Venue problem that I need help with

MagicFingers

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I'm writing a story, chapter 3 to be exact, and am having trouble comming up with a good place for a young man and woman to have good, hot, loving, caring sex. They are 18 years old.

The problem is that it must be somewhere where her brother can be nearby, like no more than 20-40 yards(meters) away.

I have used their home a couple of times, once where HE got his while the sister was nearby. I hate to keep using their house.

I have thought of a cabin by the lake or in the mountains, but really want to save that for the next, or later chapter, where 4 people might get together.

And I thought of a drive-in theater, but the car setting is not right for them. Besides, many cannot relate to the things that used to happen in drive-ins.

Any ideas from all you smart people will be greatly appreciated.
 
MagicFingers said:
I'm writing a story, chapter 3 to be exact, and am having trouble comming up with a good place for a young man and woman to have good, hot, loving, caring sex. They are 18 years old.

The problem is that it must be somewhere where her brother can be nearby, like no more than 20-40 yards(meters) away.

I have used their home a couple of times, once where HE got his while the sister was nearby. I hate to keep using their house.

I have thought of a cabin by the lake or in the mountains, but really want to save that for the next, or later chapter, where 4 people might get together.

And I thought of a drive-in theater, but the car setting is not right for them. Besides, many cannot relate to the things that used to happen in drive-ins.

Any ideas from all you smart people will be greatly appreciated.

Without reading I am going to be stabbing in the dark a litle here but:

The locker room after school?

The local "make out spot" ?

A nice secluded opening in the woods?

those come redaily to mind.

-Colly
 
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Colleen Thomas said:
Without reading I am going to be stabbing in the dark a litle here but:

The locker room after school?

The local "make out spot" ?

A nice secluded opening in the woods?

those come redaily to mind.

-Colly
Thanks, Colleen. Those gave me some ideas.
They have actually just graduated from high school and are out for the summer. They live on a modern farm in Nebraska. A lightening strike has made the brother and sister sexual empaths. It's exciting and is working well. (At least they are turning ME on.)
 
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MagicFingers said:
A lightening strike has made the brother and sister sexual empaths.
What a great idea. How about the barn? Is there a woods? Up against a big old tree is good, and the brother can hide behind another.

best, Perdita
 
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MagicFingers said:
They live on a modern farm in Nebraska.

Some farm related suggestions:

Down at the "Swimmin' Hole"

Any of several possibilities at the county fair -- In a game booth, in a stall at the show barn, atop a stalled Ferris Wheel, under the stands at the rodeo grounds, etc.

In a newly plowed field while the brother plows the neighboring field.

Anywhere in the Barn, but especially in the hayloft.

Also most any recent high-school graduate scenario:

Under the stands or in the locker-room at a football game.

Sneaking into a classroom for a quicky during a school play performance, Open House, or basketball game.

A late night rendevous on the fifty-yard line.
 
Thanks, Perdita & WH

Perdita - Against a tree - That brought a smile because there was a long and good thread called "Tree sex" on the How To forum, I believe. It's a good thread, or was.

P & WH - The Barn could work. Yes, nothing like a nice hay loft.

Ah, yes, the old swimmin' hole - been there, done that, remember that!

Any of several possibilities at the county fair -- In a game booth, in a stall at the show barn, atop a stalled Ferris Wheel, under the stands at the rodeo grounds, etc.

This was funny because that's where the "problem" all started!
(Did you read my story? lol)
I forgot that the fair could still be going on, and they could return to the scene of the crime, so to speak.

Good suggestions.
Any more, please?
 
Don't know if this fits in a farm scenario but as a younger woman I had some pretty fine times with my boyfriend in a caravan parked on his parent's property. It was disused for much of the year until his folks went on their annual trip to somewhere. Is a caravan a trailer in the States? The same boy had access to his Dad's big old wooden boat moored close by in the little port...we went fishing many times. I don't think his parents ever really knew how well they contributed to our relationship. :)
 
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MagicFingers said:
was funny because that's where the "problem" all started!
(Did you read my story? lol)
I forgot that the fair could still be going on, and they could return to the scene of the crime, so to speak.

No, I haven't read your story -- yet.

Even if it's been a week or so since the "problem" began and the County Fair has closed down, there's always the State Fair, which usually follows the County Fairs by a months or so, or almost any event that might be held at the fairgrounds.

Perhaps there's a traveling carnival or circus making a stop nearby that can substitute for the Fair.
 
A Camper or Motorhome

herecomestherain said:
Don't know if this fits in a farm scenario but as a younger woman I had some pretty fine times with my boyfriend in a caravan parked on his parent's property. It was disused for much of the year until his folks went on their annual trip to somewhere. Is a caravan a trailer in the States? The same boy had access to his Dad's big old wooden boat moored close by in the little port...we went fishing many times. I don't think his parents ever really knew how well they contributed to our relationship. :)
Sounds like a caravan is a camper or motorhome, depending on the size. That is a great idea! I think I can use that in the upcomming days of the story.
And the boat is a great idea. A cabin cruiser with comfort and privacy.
Thanks.

WH - They became empaths when sheet lightning struck as they were at the top of the Ferris Wheel at the county fair the week before. Since they were touching each other, and they are twins, well...

I grew up a mile from the state fairgrounds in Ala, so I'm very familiar with all the events, buildings, and things that do and can happen there. Attended the Kiddieland which was open all spring to fall, and the car races at the grandstand (BIR) every Sunday. I could still get the whole gang back there for some quickies!:D

I have decided on the barn for now. Mel and Jim are already there and started discovering each other. But all the other suggestions will keep everyone occupied for a while.

Thanks for all the help, and if anyone else has any more suggestions, feel free to post them. They will be welcomed.
There were several problems making this story work and venues were one of them.
 
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