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21 year old couple marry in beachside hotel. All guests and staff are bisexual and 18 or older. Couple are virgins. Best man is groom's brother, maid of honour and bridesmaids are all bride's sisters/cousins.

Instead of disco after meal the whole hotel turns into sex club. Bride and groom are fucked by oldest males and females followed by others until the 25 18 yr olds fuck them. The climax of the night is when all 60 male guests spunk over bride and groom followed by women squirting their cum and pissing over them.

The waiters are all black aged 18 to 30 with 12" cocks. They are allowed to fuck anyone they like.
 
21 year old couple marry in beachside hotel. All guests and staff are bisexual and 18 or older. Couple are virgins. Best man is groom's brother, maid of honour and bridesmaids are all bride's sisters/cousins.

Instead of disco after meal the whole hotel turns into sex club. Bride and groom are fucked by oldest males and females followed by others until the 25 18 yr olds fuck them. The climax of the night is when all 60 male guests spunk over bride and groom followed by women squirting their cum and pissing over them.
This is a bit too over the top for me, but it does remind me of a lesbian story I read years ago about a bride and bridesmaids party the night before the wedding.

A wedding of convenience that is...as the bride preferred other girls, but chose to marry well and carry out a secret life.

A grand lesbian orgy was prepared as a gift by her girlfriends, who dressed up in full regalia for the event...hair pinned up, chiffon gowns, sparkly shoes, etc.

After a full hour of deep passionate kissing, sometimes between three and four girls at once, the ladies moved on to other more bizarre sapphic rituals where they would 'french drink' champagne...the bride sucking bubbly from a girl's mouth while another bridesmaid licked and sucked her pretty asshole.

What a lovely picture...all framed in satin and lace!!!
 
maybe instead of have the entire wedding party turning into a sex club. how about if the bride and groom being a bit drunk head for their beach bungalow they stagger into a different rooms and bungalow and end up in the variety of compromising situations and positions that you described?

Just a thought.
 
very ambitious, requires a lot of buy in by the reader ("how do they restrict it to bisexuals, but have a couple of virgins as the bride & groom?" would destroy the story)

I LOVE LOVE LUV wedding stories, but this would require a quality execution to work.
 
The Wedding Whore

I went to a wedding last year of two friends of mine, that had been going out together since they were at school.

I was maid of honour, on the wedding day the bride confessed to me after a few glasses of bubbly that she was still a virgin and though they had been dating for 7 years they had never got past heavy petting.

All through the service I was thinking about her and her beauty and what a sexy body she had as I helped her into her dress, I could not understand why had no one ever fucked her I would have given half the chance and would have taken her virginity the moment she told me, if only she had been bi but I didn’t, but I came up with the idea of a young couple that get marred virgins.
He insisted that on their wedding night was to be there first night together, anyway after all the guests had gone he laid her out on the bed and took her for the first time he was gentle with her as his prick entered her pristine vagina a small trace of blood lined his penis as he withdrew it the first time, she let out a little scream as he broke her hymen, he went on to fuck her and bring her to the height of ecstasy, after that he turned her over and told her this is going to hurt a little more and he slid his penis lubricated only by her own juices between the cheeks of her anus and into her anally she tried to stop him as she didn’t think this was right but he took her and after the first thrust he began to ride her hard and fast not caring about his new wife’s pain or displeasure. Once he was done with her anus he forced her to her knees and held his still erect penis in front of her mouth telling her that she either opened her mouth or she would be never able to shut it again.

She tried to keep her mouth shut as tears ran down her face, he grabbed her neck and began to squeezed he then raised his other hand to strike her but she opened her mouth gasping for air before the blow struck and he slipped his penis into her mouth.

Her first instinct was to bit him but he told her if she did he would peel the skin off her back and feed it to her and at that point she believed him he began to pump into her mouth telling her all the time to take a breath as he withdrew gradually he was hitting the back of her mouth with each thrust, he then told her that each time he thrust forward and she felt him at the back of her mouth she was to swallow, at this point she was terrified and tried to do as he asked, but was unable to time it right and she could tell that he was getting annoyed he had had enough so he grabbed the back of her head and started to pull it onto him harder with each thrust his penis forced its way down her throat she began to choke but he did not show any mercy he continued the assault on her mouth until his pubic bone mashed against her open mouth and his penis was as far down her throat as it would go he held her there impaled on his penis and she gagged and flailed around not getting any air and then just as she was about to pass out he pulled her head of him and she was able to gulp down some vitally needed air.

