Upskirts stories

loufielou

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Hi, I'm new here, and have a great upskirt-themed erotic story that I'm currently writing for literotica.com.

I'd just like to know, are there any upskirt stories here? I think they are so sexy, there are not enough upskirt scenes in movies & tv, they just go straight to sex which is a pity.

There are some of my favorites which I shall discuss soon (Liv Tyler comes to mind).


See ya,
loufielou.
 
loufielou said:
Hi, I'm new here, and have a great upskirt-themed erotic story that I'm currently writing for literotica.com.

I'd just like to know, are there any upskirt stories here? I think they are so sexy, there are not enough upskirt scenes in movies & tv, they just go straight to sex which is a pity.

There are some of my favorites which I shall discuss soon (Liv Tyler comes to mind).


See ya,
loufielou.
You could try here:
http://www.literotica.com:81/storie...rds=upskirt&author=&Submit=Search+The+Stories
 
I do have something of an upskirt scene near the end of my Solitary Habits story, which involves the main character riding the subway and getting off on covertly staring up the skirt of an Asian woman sitting across from him.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=85829

This begs the question though: what makes for good written upskirt erotica? It's one of those things where, nearly every guy likes to get a good eyeful whenever he gets the chance (mostly by accident), but what are the elements that would make for a good story based on that activity?
 
Akito01 said:
What makes for good written upskirt erotica? It's one of those things where, nearly every guy likes to get a good eyeful whenever he gets the chance (mostly by accident), but what are the elements that would make for a good story based on that activity?
Nipple slips can be incorperated in the story.
 
I think the eroticism is in the ability to see how much one can see and how far one can go without appearing to be behaving strangely. The better the author can allow for realistic actions that are explicitly sexual without breaking that rule, the better the story would seem.

I think this is the case with most voyeurism stories- my one complaint a lot of times is that they end up being non-voyeuristic. If I ever grew "kahunas" and went to attempt something similar to what is described, I think I would find it more erotic if I didn't get caught and then invited in. I would just think, "What a slut."
 
This could be a good opportunity for a "his and hers" viewpoint story. He is pushing the envelope about how much and how obviously he'll peek; meanwhile, she is pushing her envelope about how much she'll show. In the end, maybe they get together. Or maybe they each just go home alone and revel in how daring they were (or grumble about how chicken they were).......Carney
 
Carnevil9 said:
This could be a good opportunity for a "his and hers" viewpoint story. He is pushing the envelope about how much and how obviously he'll peek; meanwhile, she is pushing her envelope about how much she'll show. In the end, maybe they get together. Or maybe they each just go home alone and revel in how daring they were (or grumble about how chicken they were).......Carney
OMG!
How hot is that?!
Maybe it eventually goes all the way.
"I'll show you mine if you show me yours."
Immature, but believable for virgins.
 
Akito01 said:
I do have something of an upskirt scene near the end of my Solitary Habits story, which involves the main character riding the subway and getting off on covertly staring up the skirt of an Asian woman sitting across from him.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=85829

This begs the question though: what makes for good written upskirt erotica? It's one of those things where, nearly every guy likes to get a good eyeful whenever he gets the chance (mostly by accident), but what are the elements that would make for a good story based on that activity?

This is a very well-written tale, Akito. You were able to build the tension quite well, and the sense of danger and conflict added to the eroticism.

However, I did notice that the story seems to have been accidentally pasted in twice. Could you perhaps edit and fix it?
 
Darla_Darling said:
This is a very well-written tale, Akito. You were able to build the tension quite well, and the sense of danger and conflict added to the eroticism.

However, I did notice that the story seems to have been accidentally pasted in twice. Could you perhaps edit and fix it?

It's amazingly odd that in all this time I'd never noticed that fact! It's been so long, I can't remember the circumstances under which I posted that story. Once a story is up, though, I don't think anything can be done with it apart from asking to have it removed entirely and replacing it with a corrected version.
 
Akito01 said:
It's amazingly odd that in all this time I'd never noticed that fact! It's been so long, I can't remember the circumstances under which I posted that story. Once a story is up, though, I don't think anything can be done with it apart from asking to have it removed entirely and replacing it with a corrected version.

It's actually quite easy! I edited one of my stories before. Here's what it says in the FAQ:

I've re-edited my story and want to replace the posted version with my new edited one. How do I do this?​

No problem! Simply submit the new version as you submitted the old one, only adding the word "EDITED" to the title (ex. "My Sexy Firefighter Ch. 03 - EDITED") so that we know to replace the old text with the new text. We will then replace the original text with the new text. Your story will retain its previous voting score and views.​

It only takes a few days for them to upload the new one.

I've gone and read a few of your stories now, by the way. I really like your work, and I am extremely picky. I hope you continue to submit.
 
Darla_Darling said:
It's actually quite easy! I edited one of my stories before. Here's what it says in the FAQ:

I've re-edited my story and want to replace the posted version with my new edited one. How do I do this?​

No problem! Simply submit the new version as you submitted the old one, only adding the word "EDITED" to the title (ex. "My Sexy Firefighter Ch. 03 - EDITED") so that we know to replace the old text with the new text. We will then replace the original text with the new text. Your story will retain its previous voting score and views.​

It only takes a few days for them to upload the new one.

I've gone and read a few of your stories now, by the way. I really like your work, and I am extremely picky. I hope you continue to submit.


Thanks very much for the heads up and the kind words. I hope to have another story up semi-soon, if I can tear myself away from the other distractions of life to finish what I'd started.
 
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