Unread story

[SensitiveSuccubus]

Hey all,

I was hoping some of you nice folks could read "The Love of a Huntsman" for me and give me some critical points and feedback. It's been up a while but no one's found it. It's in romance, go figure.

Thanks

 

[Guest]

reedz

Very good, nice romance and straght narative. My only slight to the story is that I didn't understand the reasoning behind the huntsmans reversal of character, I assumed that it was some efforts on behalf of a late wife (al la Clint Eastwood as Money in Unforgiven).

But I liked the story a lot, it took on a Grimms type feel and with a nice will he won't he feel that would have fallen flat outside of an erotic story so this played to the strengths of the genre.

Graham Bell
chickens_chickens_chickens@hotmail.com

p.s. I've nearly sacked people for using "you're" instead of "your". If I ever find the time I'll turn that into a story.