writing that section! The metaphor of liberating something, the older sister making the point that she needs to liberate hersef from her past. I'm glad you picked that tiny scene!

Huge thanks!

No problem. Admittedly it excited me more in the sense I enjoy some knife play(but not cutting or actual blood play) I just find it very erotic.

well done story.

 

[MaxSebastian]

I really enjoyed the Tess story, and I don't usually bother with purely girl on girl. It was really sweet, although hinted at underage high jinks, particularly with all the 'little girl' references regarding the DVD they watched.

I did think some of your tenses a little inconsistent in places - past tense slipping into present tense sometimes - and the CAPITALIZATION of some of the words to emphasize them just REALLY WASN'T NECESSARY, makes it seem unnecessarily amateurish.

But, I like the emotive nature of your writing.