Oh what could happen next.
 
That sounds a little too realistic; we're looking for fantasy here. If you had said the wife was behaving that way, I might not've believed it.
 
That sounds a little too realistic; we're looking for fantasy here. If you had said the wife was behaving that way, I might not've believed it.
only the first bit is true about me going to the wedding and be being maid of honnor and the girls confesing to me about her virginity
 
I just watched "The other Boleyn Girl," which is a rather antiquated and non-nude (a tear was shed, believe me, due to the casting of Natalie and Scarlet) version of the wedding night rape. The only thing else you needed was the scared-as-fuck wife aborting and then getting her brother to fill in for her husband, who wouldn't lay with her because he didn't wanna hurt the baby (even back in the 1500s guys thought they had uteris-puncturing cock-a-doodles).
 
I just watched "The other Boleyn Girl," which is a rather antiquated and non-nude (a tear was shed, believe me, due to the casting of Natalie and Scarlet) version of the wedding night rape. The only thing else you needed was the scared-as-fuck wife aborting and then getting her brother to fill in for her husband, who wouldn't lay with her because he didn't wanna hurt the baby (even back in the 1500s guys thought they had uteris-puncturing cock-a-doodles).

I think in my story after he has had his way in all her holes he leaves her locking her in the bedroom while he goes to see his brothers in the bar.

he knows they are waiting for him as it had all been arange as it was when each of them got married now it is there turn to have his wife to make her part of the family.

each of the brothers lets say three of them fuck her and bugger her and oraly rape her in any order they want while the husband watchs. once they are done they leave, she is so sore that she can hardly move.

he orders her to shower and clean herself up then he makes her put on a a very tight short dress with no underware and high heals, and takes her down to the bar then parades her around as if she is his property making sure all the male members of the family know that the family tradition has continued and they can now take there turn as they wish.
 
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maybe this could happen next

As she fell back onto the floor, her chest heaved up and down with each gasp of air. The bowel taste filled her mouth; as she gazed up in horror, he walked towards her. His eyes burned with lust, his face contorted with rage sneered down a pond her. This couldn’t be the same kind, gentle soul she fell in love with, the man she married. This all had to a bad dream, a nightmare she desperately wanted to awake from. His swollen penis glimmered with her juices, swayed back and forth, appears to grow larger with each step. Her only thought was to escape this nightmare, glancing around the room; she made a mad dash for the door. Her trembling fingers fumbling with the lock, failed her. She felt his hot breath wrap around her neck, sending a cold shiver down her spine.
The tip of his penis slide in between her thighs moving back and forth grazing the base of her moist pubic hair; causing her lips to tremble. With each thrust she felt his weight push against her nakedness, pinning her against the door. Skin to skin, he started to grind his sweaty body onto hers. She could sense the animal lust grow within him, the pounding of his heart echoed within her chest. He slowly worked his cock between the tender cheeks, probing her rose bud which was sore from his first anal assault. She wanted to scream for help, before she did his hand slide around the nape of her neck. His lips next to her ear whispered a quiet hush, “this is our wedding night, we don’t want to be disturbed.” as his fingers tighten.

Silent sobs passes from her lips as his cock made its way closer to her violated anus, forcing its way through the fleshy mounts. Whispering into her ear once again “ Reach down and spread your ass for me my love…daddy’s cuming home” tears started to roll down her face as her trembling hands inched their way down. Her finger tips brushed against his throbbing member, she could feel the blood coursing through its veins. Waiting for a moment, reluctantly exposes her once virgin ass. The head of his firm cock pressed against her anus. Pausing for a moment, a smirk crossed his lips. He slowly drives the tip of his cock inward, her muscle tighten to stop the unwanted anal intruder. The added resistance only fortified his desire, he pressed on with all his weight. Her muscles tired and sore relented, his cock slide in, her taunt body jerked as a high pitched groan hissed past her clenched teeth.

