Magnetron
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I read Magnetron's poetry
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I read Magnetron's poetry
There is a lot more to poetry than whether one centers it or right justifies. Maybe, in time, the poet laureate Magnetron will learn that.
Take some Tums and lie down for a while; that feeling in your stomach will eventually subside.
Cleaver? I read Magnetron's poetry and got hold of the word "unabashioned" so it held reminiscience for me of the poem "The Ship" I had written albeit in a different setting. I do not believe you do not have the soul of a poet.
They tell me the same thing at the other five poetry websites I submit to.
I'm such a noob.![]()
Modern neuroscience says that I am wrong to believe older neuroscience that there are left and right specific functions of the brain, in that the right side which (this part they agree) controls the left side of the body and (this part they do not) creative function.
I am very much a left brain-dominant person. I am not sure if the right side is underdeveloped, neglected, or the left side is simply overly assertive.
There are people that were studied for specific brain injuries where the two sides are cut off from each other and I think that supports the old notion.
So my left brain in analyzing how I seem to process things and running a monitoring track on the right side's measly efforts, have decided that I do better when I switch off my left brain.
Do you know Mel Tillis? He cannot speak with any degree of clarity for a bad stutter, but he sings flawlessly. Speech and music are in different parts of the brain. (Again, maybe it isn't strictly left-right, but it is these cells and those cells)
I can sing, play guitar, dance and write poetry, but I cannot do them while counting. I have to consciously switch back and forth. I know how to read music, but I cannot do so while playing. I "read" the music, memorize it, then I instruct my fingers which notes to play. I do it slowly, over and over with no soul at all, and badly, until my muscle memory "learns" the song, then I can play with nuance and feeling, but not during the process.
Dunno why that is.

Well I don't know Mel Tellis, but I have heard of him, so it is maybe that you practice with dilegence and thoughtfulness, and then when you play or sing or write, you do so with - oh I think I know about this - in the process of learning, one first becomes aware that there is something maybe worth becoming aware of, then one learns about it, and thinks about it and works at it, and then one just zones in and does it.![]()


Modern neuroscience says that I am wrong to believe older neuroscience that there are left and right specific functions of the brain, in that the right side which (this part they agree) controls the left side of the body and (this part they do not) creative function.
I am very much a left brain-dominant person. I am not sure if the right side is underdeveloped, neglected, or the left side is simply overly assertive.
There are people that were studied for specific brain injuries where the two sides are cut off from each other and I think that supports the old notion.
So my left brain in analyzing how I seem to process things and running a monitoring track on the right side's measly efforts, have decided that I do better when I switch off my left brain.
Do you know Mel Tillis? He cannot speak with any degree of clarity for a bad stutter, but he sings flawlessly. Speech and music are in different parts of the brain. (Again, maybe it isn't strictly left-right, but it is these cells and those cells)
I can sing, play guitar, dance and write poetry, but I cannot do them while counting. I have to consciously switch back and forth. I know how to read music, but I cannot do so while playing. I "read" the music, memorize it, then I instruct my fingers which notes to play. I do it slowly, over and over with no soul at all, and badly, until my muscle memory "learns" the song, then I can play with nuance and feeling, but not during the process.
Dunno why that is.
Very nice. There is a lot more to poetry than whether one centers it or right justifies.
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I was just remarking to Cleaver that I have trouble reading non-standard prose. I think it is beneficial for me to do so as it slows me to a stillness that contrasts nicely with the ordinary frenetic pace with which I intake.
The more time I spend on GB the more I get it. I probably still need to add about 4 or 5 users to the ignore list, but I'm not that diligent.
there is
poetry is a mult-layered creature: it works less with words than with the interaction of the imagery created by the most carefully selected words and their sounds. sound, a musical element, can be key to the perceived success of a poem's cohesiveness.
you are right about the value of reading cleaver and other poets who write with restraint rather than flood the age with a tsunami of words. it gives you, the reader, space to explore, concentrate, and fill in the 'gaps'. in prose, i witter on; when i first explored poetry i did the same. with time and experience, one word or phrase takes the place of many, and each image wrought will interact with the individual reader's own headology: the reader is half of the poem. the most 'popular' poems, ones most people can relate to through their own experiences, work with common themes that release a sense of empathy/understandy within the readers. for me, the best poems are when the words disappear and i'm experiencing the visuals/hearing the sounds/feeling the emotions.
I am also a big fan of the people. Friendships, both those I've made and those we get to observe by paying attention. I've made a few friends here who are closer to me than many of my "real life" friends. Of course, those GB friendships have ventured off site into texting, email, Facebook, Skype, and even meeting up.
Also, this place is damn funny, filled with the witty dry humor I love and inside jokes marking years and layers of friendships.
this post.I couldn't have said it better myself, wait yes I can. Oh golly gee , i justthis post.I couldn't have said it better myself, wait yes I can.
OK I'm not into Skype, Facebook or twitter but I will add the lying, backstabbing of friends, and the shameless manipulations of people to get what they want. Oh and the finger banging.
that's a good novelIn "Polar Star" Martin Cruz Smith has a character quote a Russian author (poet maybe?) I am weak on Russian Writers (I should remedy that) so I don't remember if his author is made up or not.
What the person said about Russian Poetry was that the poetry is in the spaces between the words.
... *facepalm* why is it always Query? Hasn't he got anything better to do. Sigh!
Oh golly gee , i justthis post.I couldn't have said it better myself, wait yes I can.
OK I'm not into Skype, Facebook or twitter but I will add the lying, backstabbing of friends, and the shameless manipulations of people to get what they want. Oh and the finger banging.