NinaSloane
Writer
- Joined
- Jun 20, 2025
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I’ve just shared a brand-new draft on StoryOrigin, and a little heads-up: it’s not finished yet. This is just the opening part of a bigger story I’m working on. But I’d love to know at this early stage if the style is working for you.
The vibe is unapologetically erotic — Male POV, FFM threesome, plenty of heat, and a playful mix of femdom/femsub. It’s very smutty, very raw.
Anyone wants to peek at it and tell me a few things?
If you’re in, here’s the link to jump in
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/0a36fbde-00e3-4c21-a811-4c354071b110
The vibe is unapologetically erotic — Male POV, FFM threesome, plenty of heat, and a playful mix of femdom/femsub. It’s very smutty, very raw.
Anyone wants to peek at it and tell me a few things?
- What grabbed you and what didn’t
- Whether the descriptions feel lush or a bit too much.
- How the femdom/femsub dynamic comes across.
If you’re in, here’s the link to jump in
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/0a36fbde-00e3-4c21-a811-4c354071b110