Her breathing became labored, her body ached and her thoughts were clouded with the ways of pain sweeping her body. Worst of all, that tiny itch, deep within her pussy started to grow. With a rumbling grunt he drove the entire shaft deep into her bowels. He watched with a lustful glee seeing his shaft disappear into her ass. As he began fucking her ass with a piston like action, he repositioned his hands. Sliding them up to grasp her tits, mauling and squeezing them; tweaking each nipple to full attention between his fingers. As the sexually assault continued it was becoming more difficult for her to distinguish between pain and an unnatural sexually pleasure that continued to grow. That tiny itch was growing larger with each stroke of his cock.


Oh what could happen next.
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This is my first public attempt at writing, let me know what you thing.

Thanks
 
I agree with SirHugs and others that the suggested plot-line is perhaps a little too ambitious and far-fetched.

I'd keep the cast-list tighter...perhaps concentrate on the Best Man, Maid of Honour, bridesmaids etc.

Conveivably you could have one of these individuals drug the bride and groom, if that type of scene appeals...which might then loosen the inhibitions of the virgin pair.

Nothing quite like an 'ingenues taken by devious perverts' angle!..

I've read and enjoyed many sexy wedding stories over the years - there are some on Lit and others (whisper it!) that are good on Alt.Sex.Stories.

Just use the search facilities.
 
As she fell back onto the floor, her chest heaved up and down with each gasp of air. The bowel taste filled her mouth; as she gazed up in horror, he walked towards her. His eyes burned with lust, his face contorted with rage sneered down a pond her. This couldn’t be the same kind, gentle soul she fell in love with, the man she married. This all had to a bad dream, a nightmare she desperately wanted to awake from. His swollen penis glimmered with her juices, swayed back and forth, appears to grow larger with each step. Her only thought was to escape this nightmare, glancing around the room; she made a mad dash for the door. Her trembling fingers fumbling with the lock, failed her. She felt his hot breath wrap around her neck, sending a cold shiver down her spine.
The tip of his penis slide in between her thighs moving back and forth grazing the base of her moist pubic hair; causing her lips to tremble. With each thrust she felt his weight push against her nakedness, pinning her against the door. Skin to skin, he started to grind his sweaty body onto hers. She could sense the animal lust grow within him, the pounding of his heart echoed within her chest. He slowly worked his cock between the tender cheeks, probing her rose bud which was sore from his first anal assault. She wanted to scream for help, before she did his hand slide around the nape of her neck. His lips next to her ear whispered a quiet hush, “this is our wedding night, we don’t want to be disturbed.” as his fingers tighten.

Silent sobs passes from her lips as his cock made its way closer to her violated anus, forcing its way through the fleshy mounts. Whispering into her ear once again “ Reach down and spread your ass for me my love…daddy’s cuming home” tears started to roll down her face as her trembling hands inched their way down. Her finger tips brushed against his throbbing member, she could feel the blood coursing through its veins. Waiting for a moment, reluctantly exposes her once virgin ass. The head of his firm cock pressed against her anus. Pausing for a moment, a smirk crossed his lips. He slowly drives the tip of his cock inward, her muscle tighten to stop the unwanted anal intruder. The added resistance only fortified his desire, he pressed on with all his weight. Her muscles tired and sore relented, his cock slide in, her taunt body jerked as a high pitched groan hissed past her clenched teeth.

Her breathing became labored, her body ached and her thoughts were clouded with the ways of pain sweeping her body. Worst of all, that tiny itch, deep within her pussy started to grow. With a rumbling grunt he drove the entire shaft deep into her bowels. He watched with a lustful glee seeing his shaft disappear into her ass. As he began fucking her ass with a piston like action, he repositioned his hands. Sliding them up to grasp her tits, mauling and squeezing them; tweaking each nipple to full attention between his fingers. As the sexually assault continued it was becoming more difficult for her to distinguish between pain and an unnatural sexually pleasure that continued to grow. That tiny itch was growing larger with each stroke of his cock.


