TabooTeller
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I decided to air my opinions of these two stories be K.K. together since they go together. And I don’t have a whole to say about either one. And I reealize these have been around a while but I had things to say about them and there could be others who haven't been here that long
I like them both. Each are well written even though Wendy is better written. However the sex scenes in Wendy’s Story are better. The introduction is a little long in the first one also. It does seem like Jim gets into the bad guy’s house a bit too easy, dittos with getting into his computer. The ending where he yells at his wife seems a bit harsh even though understandable. Looks like he wants her to become his sex slave. That is why I think this story badly needs an update. The other stories along these lines, “Marcy” and “The Asshole” each have more complete endings. Marcy does have a sequel in fact. For this story it doesn’t have to be a long sequel or update. In fact what I have in mind would only take a few pages but K.K.’s imagination could probably find things to add. I would not be sure where to add sex scenes except with Wendy and Jim. That could be enough of course. I feel so strongly about this I would write one myself in need be except I wouldn’t know how to get permission nor I don’t think I would do the characters justice. Since I am a helpless romantic I know where I would desire the update to go but I am sure there are those out there that would disagree.
I do not know when this story was first written, months ago and maybe years ago but that’s all the more reason for an update. I do know its on another web site also. In fact I may have first read it on that other site.
K.K. does seem to like to write these types of stories, he has three I know of. I am counting “Wendy” and “Wendy’s Story” as one as I am “Marci” and its sequel. I included “The Asshole” in the three even though it is slightly different in that the husband started it and K.K. didn’t have the husband care, or realize or think about that. The ending could have been the same even with that included. There are a couple of his stories I haven’t read yet, one has four parts I think, so I don’t for sure if he has any other of this type of story or not.
One last thing is that I have sent a comment to K.K. and I will send him a copy of most of this, but I don’t if he read my comment or reads this forum. I asked a question but no reply. I have sent comments to four writers and none have responded, I wonder if there is a rule for Liteerotica writers not to respond to comments or if for some reason they didn’t receive what I sent.
I wonder if there are any others who would want an update. This is a bit longer then I thought it would be but I wanted to get certain things off my chest.
D. C.
D.C.
I like them both. Each are well written even though Wendy is better written. However the sex scenes in Wendy’s Story are better. The introduction is a little long in the first one also. It does seem like Jim gets into the bad guy’s house a bit too easy, dittos with getting into his computer. The ending where he yells at his wife seems a bit harsh even though understandable. Looks like he wants her to become his sex slave. That is why I think this story badly needs an update. The other stories along these lines, “Marcy” and “The Asshole” each have more complete endings. Marcy does have a sequel in fact. For this story it doesn’t have to be a long sequel or update. In fact what I have in mind would only take a few pages but K.K.’s imagination could probably find things to add. I would not be sure where to add sex scenes except with Wendy and Jim. That could be enough of course. I feel so strongly about this I would write one myself in need be except I wouldn’t know how to get permission nor I don’t think I would do the characters justice. Since I am a helpless romantic I know where I would desire the update to go but I am sure there are those out there that would disagree.
I do not know when this story was first written, months ago and maybe years ago but that’s all the more reason for an update. I do know its on another web site also. In fact I may have first read it on that other site.
K.K. does seem to like to write these types of stories, he has three I know of. I am counting “Wendy” and “Wendy’s Story” as one as I am “Marci” and its sequel. I included “The Asshole” in the three even though it is slightly different in that the husband started it and K.K. didn’t have the husband care, or realize or think about that. The ending could have been the same even with that included. There are a couple of his stories I haven’t read yet, one has four parts I think, so I don’t for sure if he has any other of this type of story or not.
One last thing is that I have sent a comment to K.K. and I will send him a copy of most of this, but I don’t if he read my comment or reads this forum. I asked a question but no reply. I have sent comments to four writers and none have responded, I wonder if there is a rule for Liteerotica writers not to respond to comments or if for some reason they didn’t receive what I sent.
I wonder if there are any others who would want an update. This is a bit longer then I thought it would be but I wanted to get certain things off my chest.
D. C.
D.C.
