Welcome to Mc Hell!

[mlady_france]

My humor piece "Welcome to Mc Hell!" has just posted. The title is pretty self explanatory. It's really short, but I'm excited about it.

Now comes the pleeding. Uh hem. . . .

Please,read my very short humor piece and leave feed back. It's my first "story", even if it's not really a story, and I'm so excited about it.
*pouty puppy dog look*

Okay, now that that's over, I'll just wait to see if any one reads it.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

I love when people beg.

 

[NoJo]

I prefer it if they can also play the spoons.

 

[mlady_france]

I prefer it if they can also play the spoons.

That's funny cause I do play the spoons. First "instrument" I learned how to play.

 

[NoJo]

Hey, mlady, Can you post a link to your story for us lazy people?

 

[mlady_france]

Mc Hell

There you go.

 

[SeaCat]

Read it and PC'd.

Cat

 

[mlady_france]

Read it and PC'd.

Cat

Thanks SeaCat.

 

[Softouch911]

All set, Sweetie!

I left you and your breast a suggestion for the sequel even


A full-service Softouch

 

[mlady_france]

All set, Sweetie!

I left you and your breast a suggestion for the sequel even


A full-service Softouch

Full-sevice, I like the sound of that.

 

[EmeraldKitten]

Read and commented, since I never 'really' got back to you about it.
Sorry about that, by the way.

I remember one night after we closed, we took a 'union break', and all went outside to smoke. We were probably out there for a half hour, lol. Yay for milking the clock!
Anyways, we were making up McPorn.. I can't even remember what all was said...
I do remember something about "bending Birdie over the counter so Ronald could get his McNuggets off." LMFAO!
Ahh, still love it.

 

[mlady_france]

Read and commented, since I never 'really' got back to you about it.
Sorry about that, by the way.

I remember one night after we closed, we took a 'union break', and all went outside to smoke. We were probably out there for a half hour, lol. Yay for milking the clock!
Anyways, we were making up McPorn.. I can't even remember what all was said...
I do remember something about "bending Birdie over the counter so Ronald could get his McNuggets off." LMFAO!
Ahh, still love it.

Yeah, we take a lot of those smoke breaks in the morning. They tease me that I should take up smoking since I'm out there with them all the time. I tell them the second hand is good enough.

Well I'm off to find more tortures. Maybe I will get an erotic couplings out of this place as well.

 

[mlady_france]

Big thanks to all of you who have read, voted, and or pced my "story". I'm really excited to see my first submition (okay really my second) do so well. es all around.

 

[R. Richard]

I read "Welcome to McHell." I think it is too close to reality to be a humor piece.

JMHO.

 

[SeaCat]

I read "Welcome to McHell." I think it is too close to reality to be a humor piece.

JMHO.

Ah but that's what makes it so damned funny.

Cat