Oh what could happen next.
________

This is my first public attempt at writing, let me know what you thing.

Thanks

I like this but i can see where you are going in the ends up enjoying the treatment she recives i dont think that is the way it should go but who am i to say.
 
Always another option

She could become a more submissive servant not wanting to be this way and fighting to regain control from her husband and her inner lust. The story could revolve around her inner struggle be what is morally right and what she desires.
 
family traditions

Having her initiated into the family sounds good, I definitely got a rise thinking about your story line, along with the variety of possibilities to explore. Being paraded around in tight shorts, making her dance on the table tops gyrating her bare ass for all to see, exposing herself to the brothers. Being a newbie to the family, she will be low ass on the totem pole facing a variety of family traditions such as waking each brother up with a blow job. Or hosting a family dinner which the bride will be the main course; she will eat, suck and be fucked by his entire family.

Another story line could be: after the wedding night escapades she is bound and gagged. The next morning after a breakfast fucking, she is forced to give the busboy a blowjob as a tip. The couple cleans up together in the shower where he titty fucks her. After they head out for a day trip to see the sights. The bride dressed scantily, is relieved and embarrassed to see the best man and her maid of honor who is also her best friend were accompanying them. This could be her chance to escape this madness. Biding her time she seizing a moment with the best man, pulling him aside, she explains her ordeal and pleads for help. But to her horror, he blackmails her, threatening to tell her husband if she doesn’t have sex with him, right there. Fearing the worst she has no choice she is forcibly fucked and sprayed with cum.

Later that day she is chatting with her best friend, and discovers that her maid of honor is bi and was, at one time in love with her. Since her best friend’s sexual overtures were ignored or misunderstood by the young naive bride that passion turned to revenge. Pulling out her phone she flashes pics of the bride and the best man in all they slutty glory. Her friend blackmails the bride into a lesbian tress. Where she is tied up and shaved, forced to eat pussy and assaulted with a dildos.

The groom and maid of honor team up, blackmailing the best man and the lovely bride with the photos. They are forced into comprising situations both privately and publicly. From wearing ultra sheer bikinis and picking up pool boys to mutual masturbation. Climaxing in a gang bang of the bride by the groom’s brothers. The brothers are all sucked hard by the best man before fucking the bride.

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onward and downward
 
Having her initiated into the family sounds good, I definitely got a rise thinking about your story line, along with the variety of possibilities to explore. Being paraded around in tight shorts, making her dance on the table tops gyrating her bare ass for all to see, exposing herself to the brothers. Being a newbie to the family, she will be low ass on the totem pole facing a variety of family traditions such as waking each brother up with a blow job. Or hosting a family dinner which the bride will be the main course; she will eat, suck and be fucked by his entire family.

Another story line could be: after the wedding night escapades she is bound and gagged. The next morning after a breakfast fucking, she is forced to give the busboy a blowjob as a tip. The couple cleans up together in the shower where he titty fucks her. After they head out for a day trip to see the sights. The bride dressed scantily, is relieved and embarrassed to see the best man and her maid of honor who is also her best friend were accompanying them. This could be her chance to escape this madness. Biding her time she seizing a moment with the best man, pulling him aside, she explains her ordeal and pleads for help. But to her horror, he blackmails her, threatening to tell her husband if she doesn’t have sex with him, right there. Fearing the worst she has no choice she is forcibly fucked and sprayed with cum.

Later that day she is chatting with her best friend, and discovers that her maid of honor is bi and was, at one time in love with her. Since her best friend’s sexual overtures were ignored or misunderstood by the young naive bride that passion turned to revenge. Pulling out her phone she flashes pics of the bride and the best man in all they slutty glory. Her friend blackmails the bride into a lesbian tress. Where she is tied up and shaved, forced to eat pussy and assaulted with a dildos.

The groom and maid of honor team up, blackmailing the best man and the lovely bride with the photos. They are forced into comprising situations both privately and publicly. From wearing ultra sheer bikinis and picking up pool boys to mutual masturbation. Climaxing in a gang bang of the bride by the groom’s brothers. The brothers are all sucked hard by the best man before fucking the bride.

