Welsh Rarebit's Bare Bits (BBW)

Good morning, lovemonster,

I just want to tell you that I read your literotica story "Birthday Surprise" this morning after getting up and I loved it *very* much.
This story is **very** well written and you did a great job to keep the tension in this story till the end...thank you so much for writing it!
When reading it, first I thought it will be a lovely twosome between you and your partner in the hotel....then you discovered a second guy being there, thus having an exciting threesome now, **lucky lovemonster**....and finally I saw that you actually dealt with 3 guys, **greedy lovemonster**..
It is a very nice fantasy. I have this kind of fantasies too, but mostly my fantasies were limited to three persons till now...thus your fantasies are in advance of mine the moment...but I´ll try my best to keep up...
I also loved your very detailed descriptions throughout your story...your selection of suitable clothes/lingerie at the beginning of he story...of him undressing you in the hotel room...undoing your suspender straps...rolling down your stockings...unhooking your bustiere...later two heads bending to your chest...your whole story is written in a very vivid and completely believable style, so it was quite easy for me to imagine me playing the role of him...when reading an erotic story, I like to identify myself with one of the people involved while reading the story...

It´s good to have such fantasies, even if most of them never will come true...it shows that you are still able to dream, to dream wonderful dreams...keep dreaming, lovemonster...
Have a wonderful day, lovemonster!

P.S.: Actually I think it´s good for us that not all of our dreams and fantasies will come true.... I think some of the experiences we dream about would be very lovely and exciting indeed...but some of them also would not be as satisfying as they have been in our dreams, thus leaving back a feeling of shallowness and emptyness instead of our desired fulfillment within us...
 
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poetboy said:
Good morning, lovemonster,

I just want to tell you that I read your literotica story "Birthday Surprise" this morning after getting up and I loved it *very* much.
This story is **very** well written and you did a great job to keep the tension in this story till the end...thank you so much for writing it!
When reading it, first I thought it will be a lovely twosome between you and your partner in the hotel....then you discovered a second guy being there, thus having an exciting threesome now, **lucky lovemonster**....and finally I saw that you actually dealt with 3 guys, **greedy lovemonster**..
It is a very nice fantasy. I have this kind of fantasies too, but mostly my fantasies were limited to three persons till now...thus your fantasies are in advance of mine the moment...but I´ll try my best to keep up...
I also loved your very detailed descriptions throughout your story...your selection of suitable clothes/lingerie at the beginning of he story...of him undressing you in the hotel room...undoing your suspender straps...rolling down your stockings...unhooking your bustiere...later two heads bending to your chest...your whole story is written in a very vivid and completely believable style, so it was quite easy for me to imagine me playing the role of him...when reading an erotic story, I like to identify myself with one of the people involved while reading the story...

It´s good to have such fantasies, even if most of them never will come true...it shows that you are still able to dream, to dream wonderful dreams...keep dreaming, lovemonster...
Have a wonderful day, lovemonster!

P.S.: Actually I think it´s good for us that not all of our dreams and fantasies will come true.... I think some of the experiences we dream about would be very lovely and exciting indeed...but some of them also would not be as satisfying as they have been in our dreams, thus leaving back a feeling of shallowness and emptyness instead of our desired fulfillment within us...

Thank you honey, appreciate your comments...it was my first ever attempt at writing something of this nature, so I'm glad it's been so well received. :rose:
 
smoothdrops said:
Good morning to you too, sexy lady. How are you today?

:kiss:

A little tired...slept late this morning smoothie...stayed up too late last night being wicked... :D

How are you hun? :)
 
lovemonster said:
A little tired...slept late this morning smoothie...stayed up too late last night being wicked... :D

How are you hun? :)


I'm good thanks (if a little envious of the wickedness you enjoyed!)

;)
 
smoothdrops said:
I'm good thanks (if a little envious of the wickedness you enjoyed!)

;)

LOL...I'm sure you'll find yourself indulging in wickedness before very long too...this place does that to you... :D :devil:
 
lovemonster said:
LOL...I'm sure you'll find yourself indulging in wickedness before very long too...this place does that to you... :D :devil:


I certainly hope so LOL

:nana:
 
lovemonster said:
Thank you honey, appreciate your comments...it was my first ever attempt at writing something of this nature, so I'm glad it's been so well received. :rose:

Oh, I see you are already awake and quite busy this morning...Have a wicked, but wonderful day!
 
lovemonster said:
Morning bnb...how is my sexy man this saturday morning? :kiss: :kiss:

It's been good so far...even better now that i'm talking to you...i'd die a happy man if I was actually holding you in my arms though...:rose:
 
poetboy said:
Oh, I see you are already awake and quite busy this morning...Have a wicked, but wonderful day!

LOL...you have a wonderful day too poetboy :rose:
 
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