Waitresses in gentlemans club used as sex slaves

[mrangry]

An idea which I have just had is where three girls have just finished university and have left with huge student debts. All three have been through college together and have become good friends.

They are all the same age, about 21/22, and all are nice, intelligent, well brought up middle class girls. They are also very attractive, similar figures, curvy and busty, UK size 10 with big boobs, 34F. All are very pretty and fairly inexperienced sexually.

Their search for work leads to an advert for waitresses in a private members club and the salary is amazing so all three apply and are accepted. The club is a secretive society of very rich, powerful upper class gentlemen, who are into sado masochism and the girls have to live in at the location, a large country house, set in its own grounds. THey are given a strict dress code and provided with a smart, sexy uniform of a skin tight pencil skirt, a white blouse with a wing collar and bow tiw, and a short red and gold military style jacket and are only allowed to wear a black suspender belt, black stockings and 6 inch heels.

The members use the girls to take out all their frustrations on and treat them brutally, whippings, strappings, canings are very frequent, followed by gang bangs, bukkake etc etc

At first, the girls are shocked and horrified, but find themselves getting really turned on, even though they cry their eyes out each time they are belted and thrashed.

Any good, or a bit too 50 shades?

 

[Dutchsiska]

Or the college girl works as a waitress in a gentlemen's club and hopes to marry a millionaire......????

 

[Carnevil9]

I like it. It can work as a series of simple stroke stories. Or, if you are ambitious enough, it can explore character development as the girls discover their inner perversions and preferences.

 

[RuzieD]

I like the idea. It is a fascinating premise.

I am imagining a bit of Stockholm syndrome on parts of the girls. You know, they eventually identify with their captors.

You could even do a good cop/bad cop dynamic going on. On one hand, they're trained to be submissive/slaves which they hate. On the other hand, they also receive other generous, luxurious, treatment besides simply the money. I feel like giving the girls some other psychological motivation to keep going (besides the money) will help add realism to this story.

 

[mrangry]

Ta for the feedback guys. I like the idea of expoloring the psychological aspect as the girls realise that the control and the use and abuse they are subjected to is awakening deep seated desires within them, and the rougher they are treated and more peverted their captors become, the more they like it.

I would start with a few set piece scenarios where the girls are humiliated and punished, perhaps one could be where one girl is ordered to strip then whip one of the others while the men watch and how she would hate whipping her friend, so she does'nt do it hard enough so one or more of the men take over, properly thrash her, then do the same to the girl ordered to whip her in the first place.

Also, the men start to realise that the girls are starting to become excited by the punishment so they tie them up for a day or so so they can't pleasure themselves

 

[RuzieD]

One of these girls needs to get until she whips her friend and likes doing it... that's all I gotta say.

The Chinese had a clever, and remarkably lenient way, to brainwash American POWs during the Korean War. You might want to check it out...

 

[mouthwatering]

One of these girls needs to get until she whips her friend and likes doing it... that's all I gotta say.

The Chinese had a clever, and remarkably lenient way, to brainwash American POWs during the Korean War. You might want to check it out...

tease

 

[Texguy84]

I would suggest making the girls a bit different, one is curvy and endowed, another is short and petite, and the third is an athletic and toned taller girl? Or any combination of physical attributes, it's not really important which.

And personality traits. They've been friends for years, but they are all different in different ways. One is book-smart but a bit naive, another might be a bit of a closeted nympho but introverted in public, the third might be the Alpha Girl but with a hidden sub streak. How does this experience affect their friendship and personalities? Maybe the shy girl is designated as the one to whip and choke the alpha girl as punishment, for example.

 

[silverwhisper]

i like texguy's suggestions. exploring the different psychological responses to the situation can build some good tension that gets explored later, like one of them finding she's a latent domme.

i absolutely agree that the women need to be distinct physical specimens as well. it will also help make writing the sex scenes easier.

ed

 

[mrangry]

See your point and I like the idea of different personality traits. On the physical side, I just picked all three as curvy and busty as that is the type of girl which particularly turns me on.

I was going to have a blonde, and two brunettes.

Do like the idea of girl on girl scenes as well. Perhaps one girl being whipped by another, while the third one is tied up and made to watch?

 

[RuzieD]

I would suggest making the girls a bit different, one is curvy and endowed, another is short and petite, and the third is an athletic and toned taller girl? Or any combination of physical attributes, it's not really important which.

And personality traits. They've been friends for years, but they are all different in different ways. One is book-smart but a bit naive, another might be a bit of a closeted nympho but introverted in public, the third might be the Alpha Girl but with a hidden sub streak. How does this experience affect their friendship and personalities? Maybe the shy girl is designated as the one to whip and choke the alpha girl as punishment, for example.

I like everything that Texas has said. These girls need to have different personality traits. Even something as simple as and adjective and a "role" will do. "The perfectionist athlete" "the confident introvert" "the hedonistic performer..." etc etc.

 

[GorgeousGeekGirl]

Young girls prostituting to rich geezers with jaded tastes: I thought that was the definition of gentlemans club.

 

[jeninflorida]

Great idea but why do the girls need to be captives? Wont the money be addictive?