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onward and downward

some good ideas there
 
Having her initiated into the family sounds good, I definitely got a rise thinking about your story line, along with the variety of possibilities to explore. Being paraded around in tight shorts, making her dance on the table tops gyrating her bare ass for all to see, exposing herself to the brothers. Being a newbie to the family, she will be low ass on the totem pole facing a variety of family traditions such as waking each brother up with a blow job. Or hosting a family dinner which the bride will be the main course; she will eat, suck and be fucked by his entire family.

Another story line could be: after the wedding night escapades she is bound and gagged. The next morning after a breakfast fucking, she is forced to give the busboy a blowjob as a tip. The couple cleans up together in the shower where he titty fucks her. After they head out for a day trip to see the sights. The bride dressed scantily, is relieved and embarrassed to see the best man and her maid of honor who is also her best friend were accompanying them. This could be her chance to escape this madness. Biding her time she seizing a moment with the best man, pulling him aside, she explains her ordeal and pleads for help. But to her horror, he blackmails her, threatening to tell her husband if she doesn’t have sex with him, right there. Fearing the worst she has no choice she is forcibly fucked and sprayed with cum.

Later that day she is chatting with her best friend, and discovers that her maid of honor is bi and was, at one time in love with her. Since her best friend’s sexual overtures were ignored or misunderstood by the young naive bride that passion turned to revenge. Pulling out her phone she flashes pics of the bride and the best man in all they slutty glory. Her friend blackmails the bride into a lesbian tress. Where she is tied up and shaved, forced to eat pussy and assaulted with a dildos.

The groom and maid of honor team up, blackmailing the best man and the lovely bride with the photos. They are forced into comprising situations both privately and publicly. From wearing ultra sheer bikinis and picking up pool boys to mutual masturbation. Climaxing in a gang bang of the bride by the groom’s brothers. The brothers are all sucked hard by the best man before fucking the bride.

_____

onward and downward

Agree with MsLinnet some good ideas here.

Personally I think the 'family' scenario is a bit old-hat - there are plenty of stories around, some wedding-based ones, where family privileges are part of a subjugation ritual.

Some sort of blackmail twist has possibilities (though again blackmail as a plot device is hardly original). There needs to be a realistic reason why someone has a hold over the bride or groom or both - this is less easy if, as the originator of this thread proposed, they are both virgins.

I think involving the groom, maid of honour etc is essential and have already suggested this. I greatly like the idea of the maid of honour being gay or bi and her having had a crush on the bride - plenty of scope with this for 'revenge' on the bride and some hot lesbian action...

I don't normally like MM / male bisexual action, but the notion of humiliating the groom and / or the best man along these lines would work with this plot line.
 
Agree with MsLinnet some good ideas here.

Personally I think the 'family' scenario is a bit old-hat - there are plenty of stories around, some wedding-based ones, where family privileges are part of a subjugation ritual.

Some sort of blackmail twist has possibilities (though again blackmail as a plot device is hardly original). There needs to be a realistic reason why someone has a hold over the bride or groom or both - this is less easy if, as the originator of this thread proposed, they are both virgins.

I think involving the groom, maid of honour etc is essential and have already suggested this. I greatly like the idea of the maid of honour being gay or bi and her having had a crush on the bride - plenty of scope with this for 'revenge' on the bride and some hot lesbian action...

I don't normally like MM / male bisexual action, but the notion of humiliating the groom and / or the best man along these lines would work with this plot line.

Thanks for the vote of praise i think I actualy like the idea of the family fucking each new bride all the other girls have also been through it and they have to watch as she has to perform all sorts of sexual acts whit all the men and the lap dancing ect works well i think there is one problem how many are still at the party i am asuming its only the grooms side of the family...
 
Having her initiated into the family sounds good, I definitely got a rise thinking about your story line, along with the variety of possibilities to explore. Being paraded around in tight shorts, making her dance on the table tops gyrating her bare ass for all to see, exposing herself to the brothers. Being a newbie to the family, she will be low ass on the totem pole facing a variety of family traditions such as waking each brother up with a blow job. Or hosting a family dinner which the bride will be the main course; she will eat, suck and be fucked by his entire family.

