Want to beta read my new FFM story?

[NinaSloane]

I’ve just shared a brand-new draft on StoryOrigin, and a little heads-up: it’s not finished yet. This is just the opening part of a bigger story I’m working on. But I’d love to know at this early stage if the style is working for you.

The vibe is unapologetically erotic — Male POV, FFM threesome, plenty of heat, and a playful mix of femdom/femsub. It’s very smutty, very raw.

Anyone wants to peek at it and tell me a few things?

• What grabbed you and what didn’t
• Whether the descriptions feel lush or a bit too much.
• How the femdom/femsub dynamic comes across.

If you’re in, here’s the link to jump in
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/0a36fbde-00e3-4c21-a811-4c354071b110

 

[JackTheStoryteller]

I’ve just shared a brand-new draft on StoryOrigin, and a little heads-up: it’s not finished yet. This is just the opening part of a bigger story I’m working on. But I’d love to know at this early stage if the style is working for you.

The vibe is unapologetically erotic — Male POV, FFM threesome, plenty of heat, and a playful mix of femdom/femsub. It’s very smutty, very raw.

Anyone wants to peek at it and tell me a few things?

• What grabbed you and what didn’t
• Whether the descriptions feel lush or a bit too much.
• How the femdom/femsub dynamic comes across.

If you’re in, here’s the link to jump in
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/0a36fbde-00e3-4c21-a811-4c354071b110

Hmmmm interesting. Would you consider having a male voice actor record it for you?

 

[dirk2024]

I’ve just shared a brand-new draft on StoryOrigin, and a little heads-up: it’s not finished yet. This is just the opening part of a bigger story I’m working on. But I’d love to know at this early stage if the style is working for you.

The vibe is unapologetically erotic — Male POV, FFM threesome, plenty of heat, and a playful mix of femdom/femsub. It’s very smutty, very raw.

Anyone wants to peek at it and tell me a few things?

• What grabbed you and what didn’t
• Whether the descriptions feel lush or a bit too much.
• How the femdom/femsub dynamic comes across.

If you’re in, here’s the link to jump in
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/0a36fbde-00e3-4c21-a811-4c354071b110

I need to pay money so I can be a beta reader? I tried to create an account and it asked for $8.33 a month.

 

[NinaSloane]

Hmmmm interesting. Would you consider having a male voice actor record it for you?

Thank you for the offer, but this project is mostly for male readers, and I don’t think they’d enjoy having a male voice narrate porn to them Still, I'll keep you in mind for my future projects!

 

[NinaSloane]

I need to pay money so I can be a beta reader? I tried to create an account and it asked for $8.33 a month.

Nooo!!! You don’t have to pay anything — beta reading is totally free!
Click the link > click Request beta copy > fill the form > let "Set up an author profile?" as "No" > confirm email > confirm requesting beta copy.
That's all, once you do, I'll see your application and approve. Nothing to pay for at all!

 

[dirk2024]

Nooo!!! You don’t have to pay anything — beta reading is totally free!
Click the link > click Request beta copy > fill the form > let "Set up an author profile?" as "No" > confirm email > confirm requesting beta copy.
That's all, once you do, I'll see your application and approve. Nothing to pay for at all!

Ok, done.

 

[NinaSloane]

Ok, done.

Approved! As for what I am looking for, there will be questions after each chapter

 

[NinaSloane]

Ok, done.

Just checking: you should have received the link to the book via email

 

[dirk2024]

Just checking: you should have received the link to the book via email

Yes I have it now.