Voyeurs...

[TAZ]

...try reading "Caught in the Act". Sorry to self-promote but I'd like to get feedback on my first offering.

Thanks,

TAZ

 

[TAZ]

Thanks, Kerrie

Not quite what I expected for feedback but certainly creative criticism is appreciated. Journalist major or just English major? Either way, I will take your advice into consideration when writing the next one. I always thought I had a pretty good grasp of writing, guess I'm rusty!

Thanks again

TAZ