Another story line could be: after the wedding night escapades she is bound and gagged. The next morning after a breakfast fucking, she is forced to give the busboy a blowjob as a tip. The couple cleans up together in the shower where he titty fucks her. After they head out for a day trip to see the sights. The bride dressed scantily, is relieved and embarrassed to see the best man and her maid of honor who is also her best friend were accompanying them. This could be her chance to escape this madness. Biding her time she seizing a moment with the best man, pulling him aside, she explains her ordeal and pleads for help. But to her horror, he blackmails her, threatening to tell her husband if she doesn’t have sex with him, right there. Fearing the worst she has no choice she is forcibly fucked and sprayed with cum.

Later that day she is chatting with her best friend, and discovers that her maid of honor is bi and was, at one time in love with her. Since her best friend’s sexual overtures were ignored or misunderstood by the young naive bride that passion turned to revenge. Pulling out her phone she flashes pics of the bride and the best man in all they slutty glory. Her friend blackmails the bride into a lesbian tress. Where she is tied up and shaved, forced to eat pussy and assaulted with a dildos.

The groom and maid of honor team up, blackmailing the best man and the lovely bride with the photos. They are forced into comprising situations both privately and publicly. From wearing ultra sheer bikinis and picking up pool boys to mutual masturbation. Climaxing in a gang bang of the bride by the groom’s brothers. The brothers are all sucked hard by the best man before fucking the bride.

onward and downward

I am going to add your addition to the story to mystart if thats ok with you
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no problem

I have no problem with you using any of my suggestions. Please feel free to use, change or ignore what you wish or doesn’t fit.

I was thinking about the Corruptor’s comment concerning a plausible reason that could be held over one or both. What about this:

Instead of the maid of honor and the groom doing the black mailing, what if the maid of honor and the best man are the blackmailers, using the photos and a secret document. It appears there marriage was arranged to save both families from financial ruins. The document specifies that both had to be virgins and both would have to be faithful, loving, living to the high moral codes determined by the bank for a period of one year. The best man could be a friend of the groom from childhood; worked for the bank as an arbitrator, who now is seeking revenge for all the torment he received in school from the groom, or maybe not.

Explaining the arrangement:

The best man stood next to his seated co conspirator, clarifying the arrangement. He could terminate the deal at this very moment plunging either or both families into the streets. Calling the bride a cock hound for fucking and sucking not only himself, the busboy , the pool boy along with the groom’s brothers, etc. From the photos I’ve seen you’re also a pussy whore. The maid of honor taunting the bride by sticks out her tongue and waggling it. The groom smirked thinking that his family would be receiving all the money. But that though was short lived. The Arbitrator points out that he and his family where no shining star of morality. Stating the groom fucked several of the bride’s maid’s hours after the wedding. Then after the reception making your tipsy wife change into that scandalous outfit, and headed out to the afterhours club with your brothers. Then on your wedding night you not only fucked her , you buggered her ass twice. By the banks standards neither family is deserving of the funds. Personally, I do not care what either of you do to each other, just keep it out of the papers. To keep this proper and legal, I and my new personal assistant are the banks’ representatives. We will determine what standards are acceptable in public or private and you will be required to meet them. Any deviation from these requirements will terminate the contract. A devilish grim crossed the maid of honor lips. Raising her legs and resting them on the arms of the chair, she exposed her pussy. The tiny landing strip of black hair glisten, as a thin ribbon of juices ran from her protruding lips to her ass. The groom smiled and started towards her. With a shake of a finger she waved him off and pointed to her old best friend.


The paragraphs below follows my earlier story line ending with ---That tiny itch was growing larger with each stroke of his cock. ---

She struggled against the growing desires that were rearing in her loins. The unrelenting pounding of her ass and the mauling of her tits made this a feudal effort. The muscles of her vagina rippled against the emptiness as wetness started to trickle out. She was rapidly approaching her second orgasm. With a few forceful strokes her husband shot his load into her once virgin ass. As he withdrew his cock dangled between his legs as he staggers away, leaving his bride to crumble to the floor, dazed, numb and unfulfilled as that forbidden sexually urge faded away as quickly as it came. The only thing she could feel was the cum oozing from her ass.

