Skirlasvoud
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I'm looking for a (regular) soul - perhaps two - kind enough to read up on two projects I'm writing.
If I may be so bold; I pride myself on my sense of detail, character development, plot advancement and storyline. (But I think I'm just one of many claiming that. Judge for yourself.) In fact, my storylines and plots ussually revolve around something other than sex, even though it is an instrumental part of it.
Project 1: Entangled Destiny (Between 200-250 pages long. 60% finished)
Themes: Medieval Fantasy, BDSM, Femdom/m, Romance, Psychology, Demons, minor Religion.
Actions taken: Exhibitionism, Whipping, Virgins, spanking, caning, Tentacles, Electro, genital torture, waterplay, asphixiation, succubus (cloven hoofed, winged demoness), angel, Anal play, Milking, Upside down suspension, needle play, futa(women with dicks)... if you're still with me up till this point you'll probably don't mind anything else.
Synopsis: A kind hearted, young boy's family is slaughtered by a band of nearby trolls and he himself is saved only by the grace of an angel who sought fit to rescue him. Soon the light commands the pure boy to become a warlock, but as the way of dark magic isn't suited to him he finds himself sucked into Hell.
Who is this strange demoness stalking him? Will he manage to escape? Will he ever see the angel again? Why has all of this happened to him and what is his role in the powerplay between heaven and hell?
Strong points: Emphasis on character development and psychology. Clever plottwist.
Weaknesses: LONG STORY and 50% of it LACKS SEX. Plottwist is predictable to the seasoned reader. The story is not quite as intense as the tags might have you belief, so this isn't for those who want sex scene upon sex scene.
Worst weaknes of all:... This particular story is currently World of Warcraft based. HOWEVER, the two bit plagiarising hack that created the game can't hold up a candle to my skill at creating characters. Also, my (self-proclaimed) skill at detailed, descriptive writing does much to compensate and 75% of the story revolves around a place never described in that universe, so it won't matter too much.
I promise that the moment this novel is done, I will change the background into a universe of my own. I've already got one called Erovia where my other story takes place, so I just need to adept it a bit.
What I'm searching for in the generous soul who will be editing:
A fondness for pain, bondage and submission/domination.
Willing to take in storyline and sexscenes in equal volumes.
Preferably a female heterosexual, but not a requirement. I want to know how I did at creating an alluring boytoy from the female point of view.
Someone skilled in plot and storyline development. I feel as though I need to further obfuscate the coming plottwist.
Project 2: Born of Fire (25 pages long. 5% finished)
Themes: Medieval Fantasy. Sex with dragons in their true forms.
Pairings: F Human/M Dragon M Human/F Dragon F dragons/F Human Elf>Halfling>Dwarves>Orcs>Minitaur/F Dragon
Sex with adolescent dragons (about the same height as a human to make it possible). Escessive Cum. Womb penetration. Pregnancy. Large insertions.
Synopsis: After the silent dead rushed across the known world, devestating the fairytale races inhabiting it, the few suvivors gather on the Peninsula of Erovia and are saved from extinction by the Mother Godess of Fertility who creates a paradise for them. Blessed with ethernal youth free of sickness and hunger the more prolific races get hard at work restoring their numbers, but the great race of dragons is less than fortunate. With only three of their kind left guarding over a small hatching, they are desperate to find a way to beat their otherwise painfully slow reproductive cycle and slow maturation. Just as they despair, frightened that dwarves, orcs and men may start encroaching on them and rob their young adolescent children of their futures as well as their gold, hides and homes, a mysterious young woman shows up on their doorstep.
Strong Points: Interesting characters, immaginative world, drenched in mythology
Weaknesses: LONG STORY and 50% of it LACKS SEX. Drenched in mythology.
What I look for in dear editor:
Basically an interest in everything described above.
Willing to take in storyline and sexscenes in equal volumes.
Other than that, it would be nice if you have an interest in Mythology and a willingness to look past the fact that I take names straight out of folklore.
