Wedding night

[Metaknight]

My idea is about a couple that gets married and he tell her that her wedding present is that she can pick anybody she likes from the wedding guests and make love to her on their wedding night while he watches.

 

[sirhugs]

"Mmmm....anybody?" she asked in reply.

 

[intriguess]

trying to think of who she should select,

best man
his brother
maid of honor
hot DJ

for a very strange twist perhaps the minister

and my mind follows each path

suppose i want to know more about him her and how thier sex life was before the wedding

 

[CWatson]

I notice that, whether deliberately or by typo, our blushing bride is only allowed to pick a woman to do this with. Lesbian threesome? (What an oxymoron that term is, by the way.)

Also, you're assuming that the newlyweds haven't been saving themselves for marriage. (God only knows how prevalent that attitude actually is; every woman I've dated has held to it, but a) that's my taste in women, b) I'm trying to find a woman who thinks differently.) Obviously, the story works better if they have indeed been doing each other up until now, but what sort of wrench does it throw if they haven't--if they've actually been abstaining until now, or are even virgins?

 

[intriguess]

i reread original post carefully and no where does it state that the guest has to be female.

and it really doesn't make sense that they are virgins, i think it would make for an incredible awkward story if one of them was.. i suppose the groom could be virgin and a little overwhelmed at his brides history and appetites, but don't really see how a virgin guy would give up fucking his bride all night in order to involve a guest of either gender.

 

[The_Trouvere]

I notice that, whether deliberately or by typo, our blushing bride is only allowed to pick a woman to do this with. Lesbian threesome? (What an oxymoron that term is, by the way.)

Also, you're assuming that the newlyweds haven't been saving themselves for marriage. (God only knows how prevalent that attitude actually is; every woman I've dated has held to it, but a) that's my taste in women,

I am glad that women like that still exist.

 

[CWatson]

her wedding present is that she can pick anybody she likes from the wedding guests and make love to her

(Emphasis mine, of course.)

My point is, the implication is that the bride will not choose another man. What happens if she does? Does the groom have a problem with this?

And yes, it does make things awkward if one or both of them are virgins. That's a good thing. Awkward makes for better storytelling, because you have to fight to keep things interesting. Unless of course you're just going for stroke. (Incidentally, I will not print my opinion of stroke-story authors here, as it would probably offend some people. Suffice it to say that I aim for other goals in my writing.)

 

[Metaknight]

Maybe it didn't came out the way I wanted. What I ment to say was that she can pick anybody she wants from the guest list so that the guest can make love to her. So it can be anybody, man or woman.

 

[wehstar]

- Ohh, so that's why she invited the stripper from the hen night, I thought that was a really odd guest. (Do you foreigners have Stag and Hen nights? I don't think you call it that, do you?).

- I went to a pal's wedding last week where one of the groom's invited guests was his first love. I like that girl too, so openly bisexual. Maybe I should write that myself, if it's not too close for comfort.

- I'm glad none of you perverts came up with the idea of the religious figurehead who married these two getting in on the act. Same goes for all the family members involved.

Talking about strippers, perhaps we could make it a two chapter tale:-

Ch1: The guys accidentally book his sister as the stripper at the stag party.
Ch2: The bride wants his sister so bad.

Not that I'm endorsing incest mind, but I know a lot of people seem to like it.

 

[MsLinnet]

My idea is about a couple that gets married and he tell her that her wedding present is that she can pick anybody she likes from the wedding guests and make love to her on their wedding night while he watches.

I like this...
(Been There Done That) lol

 

[BedtimeStories77]

"Mmmm....anybody?" she asked in reply,

...then added, "Ya know, I always have been attracted to your sister, honey."

 

[MsLinnet]

I have been thinking about this a little, and my idea would be.
She is marrying into a large family, and on her wedding night it is the custom that after the husband has his way with his virgin bride that all the men of the wedding party have her any way they want and there she would start her marred life as a sub. Just like all the other wives she is passed around the birth family members. Being used by anyone including the children as a toy.