Well, I submitted it

[Fairytat]

I submitted the newest version of "I am a woman, know my fears..." so go there and vote damnit!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=42361

 

[lovetoread]

Well since you asked so nicely....

 

[Debbie]

Damnit I did already.

 

[Fairytat]

Thanks guys I'm always spastic when I let others view my work; I get really bitchy cause Im sensitive. *giggles*

 

[Guest]

I submitted the newest version of "I am a woman, know my fears..." so go there and vote damnit!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=42361

It's perfect. I love it.

 

[Belilica]

Fairy,

I loved your poem. It really moved me. For once I am lost for words....

-Bel

 

[Belilica]

Oh, and Fairytat, u have a PM

-Bel

 

[JUDO]

Did it

"Hope-less chest"

God, so glad this was not a tradition I grew up with.

(*500th Post*)


- Judo

 

[perks]

intriguing...

I liked the direction of this poem. It made me think of stream of consciousness pieces, journal exerpts.

I wanted more thoughts, the simplicity of the trees made me long for some observations of the forest other than the last section.

Overall it made me feel, and that is what I love about poetry.

Thankyou for sharing.

perks