Vampire house

[loquere]

It's just a a faint idea.

It's an old university campus with a Vampire sorroity. The soririty girls there never really date men they lure them in and drain them, or they make them their slaves to fullfill there sexual and feeding urges, they never turn men into vampires. (Elightened feminists I guess)

A senior student and sorority President for vampire house Laura, is walking back from the library late one night. When she stops for a smoke a werewolf attacks her. Henry A nerd watching the stars by telescope see's the attack and rushes in to save Laura, who he knows well from their Labs together. Henry's stupid distraction allows Laura time to escape.

She is about to leave, however the werewolf nearly rips henry in half before Laura finaly returns the favour and saves him. She finds herself toughed that he'd risk his life to save her. So she breaches sorority rules and turns him. Henry becoming the first male vampire.

Henry wakes up not in a hospital but in, Vampire house sorority. He is not in any pain. he remebers being attacked but can't find any wounds, he also finds he dosent need glasses and his breathing has improved.


Laura avoides the truth and tells him he's been resting for a week and she has all the notes from missed classes. When he starts asking questions about what happened. She kisses him and startes taking off his clothes as they making love. There cold bodies heat up during the love makeing. He starts to see what she see's and he jumps off of her in fear. Then the rest of the Vampire sorority girls come in to welcome their new brother. he has sex with each one of them as part of his historic welcoming.

 

[loquere]

No one likes this?

I changed it up after I did reassearch. Laura, and Henry are both pre-med students.
Laura is friends with Henry, who has feelings for her. She shuts him down eveytime saying, "I'm not ready for a relationship let's be freinds."

She's said that for four years, there senior students now. Their working in the lab alone when Henry cuts himself bad. He bandedges it up but the hospital is an hour away. He's not going to die from it, but Henry looks like he's in pain.

Laura' has learned to control her blood lust, and she likes Henry more than he knows, she goes away and drops a drop of her vampire blood into cranbery juice.

Henry who is prepared to drive to the emergency room finds himself heeled. He finds it odd and wonders if Laura whose doing some secret research has some sorte of cure she gave him.

Later that night he's watching the stars from a telescope near a path, that coincidentaly Laura uses to get home to her vampire sorority home.

She's attacked by a were wolf. Henery rushes in distracts the werewolf at which the werewolf kills him. Laura then kills then werewolf.

Laura rushes to Henry's side where she feels his lifeless body, then she senses a change in him. Becvause of the blood she gave him earlier he's begining tonturn into a vampire.

he wakes up a few days later in his apartment. She can't bring him back to the sorority it's aginst the rules to turn men. Relationships with men are frowned on except for feeding.

 

[loquere]

No biters? Okay, shelved.

 

[MatthewVett]

No biters? Okay, shelved.

Ba-dum tsh!

 

[loquere]

Ba-dum tsh!

AhhhhaHHHH got yeah the south shall ride again.

Drum sets are a poor investment, I'm a fiddle kinda guy!

 

[dale124]

Well, let's put it this way. It's a good enough idea that there is already a series of books called Vampire Sorority Sisters.

 

[loquere]

Well, let's put it this way. It's a good enough idea that there is already a series of books called Vampire Sorority Sisters.

On Literotica?

 

[MatthewVett]

I think it could work as a story, just not my cup of tea. I guess the hook would be what happens next. Does he use his newfound powers for personal gain, or to help others? What will the other vampires do when they find out? Why are werewolves attacking vampires? Is there a turf war going on? I definitely think you could take it to a good place.

 

[loquere]

I think it could work as a story, just not my cup of tea. I guess the hook would be what happens next. Does he use his newfound powers for personal gain, or to help others? What will the other vampires do when they find out? Why are werewolves attacking vampires? Is there a turf war going on? I definitely think you could take it to a good place.

-It would follow the stream of the second post, and my other thread. lI killed the orgy idea, Laura hides him from the other girls.

-Prior to everything Laura liked Henry the way he liked her but forced him away to save him, until he was accidentaly turned into a Vampire. Laura and Henry then becomes lovers.

-I want to make it grounded and real, the powers don't come in to play and niether will the werewolfes. If it's written it needs to be tight and compact under my time restraints. However a continued theme will be the reason the sorority was founded with this college 200 years ago(college was originally a womans college.