Thank you for reading.
If I may be so bold; I pride myself on my sense of detail, character development, plot advancement and storyline. (But I think I'm just one of many claiming that. Judge for yourself.) In fact, my storylines and plots ussually revolve around something other than sex, even though it is an instrumental part of it.
Project 1: Entangled Destiny (Between 200-250 pages long. 60% finished)
Themes: Medieval Fantasy, BDSM, Femdom/m, Romance, Psychology, Demons, minor Religion.
Actions taken: Exhibitionism, Whipping, Virgins, spanking, caning, Tentacles, Electro, genital torture, waterplay, asphixiation, succubus (cloven hoofed, winged demoness), angel, Anal play, Milking, Upside down suspension, needle play, futa(women with dicks)... if you're still with me up till this point you'll probably don't mind anything else.
Synopsis: A kind hearted, young boy's family is slaughtered by a band of nearby trolls and he himself is saved only by the grace of an angel who sought fit to rescue him. Soon the light commands the pure boy to become a warlock, but as the way of dark magic isn't suited to him he finds himself sucked into Hell.
Who is this strange demoness stalking him? Will he manage to escape? Will he ever see the angel again? Why has all of this happened to him and what is his role in the powerplay between heaven and hell?
Strong points: Emphasis on character development and psychology. Clever plottwist.
Weaknesses: LONG STORY and 50% of it LACKS SEX. Plottwist is predictable to the seasoned reader. The story is not quite as intense as the tags might have you belief, so this isn't for those who want sex scene upon sex scene.
Worst weaknes of all:... This particular story is currently World of Warcraft based. HOWEVER, the two bit plagiarising hack that created the game can't hold up a candle to my skill at creating characters. Also, my (self-proclaimed) skill at detailed, descriptive writing does much to compensate and 75% of the story revolves around a place never described in that universe, so it won't matter too much.
I promise that the moment this novel is done, I will change the background into a universe of my own. I've already got one called Erovia where my other story takes place, so I just need to adept it a bit.
What I'm searching for in the generous soul who will be editing:
A fondness for pain, bondage and submission/domination.
Willing to take in storyline and sexscenes in equal volumes.
Preferably a female heterosexual, but not a requirement. I want to know how I did at creating an alluring boytoy from the female point of view.
Someone skilled in plot and storyline development. I feel as though I need to further obfuscate the coming plottwist.
Project 2: Born of Fire (25 pages long. 5% finished)
Themes: Medieval Fantasy. Sex with dragons in their true forms.
Pairings: F Human/M Dragon M Human/F Dragon F dragons/F Human Elf>Halfling>Dwarves>Orcs>Minitaur/F Dragon
Sex with adolescent dragons (about the same height as a human to make it possible). Escessive Cum. Womb penetration. Pregnancy. Large insertions.
Synopsis: After the silent dead rushed across the known world, devestating the fairytale races inhabiting it, the few suvivors gather on the Peninsula of Erovia and are saved from extinction by the Mother Godess of Fertility who creates a paradise for them. Blessed with ethernal youth free of sickness and hunger the more prolific races get hard at work restoring their numbers, but the great race of dragons is less than fortunate. With only three of their kind left guarding over a small hatching, they are desperate to find a way to beat their otherwise painfully slow reproductive cycle and slow maturation. Just as they despair, frightened that dwarves, orcs and men may start encroaching on them and rob their young adolescent children of their futures as well as their gold, hides and homes, a mysterious young woman shows up on their doorstep.
Strong Points: Interesting characters, immaginative world, drenched in mythology
Weaknesses: LONG STORY and 50% of it LACKS SEX. Drenched in mythology.
What I look for in dear editor:
Basically an interest in everything described above.
Willing to take in storyline and sexscenes in equal volumes.
Other than that, it would be nice if you have an interest in Mythology and a willingness to look past the fact that I take names straight out of folklore.
Thank you for reading.
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