What Are You Thinking? Continued 14

I received great critique comments for my short story. I need to revise it using their comments...it's shaping up to be a very good non-fiction short story...
 
You don’t need a vegan blueberry muffin, you can have a delicious blueberry-kale-cacao smoothie at home. 😀 😀 😀
 
There is a tree frog chirping outside my bedroom window…

..but it is so not in sync with the music I am listening to 🙄
 
Harry Potter's father (could be brother I suppose) Graham is going to coach the Swedish men's football team, he will need to be a wizard.
 
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