The founder who is in slumber in the basement, founded the sorority as a safe place for new female vampires. They are to empowerthemselves free of men. So they use men for blood and sex, but they don't date them. They keep the emotional at bay and keep control. Laura is creating a synthetic blood so that her sorority sisters don't have to bleed men and use them any more, she wants equality. This clashes with the foundrs mantra, sparking an intercampus civil war. I guess in a further chapter or if I have time which I doubt the werewolves can come on Laura's side. The original attack was randomn.

 

[loquere]

Coauthor I need one.

So I write up a section of this story, probably over 3000 words. After Naoko Smith says lets work together. So I send it to her and a week goes by and she finds the most rediculouse busheleauge bat ape shit crazy reasons to not add a thing and waist my time. Sending me a paragrAph that makes no fucking sense, in context. Then a week goes by and I find out she still hasn't read my story supposedly she's been moping her floor the whole time. Saying my inbox gets filled. Like I'm ridiculously pissed she comes up with excuses rather than.... You know what I'm gonna smoke a cigar.

-The only way this is getting published is if I have a coauthor. I am leaving for a set of meetings tonight spread out over the whole of next week. So if you could get back to me by tommorow, if you interested I'll email you the story.

-
Loquere

 

[MatthewVett]

So I write up a section of this story, probably over 3000 words. After Naoko Smith says lets work together. So I send it to her and a week goes by and she finds the most rediculouse busheleauge bat ape shit crazy reasons to not add a thing and waist my time. Sending me a paragrAph that makes no fucking sense, in context. Then a week goes by and I find out she still hasn't read my story supposedly she's been moping her floor the whole time. Saying my inbox gets filled. Like I'm ridiculously pissed she comes up with excuses rather than.... You know what I'm gonna smoke a cigar.

-The only way this is getting published is if I have a coauthor. I am leaving for a set of meetings tonight spread out over the whole of next week. So if you could get back to me by tommorow, if you interested I'll email you the story.

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Loquere

And this is part of the reason why I never work with others while writing.

 

[loquere]

And this is part of the reason why I never work with others while writing.

I now know. But I would have never written anything without the belief that i had a partner. I dont have the time to go it alone anymore.

 

[loquere]

Mission Acomplished

http://www.literotica.com/s/vampire-sorority

This is the end result, of my above rants

 

[LadyVer]

http://www.literotica.com/s/vampire-sorority

This is the end result, of my above rants

I like the way the story turned out. Glad you decided to email submissions in the future though.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

On Literotica?

No, in real life.

 

[loquere]

No, in real life.

What?

 

[loquere]

No, in real life.

Whhhhaaa you talkin about?

 

[LadyVer]

Whhhhaaa you talkin about?

google Vampire Sorority Sisters.

 

[loquere]

google Vampire Sorority Sisters.

No... I am content.

 

[Carnevil9]

http://www.literotica.com/s/vampire-sorority

This is the end result, of my above rants

Nice job! Can't wait for more chapters. I like the little "mythology" and backstory that you have created.

As to the scene break issue, I always use a row of stars (******) to separate scenes. It seems to publish well.

 

[loquere]

Nice job! Can't wait for more chapters. I like the little "mythology" and backstory that you have created.

As to the scene break issue, I always use a row of stars (******) to separate scenes. It seems to publish well.

Yeah I've been telling Lady V, I've just started a new job. I'm submitting two other stories and for the near future I don't know when, those will be my last. I've been flirting with the idea of submitting my jot-form ideas.

 

[loquere]

Nice job! Can't wait for more chapters. I like the little "mythology" and backstory that you have created.

As to the scene break issue, I always use a row of stars (******) to separate scenes. It seems to publish well.

I would like somone to show me this combined paragrph.

 

[Carnevil9]

I would like someone to show me this combined paragraph.

Here's one. I seem to recall a few others too:

Laura rolled her eyes and took a long gulp of blood as Sarah looked on. Henry opened the door to the lab. He knew Laura was already there; the lights were on, the equipment was humming in the background, and the smell of Laura's favorite blend of coffee, Peppermint Bite, reminded him of Laura.

 

[loquere]

Here's one. I seem to recall a few others too:

Well Crap; I'll look into it.

 

[loquere]

That's odd the document I copied from had the sentences separated. Just in case, I submitted my other story using an attachment it's probably going to take 2 weeks now.