Virgin seeking editor

mellowgyrl

Really Really Experienced
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I've submitted one story (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=330868), and that was a huge step for me. It wasn't as well received as I'd hoped but by that same token it wasn't near my best work and was submitted as a "feeler" if you will to see if I could write (like I think I have the potential to). I did receive positive feedback including suggestions for me to seek an editor to catch my gramatical errors and general proofreading. While I don't want a re-write by any means I am open to help with plot development and overall flow of the story. All improvements and suggestions are welcomed with open arms. I am not sure what genre my stories fit, somewhere around erotic couplings, mature, and romance is my best guess but I could very well be wrong. The story I'm looking to be edited (not the one linked above) is around 10K words.

Please, please, please help this virgin become experienced...
 
mellowgyrl said:
I've submitted one story (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=330868), and that was a huge step for me. It wasn't as well received as I'd hoped but by that same token it wasn't near my best work and was submitted as a "feeler" if you will to see if I could write (like I think I have the potential to). I did receive positive feedback including suggestions for me to seek an editor to catch my gramatical errors and general proofreading. While I don't want a re-write by any means I am open to help with plot development and overall flow of the story. All improvements and suggestions are welcomed with open arms. I am not sure what genre my stories fit, somewhere around erotic couplings, mature, and romance is my best guess but I could very well be wrong. The story I'm looking to be edited (not the one linked above) is around 10K words.

Please, please, please help this virgin become experienced...

Umm, oh. sorry. From the the slugline I took this as some sort of personal offer.
 
mellowgyrl said:
I've submitted one story (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=330868), and that was a huge step for me. It wasn't as well received as I'd hoped but by that same token it wasn't near my best work and was submitted as a "feeler" if you will to see if I could write (like I think I have the potential to). I did receive positive feedback including suggestions for me to seek an editor to catch my gramatical errors and general proofreading. While I don't want a re-write by any means I am open to help with plot development and overall flow of the story. All improvements and suggestions are welcomed with open arms. I am not sure what genre my stories fit, somewhere around erotic couplings, mature, and romance is my best guess but I could very well be wrong. The story I'm looking to be edited (not the one linked above) is around 10K words.

Please, please, please help this virgin become experienced...

Very sweetly worded and thank you for the link to your story!

I wish I had time to help but there are many good volunteer editors around here who do. Check out the volunteer editor information and bump this thread every so often.

Good luck.

:rose:
 
mellowgyrl said:
I've submitted one story (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=330868), and that was a huge step for me. It wasn't as well received as I'd hoped but by that same token it wasn't near my best work and was submitted as a "feeler" if you will to see if I could write (like I think I have the potential to). I did receive positive feedback including suggestions for me to seek an editor to catch my gramatical errors and general proofreading. While I don't want a re-write by any means I am open to help with plot development and overall flow of the story. All improvements and suggestions are welcomed with open arms. I am not sure what genre my stories fit, somewhere around erotic couplings, mature, and romance is my best guess but I could very well be wrong. The story I'm looking to be edited (not the one linked above) is around 10K words.

Please, please, please help this virgin become experienced...

Hello Mellow and welcome to the EF. :rose:

One of our super editors should be along shortly to give you the help you're requesting.

Thank you for the link to your story also, it'll help potential editors to have an idea as to what kind of writing you do.

Don't hesitate to bump your thread once in a while if you don't get any replies, also, make sure you can receive PMs as most editors will probably want to contact you that way at first.

Enjoy the ride, don't feed the trolls and most importantly, don't forget to have fun.
 
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