The_Commander
@MahalaErotica
- Joined
- Jun 24, 2020
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Greetings from Japan... Long time author (only wish I could have been more consistent in my younger years) and first time poster here.
The reason for this post is to sound out and seek feedback on world building. I am presently retired here in Japan, and in my previous life, was a navy intelligence officer and a real life Lt. Commander. Thus I have a lot of PowerPoint skills that were, up until this week, remaining stagnant, until it hit upon me that I could actually help readers visualize a plot location, which in my stories is usually the fictional country of Kukuanaland, in what in real life is the real world Congo province of Lualaba. The idea for Kukuanaland for my stories comes from the H.Rider Haggard novel "King Solomon's Mines". I find the fictional Africa to be a wonderful setting for stories (in the real though, well, Africa is not pleasurable setting) because much of it is an unexplored setting, not just in erotica, but even in normal fiction. Which brings me to my next piece of world building, and that is the Mahala fruit (though I have sometimes referred to it as a plant or flower), with potent aphrodisiac properties that, in my stories, are usually found in wine, and which also has been weaponized by the Soviets, in the form of Mahala X and Zeta, with Zeta being at present the most powerful. Of course, in Africa I intend to draw all my heroines to the underworld, where time will essentially stop in the real world for them, so that when they return, no one will know they were gone. It's in the underworld where the non-human erotic kicks in, though on the surface in Kukuanaland, because of both the Soviets past experiments and the radiation mutations to the fauna and populace, there is non-human danger lurking for all the heroines when they stumble off the safe path and are led by the evil scientists and villains down perilous paths, like Lake Moreau, where the aquatic life and fauna have taken on a life of their own.
Love to hear any feedback
The_Commander
The reason for this post is to sound out and seek feedback on world building. I am presently retired here in Japan, and in my previous life, was a navy intelligence officer and a real life Lt. Commander. Thus I have a lot of PowerPoint skills that were, up until this week, remaining stagnant, until it hit upon me that I could actually help readers visualize a plot location, which in my stories is usually the fictional country of Kukuanaland, in what in real life is the real world Congo province of Lualaba. The idea for Kukuanaland for my stories comes from the H.Rider Haggard novel "King Solomon's Mines". I find the fictional Africa to be a wonderful setting for stories (in the real though, well, Africa is not pleasurable setting) because much of it is an unexplored setting, not just in erotica, but even in normal fiction. Which brings me to my next piece of world building, and that is the Mahala fruit (though I have sometimes referred to it as a plant or flower), with potent aphrodisiac properties that, in my stories, are usually found in wine, and which also has been weaponized by the Soviets, in the form of Mahala X and Zeta, with Zeta being at present the most powerful. Of course, in Africa I intend to draw all my heroines to the underworld, where time will essentially stop in the real world for them, so that when they return, no one will know they were gone. It's in the underworld where the non-human erotic kicks in, though on the surface in Kukuanaland, because of both the Soviets past experiments and the radiation mutations to the fauna and populace, there is non-human danger lurking for all the heroines when they stumble off the safe path and are led by the evil scientists and villains down perilous paths, like Lake Moreau, where the aquatic life and fauna have taken on a life of their own.
Love to hear any feedback
The_Commander
