Validation for "On the Road"

enjuedevi88

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Okay.
So it was my first shot at writing adult fiction. (It's called "On the Road" if you want to check it out.) I know it's shoet. I know the characters are flat. I know theres' nothing unusual to set it even as a contender against some of the other excellent work I've seen on this site.

So, all you gurus and good erotic writers out there, join hands to lift a first timer to your hallowed halls of interesting erotica and help me find a good topic to peruse for you all to read and enjoy!
Carl West, if you're out there...Dixon Carter Lee, can you hear me...Laurel, where am I? :)
Love,
enjuedevi
 
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