Up the Ante

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

No, Ante doesn't mean 'butt.'

A guy is flirting online with a girl and decided to meet up at his place to watch a movie. But when his doorbell rings, he finds two cute girls standing there instead of one. The one he knows is smiling. While her unexpected friend is frowning. He soon discovers her overprotective friend is a Beaver Dammer. A female version of a cockblocker. She wants to make sure nothing gets sexual on the date. But what happens when the Beaver Dammer can't keep her hands to herself and her friend finds out? Well, her friend has to Up the Ante.

 

[sirhugs]

by playing strip poker?

 

[Carnevil9]

Lots of ways it could go, but it better end up with lots of sex or you will have some very disappointed readers.

First of all, who decided the Beaver Dammer (BD) had to come along in the first place? Did the First Girl (FG) invite her to protect her from her own uncontrollable urges? Or did the BD insist on coming along because she knows FG has a tendency to overdo it and then regret things later? Or did FG's mother/brother/guardian insist that BD attend the proceedings?

Maybe BD detects a lot of sparks flying between Guy and FG, and knows she is going to lose control. So when FG goes to the bathroom, she drags Guy into the bedroom and sucks his cock like a champ, draining his spunk and defusing his libido? (maybe that's what you meant by "up the ante?") Maybe it's the Guy who goes to the bathroom and BD defuses FG's libido in the bedroom? Either way, we know it isn't going to work.

Eventually, if I were writing it, it would have to end up in a three-way.

 

[sirhugs]

Lo

Eventually, if I were writing it, it would have to end up in a three-way.

of course it would, and should.

 

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

@sirhugs Even though 'Ante' it is a poker term, there is no strip poker involved. Also no 'Poker?' I barely know her jokes either. That would slow down the build-up.

@Carnevil9 I usually do have lots of sex in my stories. But also an engaging plot with humor, seduction, sneakingness, and unexpected twists at the end.
Your first question will get answered early on.
But there is no variation of 'Something about Mary' date scene. Where Dom convinces Ted to jerk off before the date so he won't be nervous or something. But Dom really says that because he is in love with Mary. And doesn't want Ted banging her like a drum.
Some of your guesses aren't far off but I hate to reveal spoilers. You will just have to wait until it is finished and edited.

 

[Carnevil9]

@sirhugs Even though 'Ante' it is a poker term, there is no strip poker involved. Also no 'Poker?' I barely know her jokes either. That would slow down the build-up.

@Carnevil9 I usually do have lots of sex in my stories. But also an engaging plot with humor, seduction, sneakingness, and unexpected twists at the end.
Your first question will get answered early on.
But there is no variation of 'Something about Mary' date scene. Where Dom convinces Ted to jerk off before the date so he won't be nervous or something. But Dom really says that because he is in love with Mary. And doesn't want Ted banging her like a drum.
Some of your guesses aren't far off but I hate to reveal spoilers. You will just have to wait until it is finished and edited.

Fair enough, but I wasn't "guessing" things. I was making suggestions and asking leading questions that any author needs to consider. That's how things work around here.

 

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

Well, you'll be glad to know I've taken all these suggestions and questions into consideration. Even though the idea still only exists in my imagination.
BD wouldn't be upping the Ante by draining him. It would be flipping the card table over and declaring yourself the winner.
The women would be competing sexually with the guy to outdue the other. With each action trying to 'Up The Ante.' I feel like I'm giving away Spoilers now.

 

[Carnevil9]

Well, you'll be glad to know I've taken all these suggestions and questions into consideration. Even though the idea still only exists in my imagination.
BD wouldn't be upping the Ante by draining him. It would be flipping the card table over and declaring yourself the winner.
The women would be competing sexually with the guy to outdue the other. With each action trying to 'Up The Ante.' I feel like I'm giving away Spoilers now.

No problem! Story Ideas isn't about spoilers. It is about various authors bouncing ideas off each other. Sometimes we inspire each other or ourselves to greater heights and depths which result in better stories. Either way, most of the potential readers of the stories aren't in this forum, so there is no need to worry about giving away spoilers. It's all about collaborating to make all of our stories better. I know I've benefited from many suggestions in this forum. Hopefully you can, too.

 

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

I'm begining to wonder if I'm posting in the wrong forum.
I'm new here and find this site a little user unfriendly. Some of the interface is confusing to me. For instance I click on 'home' and it doesn't take me to my home page. You can contact a Editor but there is no way to attach files to send. Like a story to review. I have to go all the way off-site to my normal e-mail to check for a response.
It's not that I'm unwilling to receive suggestion or questions. It's just most of my stories are pretty well planned out. Usually, it's just if someone can make it sound better I'll shameless steal that. With their permission.
I was mostly posting here to see if people would be interested in reading my story ideas and encouragement is always helpful.