What could keep a poem from being accepted?

Ray Dario

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Hey guys, I'm not a poet so I don't hang here much, but this thread

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?threadid=80386

popped up over in "Story Feedback" I've taken a look at her poem, and it's very good. Her punctuation is fine, her grammer is good, her structure is good. There is no underage stuff in it, so it's not that. No terrible violence or beastiallity. Honestly I didn't see any reason for it not to be accepted.

So what would it take to keep a poem from being accepted here at Lit. Any help on this would be appreciated by me and I'm sure by Icy too.

Ray
 
I don't see her poem on the thread you have a link to.
She should be asking Laurel about it. That's the quickest way to get answers. It could be something simple that Laurel can let her know how to fix.
I'll be surprised if it's punctuation. It would have to be really bad.
 
She emailed her poem to me, so no, it's not on the thread.

Yeah, I told her to send Laurel a note, but Laurel is so busy, I thought if ya'll knew of something easy you could help her out.

Ray
 
"i recently submitted an erotic poem and it wasnt approved
because of punctuality and havnt had a lot of luck in improving it
so that it can be submitted. Please send me a holer back."

Well, she says it's because of "punctuality." If she knows that, then someone must have told her that was the problem. Maybe she can get someone to edit the poem, and then she can try submitting it again.
 
WickedEve said:
"i recently submitted an erotic poem and it wasnt approved
because of punctuality and havnt had a lot of luck in improving it
so that it can be submitted. Please send me a holer back."

Well, she says it's because of "punctuality." If she knows that, then someone must have told her that was the problem. Maybe she can get someone to edit the poem, and then she can try submitting it again.

I'm guessing she meant puncutation? Or was there some sort of time limit...

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