What are you doing right now? (besides online & on Lit.)

[DeevaLicious]

*grinning*

mmmm telling me youve forgotten my talents :O im hurt

*giggles* well at least you still have power and some semblence of distraction

Nope, haven't forgotten. I have a pretty good memory most days =P

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

Nope, haven't forgotten. I have a pretty good memory most days =P

mmmmm, good thing or bad thing given the drama that occured last year, drama im happy has been resolved, and the cause of my w((semi-almost)) withdrawl from the lounges, especially after my heart attack last year

 

[DeevaLicious]

mmmmm, good thing or bad thing given the drama that occured last year, drama im happy has been resolved, and the cause of my w((semi-almost)) withdrawl from the lounges, especially after my heart attack last year

In my opinion, any past negativity should stay in the past. Sorry to hear you had a heart attack hun, that sucks ass. Doing better now?

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

In my opinion, any past negativity should stay in the past. Sorry to hear you had a heart attack hun, that sucks ass. Doing better now?

yea im doin better, ive lost weight and trying to change my diet, ((hard as fuck x.x)) im on meds now full time to maintain my blood pressure

 

[DeevaLicious]

yea im doin better, ive lost weight and trying to change my diet, ((hard as fuck x.x)) im on meds now full time to maintain my blood pressure

I'm with you on changing diet and getting fit. I've made huge changes in the last year and am doing a lot better for it. Good for you for making those life changes so you feel better. It's not easy at all. But it's worth it.

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

I'm with you on changing diet and getting fit. I've made huge changes in the last year and am doing a lot better for it. Good for you for making those life changes so you feel better. It's not easy at all. But it's worth it.

*tail wags and winks*

 

[DeevaLicious]

*tail wags and winks*

yanks tail and laughs

I haven't done that in forever!

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

yanks tail and laughs

I haven't done that in forever!

*yelps and pounces growling and tickles you*

 

[DeevaLicious]

*yelps and pounces growling and tickles you*

gets wolfy pounced and tickled, grrr's fiercely but ends up laughing and cussing

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

gets wolfy pounced and tickled, grrr's fiercely but ends up laughing and cussing

*sticks tongue out*

 

[DeevaLicious]

*sticks tongue out*

pulls it and giggles

 

[LoganDarkHolme]

pulls it and giggles

forgot one where one who enjoyed pulling on things *smirking*

although i have something you havent pulled in a while *lewd grin*

 

[DeevaLicious]

forgot one where one who enjoyed pulling on things *smirking*

although i have something you havent pulled in a while *lewd grin*

Puulllleaassse you didn't forget I can be a really bratty pain in the ass. We totally thread-jacked this thread btw.

blows a raspberry on your cheek and courteously ends thread-jackage (that sounds so dirty!)

 

[Cheska]

Being confused by multiple writers telling me what I am doing wrong... one tiny piece at a time.

But not by the clever gentleman here. *bows to him*

 

[ShyMystica]

Being confused by multiple writers telling me what I am doing wrong... one tiny piece at a time.

But not by the clever gentleman here. *bows to him*

I wouldn't stress over writers telling what you are doing wrong. It is only an opinion. Write what is true for you, and you can't ever go wrong.

 

[Cheska]

I wouldn't stress over writers telling what you are doing wrong. It is only an opinion. Write what is true for you, and you can't ever go wrong.

Thank you, you are very kind.. But I asked for this help.. torture?.. hmm..

Anyway.. It's pretty much an attempt at a character description for an RP that doesn't exist .. yet.

I think I have it almost perfect, but someone tells me that i have mixed my past an present tense up.. but not exactly where an how.

 

[Nightfreak]

Yes if there that picky then don't write with them. Just follow your heart when you write. I sometimes ask for suggestions in my writing but it's only from a few that I known for a while now.

 

[ShyMystica]

Thank you, you are very kind.. But I asked for this help.. torture?.. hmm..

Anyway.. It's pretty much an attempt at a character description for an RP that doesn't exist .. yet.

I think I have it almost perfect, but someone tells me that i have mixed my past an present tense up.. but not exactly where an how.

That really sucks.

That is why people with an editor mindset are good people to trust. A good editor explains both strengths and weaknesses, and suggests how to fix them.

If they are that picky over a character profile, I can't imagine how the writing will be...I imagine stressful.

Just don't take it to heart. I know that is hard, especially with writing. But at the end of the day, it is really your own opinion that matters. If you are proud of it, be proud.

 

[ShyMystica]

Yes if there that picky then don't write with them. Just follow your heart when you write. I sometimes ask for suggestions in my writing but it's only from a few that I known for a while now.

Exactly

Nicely put.

 

[Annisthyrienne]

Sometimes you have to decide if you're going to be a writer or a role player. To me, there is a difference. I'm a role player who happens to express that through writing. I have no aspirations of competing in writing challenges, getting published, or trying to make a living by writing. I role play for fun. If it gets to the point where it isn't fun, I stop doing it. That's my advice.

 

[Ahren]

I wouldn't stress over writers telling what you are doing wrong. It is only an opinion. Write what is true for you, and you can't ever go wrong.

Criticism is important to improving as a writer or an artist or anything really. If someone is genuinely trying to help you get better then do not brush aside their suggestions as merely 'opinions'.

 

[ShyMystica]

Sometimes you have to decide if you're going to be a writer or a role player. To me, there is a difference. I'm a role player who happens to express that through writing. I have no aspirations of competing in writing challenges, getting published, or trying to make a living by writing. I role play for fun. If it gets to the point where it isn't fun, I stop doing it. That's my advice.

*applauds*

I like you Thyri...

 

[Cheska]

Sometimes you have to decide if you're going to be a writer or a role player. To me, there is a difference. I'm a role player who happens to express that through writing. I have no aspirations of competing in writing challenges, getting published, or trying to make a living by writing. I role play for fun. If it gets to the point where it isn't fun, I stop doing it. That's my advice.

That is pretty much where I am. =)

 

[Cheska]

Criticism is important to improving as a writer or an artist or anything really. If someone is genuinely trying to help you get better then do not brush aside their suggestions as merely 'opinions'.

Agreed, but a editor/critic should say what he means clearly and to the point. Not mixing jumbled metaphors to try an be a clever Dick.

 

[ShyMystica]

Criticism is important to improving as a writer or an artist or anything really. If someone is genuinely trying to help you get better then do not brush aside their suggestions as merely 'opinions'.

I do not brush aside any suggestions as merely opinions. I decide whether to agree or disagree with what they tell me. Some people are genuine and wish to help. And others, as it seems you may fall into the category of, say things simply to stir shit and hurt feelings. And that isn't constructive at all.

What I am saying is that it is your own self that puts value on the 'statements' of others. You can choose to let such criticism destroy and hurt you, or you can embrace it and find a way to adapt their suggestions to your own style.

What I dislike is writers who bleed themselves dry at the sake of the 'perfect piece', doing everything everyone tells them to do and then they lose their personality and enjoyment. I see not point to it, if it is your profession or hobby, that if you lose yourself and the enjoyment of writing that you should continue.