Welp, my Muse got tired of resting...

[Kev H]

...so she slipped into my dreams and gave me a doosey. I am following her command to turn it into a story (it even fits the nude theme in an interesting way), but I am unsure if it is distractingly unrealistic (a little is fine and my literary right, but I do not want to seem as ignorant as I really am).

It's short and sweet and ready to submit, but I need an opinion on anything glaring from a mother who remembers her firstborn (newborn), as I have no clue other than the scenario my dream gave me. And no, before anyone freaks, it's nothing perverse involving a newborn. Well, not really. Anyway, can a mother or two PM me and give it a quick-over before I submit it? (I'd like to submit it tonight, since I am almost out of time to get a wider read.)

I am installing MSN on my new computer, and will check back once it's done. Jammies? If you are around are you up for a quick proofing (1200 words) to keep any unintended humor/tradegy out of the story? If not, I understand, but my Muse knocked and I must answer her right now or really piss her off.

Happy writing to you all.

Kev

 

[BlackShanglan]

Mused or museless, it's damned good to see you, Kev. Welcome back to the fold.

Shanglan

 

[Kev H]

Hey there, Shan, I did not leave, I was only breaking (letting the 3 or so stories I am editting sit for a few weeks) and in minimal-lurker mode. But nonethless, it's also good to "see" you.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

welcome back, Kev... I see newborns all the time, I'm a doula...

and I've had four newborns of my own...

send away!

 

[FallingToFly]

...so she slipped into my dreams and gave me a doosey. I am following her command to turn it into a story (it even fits the nude theme in an interesting way), but I am unsure if it is distractingly unrealistic (a little is fine and my literary right, but I do not want to seem as ignorant as I really am).

It's short and sweet and ready to submit, but I need an opinion on anything glaring from a mother who remembers her firstborn (newborn), as I have no clue other than the scenario my dream gave me. And no, before anyone freaks, it's nothing perverse involving a newborn. Well, not really. Anyway, can a mother or two PM me and give it a quick-over before I submit it? (I'd like to submit it tonight, since I am almost out of time to get a wider read.)

I am installing MSN on my new computer, and will check back once it's done. Jammies? If you are around are you up for a quick proofing (1200 words) to keep any unintended humor/tradegy out of the story? If not, I understand, but my Muse knocked and I must answer her right now or really piss her off.

Happy writing to you all.

Kev

KEV!!!!!

*Pounces*​

 

[Kev H]

Thanks Selena. PM sent.

*tries to dodge*

*gets squished*

Uhh hi, Falling, is it? You seem comfortably familiar for some reason. Did you get my reply email, and if so are you interested in looking at this as well?

 

[FallingToFly]

Thanks Selena. PM sent.

*tries to dodge*

*gets squished*

Uhh hi, Falling, is it? You seem comfortably familiar for some reason. Did you get my reply email, and if so are you interested in looking at this as well?

Yes and yes and you still have my IM. *bounces all over and snuggles* I missed your happy typing smilies around here!!