Her little voice screamed to get out, to run as fast as she could, but the body was unable to move. With her last ounce of strength she reached for the door handle, she pulled herself up, her knees trembled as if she was walking on stilts, struggling with the lock, it opened. Breathing a sigh of relief, she paused for a second too long. Her beloved husband returned grabbing her by her hair and dragged to their bed. The next thing she saw was the mirrored ceiling as she lied on her back straining to breath; his full weight was resting on her chest, his limp cock plopped between her redden tits. With steely eyes he sneered “ you’ll never leave me, your sweet ass is mine, no one runs out on me.” To punctuate the point he grabbed each nipple and twisted and ground them between his fingers, causing her to writhe in pain. Reaching for her angelic wedding dress, he ripped sections off to bind her hands and feet together. He used her wet panties to gag her. There they lay together on the heart shaped bed their first night as husband and wife.

Sleep can to him quickly, but the same could not be said for her. Idealistic scenes from her wedding day flashed in her mind along with the hellish ones from her wedding night causing her to twist and squirm. As she laid in the dark, thoughts of her torn dress binding her, the taste of her sex filled her mouth brought tears to her eyes. Her dreams of a perfect life with a handsome husband, three children, a dog and a white pitched fence was no more than a childhood fantasy. That fantasy was the one she clung to as she slept.


To address the family dining arrangements;
The families are not friendly to each other, more combative or loathing. But each family has traditions to celebrate special occasions. One of which is the post wedding dinner at the grooms house welcoming the new bride into the fold. It could be the two parents (if they are still living) the three sons. The wives do not take part in the special dinner; there welcoming party could be done later or not at all.

Again, you can use an\ything you like.

Joe
 
OK, the blackmail reason suggested by Joe might work - though I think it's a little convoluted.

I'm not wholly against the 'family' plotline - and in fairness all we are doing is offering opinions!

If the 'family taking the bride' scenario is developed, I think it is essential that female members of the family take her as well - much kinkier that way.

Or, to twist things around in another way, perhaps they could restrain the groom and force him do perform, whilst watching as his wife is taken by others - this type of cuckolding scene is always good value.
 
whol about this

I think my last suggestions were not following the original story line, it was putting the cart before the horse, and I was discussing events that were happening the following days. Skipping over a whole scene of the action in the bar disco/ sex club. Which was part of the original wedding night perverts story line? Following the wedding night events the couple heads for the disco. The bride dressed scandalously in a strapless mini dress that barely covers her privates. Grabbing a cab they head for the seedier part of town. The hubby offers the driver a blow job in lieu of the fair. The wife starts the BJ she senses the cabbie is about to come, not wanting to swallow his load she pull of and he shoot his load all over himself. The hubby tossing 50 for a 20 fare at the driver and drags her towards the club. Stating that she owes him the fare and that she is going to have to earn it tonight.

They wade through the low life crowd of goth, vampires, grudge, want a be’s and has been and never were’s. Entering the club the music was pounding and could be felt, a dozen of caged dancers are scattered about, mirrored ball, spinning lights and smoke fells the air. Making the way to a table to wait for the brothers to arrive. He orders her to dance on the table. She slowly bounces to the music with a half hearted jiggle. Within seconds she receives a resounding crack on her ass for motivation which nearly knocked her off the table. With no further encouragement she starts to grind and gyrate as the reddening welt mark of his hand began to show. After dancing with each of the brothers, they head for the backroom. Waving a card the security lets them pass. The backroom was darker and the music from the main dance floor was muted by the padded walls. The crowd here was a more refined group of fetishes, basically the elite of the lower crust of the underworld’s erotic society. At first glance it appears to be some type of betting parlor. When she realizes that they were betting on cock sucking and she was going to be one of the contestants. From here, the story could revolve around her journey into the world of high stakes amateur cock sucking. Then who knows what?
 
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