C Canoe Virgin Joined Mar 8, 2002 Posts 2 Mar 12, 2002 #1 I'm looking for feedback on my first entry on Literotica. It's "Jimmey's Plan" which will be a multi submission story. Give me your best critique!!!
I'm looking for feedback on my first entry on Literotica. It's "Jimmey's Plan" which will be a multi submission story. Give me your best critique!!!
MaxSebastian Literotica Guru Joined Feb 6, 2001 Posts 536 Mar 12, 2002 #2 Why have a vote here, when you can vote at the bottom of the story?
